YOU ALL ARE CHILDREN!!

Do You Remember Me?
(Nalia's POV)
What is up with everyone lately? I mean seriously...I then bumped into someone. I looked up and saw...Jiyong Oppa. "Hi Jiyong Oppa! It's been a while! I missed you." He smiled at me...and kissed my cheeks. I blushed...
"Ah...Oppa."
He winked. "I still like you." I felt something grab my heart...I think this was the first time I saw Jiyong Oppa as a man...Not kidding...So I blushed..."Let's go on a date ok?" I said using my aegyo. He smiled and nodded. He and I went to a cafe when I saw everyone... I went over to them and said, "Hey guys! I have a boyfriend!"
They all screamed, "WHAT?!" in usion...
Seungri grabbed my shoulders and said, "Tell me it's not true!"
Seunghyun Held my hand and said, "SINC WHEN!"
Then Yuri pushed them and said, "Then what we had was fake?! TELL ME MY LOVE!! TELL ME NALIA!!"
I stared at them. "It's Me."
They all stared at each other and looked like they had all been shot in the heart. I screamed, "YOU ALL ARE CHILDREN!! That's why I fell for Jiyong instead of any of you!" I stuck out my tongue and said, "I hope you all can come to our wedding when we have one.
[ten years later]
We had one child his name was Hyun-Woo and we where expecting Soo Young in a few weeks. I loved all my friends but I really did fall for Jiyong...I fell bad for them though.
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I wouldn't be supprised if any one meantioned, or commented, Ending one has a kiss, ending two has holding hands, ending three has only hugging...and the last one has it all LOL Shorter than I thought it would be though. haha...um so anyways the theme was fiesty. xD
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miso26 #1
the story is good i like it the caracter is good too
xLylaPhoenix #2
@BIGBANGENIUS Well ya but Nalia would throw a hissy fit knowing they where lying because this one cut out scene I had that they all did something without her knowing and they lied. She made them swear not to and LOL ya and I'm not in vietnam but they should be awake by now I think. Like the middle of the day. haha. If she threw a hissy fit then no one would win. One she is stubborn. And two she will get back at them for making her angry LOL maybe I'll edit the story and yes the kids but Francis was a bit disgusted one he accidently saw his parents kiss and he was wondering what they where doing until he saw something he shouldnt have seen then a week later she was pregnant with Sang Min LOL so that gives off what they did and Francis found out his parents doing that. So it's a child trauma? No lol. Just something he wish he never saw xD
BIGBANGENIUS #3
i luv da theme fiesty n its funny how evryone fancies her n s goes of wid GD ma final decision is i like da last one i wulda prefered her telin dem n dey say gud we neva liked u anyway LOL dat wulda bin funier
BIGBANGENIUS #4
seunghyuns was kinda short i like da first ending so far and transgender story is creepy n adopted kids am not against transgender and adopted kids but its kinda outa da blue stil like da first one
BIGBANGENIUS #5
thhrd comment to make u smile it was shocking tey kissed vry unexpected and kids wow like it so far
BIGBANGENIUS #6
i dunno wat thgme it is in vietnam but here where i live its 2 30am i cant sleep cuz id rather read fanics i no u might tink am wierd but i luv bigbang to much sleeples nights rnt a worry for me im on scool holdays anyway
BIGBANGENIUS #7
wow tads scary how do u no am readin dis its gud so far and da panda teddy bear moment wen dey where young war adorable oooh i tink TOP likes her but does she like like him bak wana read on ........next chapter n if ter is no comment tad means da story is to gud i quckly wana read more
xLylaPhoenix #8
@korea9153 LOL
xLylaPhoenix #9
@korea9153 yep she reacted like that but didnt say it out loud bvec ause it was rude xD
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