Awwww D':

too sad...:( but still nice oneshot!

( T.T)...that's saaaaaaddddd *cries..*

OMG this is so sad... Seriously all your stories are SO GOOD! i love all of them :( To be honest i don't really read one-shots but i found this way too good to miss!

How.....sad. :( <br />
Unrequited Love. It really wasn't familiar to me before. But know that I know it, kinda makes me feel sad.. Anyways, you did a GREAT job as always unnie. :D LOve the story!

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Since you claim that this was written for a writing contest, I think you've done a fairly good job with this. It's not easy to cram a thousand ideas into a one-shot, especially if you think it will work better by going for the multi-chaptered route. Pacing was smooth since the scene shifts didn't jar me so far, although admittedly there were some scenes that could have used a little expounding ^^;; But all in all it was a nice read, light in tone but with an underlying sadness, and halfway through with the theme "unrequited love" in mind, you still can't help but wish for them to be happy even for just a while longer.<br />
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I see you've posted a follow-up to this so I will be reading that as well [although I personally would have preferred this as a standalone but that's just me] ^^ Sorry if this comment is too long for your taste but I hope it's useful somewhat >w<

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Hello ^^ I've read this before it kept slipping from my mind to comment. So I'm here to change that now XD<br />
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I think the real tragedy here is that Yu-Jin never gave herself a chance to love. I guess it's understandable in her case, probably because she's saving Taemin from getting deeply hurt in the end. Humans tend to do this towards people they have come to treasure a lot, after all. However, dying or not, she should have grabbed the opportunity to reciprocate even if her fate has already been set in stone, even if their love would only last for a brief, fleeting moment. Love and loving is not limited to healthy people with long lives; it is for everyone, including her. So even if I understand her intentions and thoughts, I still can't help but find it a bit sad u_u<br />
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On a lighter note, Taemin as a window cleaner somehow evokes an adorable image in my mind X3 I can just imagine him in overalls and a cap smiling that trademark smile of his while wiping windows, ahaha~ XD;;<br />
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For concrit, I've noticed some awkwardly-structured/-worded lines [e.g. <i>cringe my eyes monetarily</i> -- I think "cringe" isn't the right word to use (maybe "narrowed"?), and maybe you mean "momentarily" with the last word? ^^;;] I've also noticed the overuse of the ellipsis sprinkled here and there when a period or a comma could suffice. Last but no the least, please do be careful with your tense shifts ^^

i feel like crying so bad now,<br />
it's so saaaad. D':<br />
i swear, you're such a good writer!