We are in this together...

Hurricane Girl

 

“If you’re in this situation it’s all because of me.”

 

By chance Sora’s friend was kind enough to lie that she was sick and stuck in the toilets when the nightclub’s owner asked where she was. But she had to apologize for the suit she had ruined. After the work she was exhausted as ever. When she got out of the club it was already dawn out. Young teens were going home from their party. There were girls freezing to death because of their racy outfits and the fresh air of the morning; other ones were so drunk that they couldn’t even stand on their legs. And most of them were walking barefooted because their feet were hurting them to much because of their killer high heels. It is always like that every morning when she comes out from work.

But for the first time she was freezing as well. She had to work 2 hours more because she had left for more than an hour, because she had met Kris. She was even too tired to think about what happened the night before. The only thing she wanted now was going home to take a bath and burry in her warm blankets to forget about all this. But it seemed like fate wasn’t with her.

She was standing at the bus stop waiting for the first bus of the morning to come. But someone bumped into her by the back. She almost fell but she was strong. She turned back to see a girl. The girl bowed and smiled to her.

“I’m sorry. I’m clumsy, tired and these high heels are killing me.” The girl apologized with her brightest smile.

Sora opened to tell the girl it was okay but her words chocked in because of what she saw at that moment. Kris who was apparently too drunk to walk by himself was carried by three other guys who looked the same age as him, surely his friends. He was almost unconscious. It was painful to watch. Kris who was always so full of confidence. Anybody was caring about that. He wasn’t the only guy who was driven out of a club, drunk. But she knew him enough to say he was not only drunk. Something was going wrong with him.

They carried him to the luxurious car which was waiting for them in front of the club.

“Be careful to his head!”

Sora almost jumped on the spot. The girl who had just bumped into her earlier was giving instructions to the guys carrying Kris. The girl ran to them and helped them install him in the car.  Then they all get in the car and she saw the girl sitting next to Kris and placing his head on her thighs. He was still unconscious. Sora stayed silent, motionless and amazed, watching what was happening in front of her like she was in a movie. Even when the car had left for a few minutes she was still standing motionless, with a dull stare. She just moved when the bus came.

 

Once at home she took a hot shower and buried under her blankets. She wished she could fall asleep fast but she couldn’t. She was torn between anger and anxiety. She was angry because of how Kris acted yesterday. He was rude and totally disrespectful. After her little “argument” with him last night, she had decided that she would stay away from him. But at the same time, the state in which he was this morning was so worrying. She finally decided that she needed to give him at least one chance to apologize and explain why he acted like that, before she fell asleep.

 

Kris got awakened by the sunlight which entered the room through the curtains. He sighed and burrowed his face in a pillow. He wasn’t able to face a new journey and whatever he could have done the night before. He didn’t remember but he knew that at the moment his memories would come back, he would regret it. The last time he had drunk like crazy, he almost killed himself in a car accident. He just remembered how much he drank last night. He knew how much he was weak to alcohol but last night, he just needed something to make him forget how much he was furious.

“Is sleeping beauty awake now?” a feminine voice said.

He jumped and straightened up. He recognized the voice and it was actually the problem. What was she doing in his room?

“What the hell are you doing into my room? Into my house? Get out NOW because if my mom finds you here she is going to become crazy!” he yelled at her the most furiously he was able to.

The girl didn’t even blink either move. She was just standing in front of his bed, hands on her hips.

“Don’t get angry, your mom isn’t at home now. It’s Saturday and she will be back on the evening. I would never dare doing this to her.”

He even told her about that.

“Okay. But I still don’t get why you are here.”

He got out of bed and found out that he was not wearing his shirt.

“Fine! You entered my life 2 days ago and you come into my room and undress me like it pleases you.”

“Stop acting like a kid. You were sweating like crazy and I wasn’t even the one who undressed you. Your friends did.” The girl retorted.

She was determined on remaining calm despite his bad personality.

“You called… my friends?”

“Do you think I was going to carry you alone?”

“Why did you come to find me at the nightclub first? I never asked for your help!”

“You’re welcome anyway”

He was trying to hurt her so that she would leave him alone but she was more stubborn than he thought.

She is just like him.

“If I get now, aren’t you going to leave as well?” he tried his last card but she was not so influenceable.

“You’re wrong if you think that I’ve never seen a man.”

She crossed her arms on her chest and fixed him. He held the eye contact. He would not lose to her. She seemed like she would not give up as well.

“We are in this together. You’re not the victim here, if so, I’m a victim too.” She said with a serious look on her face.

“I never asked for you to enter in my life.” He retorted.

“I didn’t ask to be involved with you either. If you think I like this situation, you’re all wrong.”

“You seem to love it a lot here in my room seeing me half-.” He laughed.

“I don’t know what kind of guy you are but you’re definitely not my style. But if you want to go on this way, let’s do this. We’re stuck together, I wanted to make it comfortable for the two of us but you’re too immature for that. Let’s meet another time.”

“I’m not meeting you anywhere do you get it?”

“Okay. Then try to avoid me at school if you can.”

“At… school? What?”

“Oh, they didn’t tell you? I’m coming to the same school as you from Monday on. We are going to spend a lot of time together from now on, BROTHER.”

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Here is a new short update. I understand you would have a lot of difficulties to understand what exactly is going on. But you'll surely know with the next chapter. Thank you for your support again!

 

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KimHeeChullie #1
That moment when your name is actually Han Sora .. HAHA <3
Rini6189
#2
Kris and Sora seem to have patched things up nicely between them. Since he was being sincere, she couldn't help but to accept him and drop her cold exterior. He's created a chance to make it up to her by inviting her to go on an outing with him. It sounds like it could be a date depending on the atmosphere. Now they can work towards building a better relationship with each other.

Seoah doesn't seem like such a bad person. She is nice to not want to cause trouble for others and looking to get along with Kris and develop a good brother-sister relationship with him. Her fear of other people might have something to do with her sense of mistrust because of how she grew up. Nobody must've truly accepted her, so she doesn't feel like she belongs or loved. The students in the dance academy warmed up to her just because of her social status. If she's in the same social class as Sora, they would've treated her differently. That must make her feel lonely and depressed inside. Being surrounded by people like that must make it difficult for her to make friends. It wouldn't be hard for her to approach Sora since she's different from the rest of the students in the academy. If they ever get the chance to meet and bond, they could develop a good friendship between them. Those guys who just went up to Seoah are bad news. They do sound _______ed, especially when their leader spoke in that tone of voice to suggest something. Because of her evident surprise at seeing the person, it might be Kris coming to her rescue. She didn't think that he'd care about her to save her from danger since he only showed contempt towards her. If it's not him, it could be Myungsoo or another guy character who hasn't been introduced into the story yet. It's likely that she had met Myungsoo or this other guy before to be surprised to see him show up.
Rini6189
#3
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 3):

Kris was the only family with his father that was left to her.
* The verb that's used twice should be "is" instead of "was."

She felt shadows covering the sunlight which cut her from her thoughts she was so concentrated in to not notice that a band of three guys had approached her.
Correction: She saw shadows blocking the sunlight, which cut her off from her thoughts. She was so focused on her thoughts to not notice that a group of three guys had been approaching her.

one of them said squatting in from of her.
Correction: One of them said, squatting down in front of her.

he was grinning and the other guys behind him was doing the same their hands in their pockets.
Correction: He was grinning and the other guys behind him were doing the same their hands in their pockets.

Come with me I’ll show you around.”
* The conjunction "and" should be added after "me."

“Leave me alone please.”
* Comma after "alone"

It’s going to be fun come on.”
Correction: It’s going to be fun. Come on.”

He was dragging her away from her bag and she tried to free herself from his embrace but she wasn’t strong enough.
Correction: He was dragging her away from her bag and she tried to free herself from his grasp, but she wasn’t strong enough.

Usually since primary school, she had always been the girl scared of everybody; the girl who cried when someone looked at her too intensely.
Correction: Since primary school, she has always been the girl who is scared of everybody, the girl who cries when someone looks at her too intensely.

She had started to yell so that someone would hear but they were a little far from school.
Correction: She had started to yell so that someone could hear, but they were a little far from school.

“Keep calm, I promise you you’ll enjoy the walk.”
Correction: “Keep calm. I promise you that you’ll enjoy the walk.”
Rini6189
#4
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 2):

I will tell you everything you need to know someday but just give me time.
* Comma before "but"

“Down quickly before I put you on detention.”
Correction: “Come down quickly before I put you in detention.”

Kris said returning her her bag with his usual teasing smile.
* Comma after "said"

He didn’t wait for her answer for preventing her from saying no and turned his back to her and started to leave.
Correction: He didn’t wait for her answer to prevent her from saying "no" and turned his back on her and started to leave.

Seo Ah first day at her new school was quite awkward.
Correction: Seo Ah's

So at lunch time she went away from school to be alone.
Correction: So, at lunch time, she went away from the school's campus to be alone.

She opened it in front of her so that people would avoid bothering her but she wasn’t reading.
* Comma before "but"

When I heard that I had a brother I took it as an opportunity to start from a scratch.
Correction: When I heard that I have a brother, I took it as an opportunity to start from scratch.

I’m not the judgmental style but I was in a school for rich kids.
Correction: I’m not the judgmental type, but I was in a school for rich kids.

I like to stay at home Saturday night to watch a movie in my bedroom or read a book under my blanket.
Correction: at home on Saturday nights

When she came here, she had believed that she could have a brother-sister relationship with Kris but she couldn’t blame him for being rude to her.
* Comma before "but"

She could understand how much he felt betrayed by his father after discovering that he had a hidden child all this time.
Correction: has

She hated him as well for not telling her the truth at first but it didn’t last long.
* Comma after "first"

She had always been a solitary children and she lost her mother a few months ago.
Correction: child
* Children is plural.
Rini6189
#5
Ch. 10 mistakes (Part 1):

She looked up to see that it was no other than Kris standing there with his hands in his pockets.
Correction: none other than

“I didn’t have choice. I was hungry and when you’re hungry everything is good.”
Correction: “I didn’t have a choice. I was hungry, and when you’re hungry, everything is good.”

He shrugged his hands on his pockets.
Correction: He shrugged and put his hands in his pockets.

“He is going to do like nothing happened on Friday night?”
* The verb should be "act" instead of "do."

“Yeah you should go.”
* Comma after "yeah"

In fact I hoped that I would be able to keep this place private again. But I think that I will have to find another place to spend my lunch time now.
Correction: In fact, I hoped that I would be able to keep this place private again, but I think that I will have to find another place to spend my lunch time now.

She was starting to close her true self again and it was the last thing he wanted.
* It should be "hide" instead of "close."

she stopped packing for a few seconds then acted like she didn’t hear and continued.
Correction: She stopped packing for a few seconds and then acted like she didn’t hear and continued.

“You owe me nothing Kris. What is so a big deal about Friday?”
Correction: “You owe me nothing, Kris. What is such a big deal about Friday?”

Even if I was drunk it is unforgivable.
Correction: Even though I was drunk, it is unforgivable.

She turned her gaze away with her arms crossed on her chest.
* The preposition should be "over" instead of "on."

Even if she could, she had no envy to escape.
* The noun should be "will" instead of "envy."

At that right moment she wanted to die in his eyes depth.
Correction: At that right moment, she wanted to die in his eyes' depths.

I already told you, you owe me anything.
* The word "don't" is missing before "owe."

“It’s not that I don’t want to tell you but I can’t.”
* Comma before "but"
JinChannie
#6
I bet it's myungsoo!
Omo Kris and sora!
wonpokemon
#7
oh snapples, who could it be?
Kris, her half-brother to save her? :O
or a new male entering and becoming her hero?
i'm curious~
but it seems that Sora and Kris seemed to have patch up... kind of nicely~
Aurelian #8
UPDATE PLEASE
paper_planes #9
Chapter3 WHat does Kris want from her OMG
Niel_girl
#10
Kris is the only one who can see how much she is fragile under her cold mask!