Hm... I Might Like This Country More Than I Thought by SuJuELF14

Title (1/5)

The title is simply too long. Long titles usually spoil what the story is about. From this, I can easily tell that the main character will not like the country, but will gradually like it as she goes through the obstacles in her life. Titles like these will be ignored by some because they aren't curious enough to know what the plot is about.

Appearance (4/5)

The appearance gives out a good enough mood. It gives off a rom-com mood, but I feel like there isn't enough comedy but more romance in the story compared to the poster + background.

Description/Foreword (7/15)

Your description is fine. It gives off the description of your story.

Your foreword, however, is not. Forewords are meant to give some kind of author's note (like why you wrote this story, how you were inspired, etc.) or a prologue or anything that will interest the readers without spoiling too much. Character descriptions are usually put in the foreword, but they are a sign of weakness. It shows the readers that you are unable to show your character's characteristics and would rather tell them their personalities. 

Plot (10/25)

To be honest, this is like a Cinderella story. Girl has two evil step sisters and step mother, goes to a dance, loses some kind of object, and finds love. The only twist it has is that it's more modern and has more complications. In addition, this story reminds me a bit of a movie I watched: Another Cinderella Story. Heard of it? The movie's plot and your plot is kind of similar: 1) both female characters looses an iPod and 2) both female characters had to clean up the mansion but got their friend to help them out.

Characters (5/15)

Your characters are also very much like the Cinderella story. If I look around on AFF for any Cinderella-types of stories, they usually have the same char