No One Just Walks Away

Description

Led by Leeteuk, the elite mercenary group Suju has a reputation for getting the job done, whatever it may be.  As such, they have earned many enemies and rivals who are often difficult to defend themselves against.  When their healer Eunhyuk tires of being surrounded by death and having to repeatedly patch up his friends only to send them out again, he leaves with no thought as to the possible consequences.  It then falls to Leeteuk to protect him by any means necessary which proves to be a difficult and dangerous task.

Foreword

Inspired by the words "No one just walks away" I just wanted to write another EunTeuk piece.  I'm working on my description writing abilities (they need some work, I know).  This one's only a little bittersweet so I hope you read and enjoy.  It's set in more of a feudalistic era so you could imagine probably around the thirteenth or fourteenth century, fyi.  There is some violence but nothing too graphic.

 

Submitted to The New Library of recommendation fics.

thelibraryaffilates_zps8d773024.jpg

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
iam_me00
#1
Chapter 1: I love Heechul's character here... Loyal
cheekyone94
#2
Chapter 1: This reminded me of that prank suju pulled on teasing Eunhyuk an Wookie saying some of them were gonna leave. ( Now I want to find an wacth that again)

I like SuJu as mercenary, don't know why I think they fit a lot of different characters. Not manywrite that the healer has it hard. In fact I'm glad you put Eunhyuk pain of being around death.

Since as you already know that I read six point Magic, I knew that you could have a very different take on Heechul from what he shows. Bad but at the same time caring for his friend is great. It make me hope if he wants to leave that there someone willing to stab him but not kill him like he did for Teuk.

That ending made me laugh. Great story again ^_^
Frosty_Maiden
#3
Chapter 1: I really liked this idea. It was so different from usual SuJu stories. I had never considered them in a mercenary type of story...but weirdly it works. I love how Wook and Eunhyuk are basically the crap ones in the group though -_- Poor Wookie.
Heechul is totally bad though, I love it. I hate seeing Heenim done in feminine roles or overly fabulous...I mean yes he is fabulous but he is also surprisingly manly...and my Suju bias *coughs* LOL.

I think its quite long for a one-shot and it may have been easier to read as a two-shot.
I have learnt that a lot of words seems to max people out if you get what I mean?
This is a really original idea though and I loved Leeteuk's position and chemistry as a character in this.
Another great story which I am so pleased to have read! XD
haeimecah
#4
Chapter 1: if only I can rate stories,I'll definitly give this one 10 out of 10.It is so well written.You're such a good writer.Somehow,I don't want it to end.Just keep going and going.Haha.Great story,love it.Write more. <3
RaspberryTaffy
#5
Heechul is pretty versatile, huh....

Good story, very touching and dark and such ^^
I liked it!!!
Lilou_eito #6
The story really is great. I'm glad they made it in the end :D
Loved this <3