the story is good i like it the caracter is good too

@BIGBANGENIUS Well ya but Nalia would throw a hissy fit knowing they where lying because this one cut out scene I had that they all did something without her knowing and they lied. She made them swear not to and LOL ya and I'm not in vietnam but they should be awake by now I think. Like the middle of the day. haha. If she threw a hissy fit then no one would win. One she is stubborn. And two she will get back at them for making her angry LOL maybe I'll edit the story and yes the kids but Francis was a bit disgusted one he accidently saw his parents kiss and he was wondering what they where doing until he saw something he shouldnt have seen then a week later she was pregnant with Sang Min LOL so that gives off what they did and Francis found out his parents doing that. So it's a child trauma? No lol. Just something he wish he never saw xD

i luv da theme fiesty n its funny how evryone fancies her n s goes of wid GD ma final decision is i like da last one i wulda prefered her telin dem n dey say gud we neva liked u anyway LOL dat wulda bin funier

seunghyuns was kinda short i like da first ending so far and transgender story is creepy n adopted kids am not against transgender and adopted kids but its kinda outa da blue stil like da first one

thhrd comment to make u smile it was shocking tey kissed vry unexpected and kids wow like it so far

i dunno wat thgme it is in vietnam but here where i live its 2 30am i cant sleep cuz id rather read fanics i no u might tink am wierd but i luv bigbang to much sleeples nights rnt a worry for me im on scool holdays anyway

wow tads scary how do u no am readin dis its gud so far and da panda teddy bear moment wen dey where young war adorable oooh i tink TOP likes her but does she like like him bak wana read on ........next chapter n if ter is no comment tad means da story is to gud i quckly wana read more

@korea9153 LOL

@korea9153 yep she reacted like that but didnt say it out loud bvec ause it was rude xD