Chapter 3; Hearts were meant to be broken

Self - Esteem

"Taeminnie! Hold onto me! I don't want you to get lost." Onew scolded while pushing around a grocery cart.

"Lost?" Taemin asked, tilting his head to the side. "Hyung! I'm not 5!"

Onew grinned and took Taemin's hand. "I know. I just needed an excuse to get closer to you." Taemin blushed as Onew went behind Taemin and pushed the cart together. Taemin's face was as red as a tomato and it didn't help that Onew was practically breathing down his neck. Onew was moving into his new apartment tonight and Taemin wanted to help. Onew begged told Taemin to stay the night and now they're getting groceries for dinner. Although they got stares from people, Onew didn't give a crap. He was smiling so much you couldn't even see his eyes. An hour of being stuck between Onew and a shopping cart later, Onew was driving down the streets of Seoul, refusing to tell Taemin where they were going.

"Are we there yet?" Taemin asked.

"Almost." Onew grinned. Taemin was scared for his life. Onew was still smiling like an idiot, and Taemin wondered how he can even see. When Onew parked the car, Taemin looked outside the window.

"Is this?"

"That's right! Remember this place? We promised to go here when we saw each other again didn't we?" Taemin stared in awe. He hasn't been here since Onew left. They walked to the middle of the bridge and Taemin ran to the edge and smiled.

"Hyung~ We're missing out on the festival~" Little Taemin cried.

"Don't worry! You'll like it!"

"And we promised Minho hyung we'd be waiting for him" Taemin said, as Onew kept dragging him to God knows where. Taemin never really liked going out in the dark. The only reason he went out was because it was the festival and he came with Minho's parents. The 3 kids ran off on their own and promised to meet their parents at a certain time.

"Here we are!" Onew said happily. Taemin looked around and all he saw were couples snuggling and taking a stroll. 

"........................................what?" Taemin asked, confused. Onew laughed at Taemin's reaction and held his hand as they walked towards the middle of the bridge. 

"Look!" Onew said pointing to the river. Taemin pouted and shook his head. "Hyung! I'm too short!" Taemin said. Onew bent down and patted his shoulder. Taemin gladly climbed up and yelped as Onew stood up. Taemin's eyes widened and leaned forward. "Whoa! Taeminnie! Be careful!" Taemin ignored his hyung and continued to stare. On the river were tons of floating flower lanterns.

"Hyung! It's so pretty!" Taemin yelled.

"I'm glad you like it." Onew said.

"Hyung! Why so sudden? Why today?" Onew smiled and took a step forward. 

"Today was the day I promised you, that when I get back, I would make you my bride." Onew said. Taemin blushed, remembering said memory. He laughed awkwardly and scratched the back of his neck. "That was pretty silly wasn't it?" 

"Taemin...the reason I came back wasn't because of school."

"What are you talking about?" Onew reached into his pocket and pulled out a small black box.

"The reason I came back...was to ask you to be my wife." Onew opened the box to reveal a beautiful diamond ring. All Taemin could do was cover his mouth and stare as Onew got down on one knee and asked:

"Lee Taemin, will you marry me?"

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Minho sighed as he walked around the park. He remembered this place. This was the place where Onew took Taemin away from him. The day that Taemin's heart was snatched from Minho's hands. Most of all, the place where little Minho's heart was ripped out from his chest, thrown on the ground and stomped on.

He looked up at the bridge as he heard people talking. His eyes widened as he saw something he really wish he didn't. 

Within that split second, Minho's heart was shattered all over again. 

Even when he had tried so hard to piece it back together.

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LOLOLOLOLOL CLIFFHANGER!! 

Don't shoot me.

Okay, so, I haven't updated lately as I went down to the states to visit my niece and siblings a couple of weeks ago :P

Derp. This wasn't proofread, so there may be a lot of mistakes. I was just in a rush to write this to get my writer's block out of the way.

Remember when I said I wuold add something with Minho this chapter? Well I did 8D See? -insert trollface here-

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durp. sorry guys, I just came back from the States a few days ago and I had work consecutively ever since I got back. Sorry for the delay :P

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DeerOfTheWind
#1
Chapter 5: But you have to gimmie news on my wall to read it
LotusFleurDeSakura19
#2
Chapter 4: Taeminnie stay with Minho!!! As much as I adore Onew, 2Min forever!!! Sorry Dubu, but Tae is Minho's xD
I like this story and I just started it today, please update quickly...
Emmauk26
#3
OMO, yay their got engaged, so cute; and Minho wtf you were friends with Taemin but left him, now suddenly you want to be friends again, and are hinting that maybe you like him as more than a friend, just coz Jinki's back and their together now, and now you decide that you want him, well tough; I really hope that that OnTae stay together, even when they were kids Taemin favoured Jinki, and if Minho missed Taemin so much, he should have made friends with him, and been there when he needed him, not waited till he saw Jinki asking him to marry him; update really soon, can't wait for more. <3 ;-D
DeerOfTheWind
#4
LOL FAK ONTAE! XD. GO 2MIN!!
boondoks1 #5
omg,,the chong part made me laugh so much,,,minho is so funny when drunk,,,kekekek and if minho's drinking that hard, it only means that he truly misses taemin,,omo,,,minho, make your move,,,kekeke
TFVice
#6
MY FEELS, MY SHIP. *whale noises*

It's probably just me, but in a 2min vs Ontae fic, there's always more people on the Ontae ship. XD But knowing who some authors ship harder, they tend to put in the iceberg. >:D

Anywho~ I'm lovin this. <3
TrollKoriChan
#7
Omo OnTae ALL MY ONTAE FEELS IM SO HAPPY /sobs ugly tears
Very good story written very well cant wait for the next chapter. ^^
boondoks1 #8
omo,,so that is the reason why minho changed,,his poor little heart was broken,,huhu,,my poor baby,,,but minho, don't lose hope, this is now your chance to get taemin back, this is now your chance to say to taemin that you love him before its too late,,,kekeke MINHO FIGHTING, 2MIN FIGHTING,,,kekeke
Emmauk26
#9
OMO OMO OMO OMO; TAEMIN SAY YES, PLEEEEEEEASE SAY YES; YOU KNOW YOU WANT TOO; aagggghhhhh this is just to cute, I love this fic, Onew is just so cute, and their both so adorable, and totally perfect for each other, and Onew came back for Taemin, aarrrhhh, and what a romantic and perfect place to ask him to marry him, somewhere that's so beautiful and full of amazing memories for them both; oh please, please, pleeeease say yes Taemin, you obviously love him, look how he reacted in the store, when Onew was close to him, which was just so adorable by the way, best way to do shopping ever, keke; update really really soon, can't wait for more, I'll be keeping my fingers crossed; GO ONTAE, ONTAE FOREVER. ;-P <3 <3
darkangel265
#10
omg this is hard....aww Onew is such a sweetheart...omo what will Taemin say....ahh my friend you are confusing me lol
well Minho of course ur heart shattered its your fault for not paying attention to Taemin