A broken Heart

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My second Fan fiction:D I haven't finished my first story yet but this idea is stuck with me I have to start writing it. So this one might take long to update since Im yet to finish the other but anyway hope you like it~  please subscribe:)

Warning: There will be curse words.

 

Goo Suji is a poor and hardworking humble girl. She has two best friends Kim Ji hee and Ahn Daniel. She lives her life for dancing and loves to spend time with her parents and freinds. She has the best life she could ever want. But when she meets him for the first time in years things begin to crash and everything around her starts to burn. What will she do when she loses everything important to her and the only one left is the one who took it all away. Will she ever be able to smile again? How much revenge will she need to get back at the one who took her life away? And how far will she go to get?

Foreword

Characters:

Goo Suji- Mrs. Sunshine. 17. Goo Suji is a girl who loves to help others. Always wears her hair down. Her passion is dancing and lives in the ghetto but is very well respected because of her father. Has two best friends Ahn Daniel and Kim Ji hee. Niel calls her jelly and they both love to . She's never without a smile. Never had a boyfriend. Niel is the only person who knows how to annoy her. Loves Lee Minho ( korean actor)

Kim Ji hee- 17. Tough Innocent Chick. Kim Ji hee is a very innocent girl. She loves to joke around and mess with Suji but Mostly Niel. She is also a dancer and has known Suji since pre school. She is nice to everyone but gets annoyed easily and isn't afraid to teach somone a lesson when she has to. Constantly eats but never gains weight. Likes ponytails. Has a secret crush on Niel.

Ahn Daniel- Cold Warm harted clown. 17. Ahn Daniel is a cute funny guy that prefers to be called Niel. He has known suji since she was born but they tell everyone it was since preschool. Always finds a way to get to Suji and Ji hee. He has an addiction to junk food and messes with Suji. He's very good at reading body language. Is only cold to people he hates and is very protective when it come to Suji and Ji hee. He is part of the reason why Suji never had a boyfriend. Has a brother named Jonghyun. Is very outgoing and looks around for a boyfriend for suji. His parents died ten years ago and Is in love with both Suji and Ji hee. Dances, sings, and writes songs.

Jonghyun- Mysterious Heart. 19. Jonghyun is a sweet quiet guy who never really came out of the house since his parents passed away unless he had to go to the store. He is not much older then Niel but he has been taking care of him after that day. Niel is the only one he talks to besides the store clerk. Suji thinks he is just a piece from heaven and calls him heart. Though he is very mysterious and to himself. He is very different from Niel and falls in love with Suji. Can sing too.

Choi Minho- New pretty boy. 17. Choi Minho is a talkative yet not annoying type of guy. He is very outgoing and shares a passion for Dance. He is the new kid in town and instantly gets along with Suji, Ji hee and Niel. Niel thinks he is the perfect guy for Suji and often sets them up. He has a rough past and begins to get a little mysterious when he gets caught up in some bad things. He sings and is secretly rich. Falls for Suji.

Minji, Dara, and Bom- Oueenkas. 17. Very cold towards Ji hee and Suji. Minji had a crush on Niel since kindergarden. Niel hates their guts. Minji is the most talkative one and she is very jealous of Suji.

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We stare at the front door in question before walking closer to the house. "Appa." I call steping inside but no answer and no sight of him. "Appa." I call again but only recieve silence. I look around into the kitchen but no one. Weird...he's always in here..."Everything's clear here." I yell out to Ji hee informing her my Appa wasn't in the kitchen. "Suji there blood here." I turn my head quickly into Ji hee's direction suddenly becoming worried as the worst thoughts begin to take over my mind. We stare to each other in silence. I could tell she new what I was thinking. We both run up the stairs quickly looking around. "Appa!" I call out in a yell this time. I slam open the door to the bathroom and freeze. I slowly take one step and fall to my knees, my eyes beginning to burn at the sight of his still body laying in the death of his bathtub. Every drip of his drained bloody throat staining the burning warmth of the water. I cry at the sight of his fried skin and fingerless hands. Who could do this? Why? Why would they do this to me? To him. I start to shake looking to my fixed necklace lying on the ground next to what was left of him. He fixed it...He promised he'd fix it...He fixed it..."Thank you." I cried. My heart tearing one more everytime i let at tear fall. "Suji?" Ji hee enters gasping at the sight that teared us both apart. She covered in shock. Tears begining to form at the edge of her eyes. "Go." I manage to whisper between my tears. She runs out quickly ready to call the police. He's gone..I lie down into the wetness of his blood grabbing onto my necklace. Holding it tighter. Pulling it closer to my heart. Never letting  it go. "Appaa." I call through my tears again. My appa is really gone...Appa why'd you leave? Just a little longer..I could've saved you..I shouldn't have left you..I'm sorry appa...I'm sorry.

 

 

 

 

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TheGermCafe #1
I love this story already!!!Please update soon I love both of ur stories!!!\(^O^)/