House Of Torture

Description

All the guys that wake up and find themselves in SNSD's House of Torture have all cheated on the girls, relationship-wise. Each stage is more deadly than the previous. Only one can go free, the others are all going to be killed. Who is the one who goes free?

Foreword

 

 { Author's Note }

Hello guys! Cheesy here. This is my first time writing a horror fic, and I'm 13, so it may turn out horror-ble. (I know, lame :P) I just watched the horror movie, Saw, and the first chapter is going to be slightly inspired by the movie. (SLIGHTLY, I say) And about the torturing of guys - I love the whole of SMTOWN. I mean whole. I love JYP Nation and YG Family too. I'm not an anti of ANY group, at all. (Im going off topic XD)

{ Prologue }

 

Minho yawned, and stretched out his long arms. As he was still slightly sleepy from that one-night stand at the hotel yesterday, he slumped back into the chair. Wait .. Chair? His eyes flung open, his arms flailing about. He slept in A BED last night. "M-Minho?!" He heard a familiar voice, it definitely belonged to his best friend, Taemin. He looked around and found the boy beside him.

"Hyung! We're both chained to the walls of this damn room with Key, Jonghyun, Onew and random strangers! What the hell is going on?!" Taemin used all his strength to try to break the chains on his left ankle. Alas, the chains were way too strong. "RAAAAGGGGGHHH!" He shook the chains back and forth furiously.

Minho squinted into the fog, looking everywhere, at the strangers, at the floor, at the walls. There was something really suspicious and shiny on the floor. "Taemin! There's a hacksaw right there! Try to reach for it!" He motioned to the lethal weapon. "Use that to cut the chains, and we'll be out of here!"

 

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What do you think? There's a small twist at the part where they try to use the hacksaw .. I'm really excited to write that part! :)

-Cheesy, your favourite 13 year old writer ;) (JK LOL) 

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Kpopized
#1
Chapter 2: *cringe* this is actually pretty creepy. Phew. Keep writing!!
Kpopized
#2
Chapter 1: The things girls will do. Smh lol xD
Moral of the story: don't u dare cheat on her because she can be more vicious than you think
gr8singer
#3
Chapter 2: More give me more...this was amazing!!!! More blood more torture! Bwahahaha!
rainingcho #4
efffffff... i should learn to stop reading horrors at midnight >< god~ this story freaked me out... like- seriously?! cutting their legs off for the chainsaw. Da Fq? anyways, update soon :D
iHeartCheese #5
Yeah, like because she felt bad for him, and didn't want to torture him anymore, so she just let him die, real quick.
ctmgonzaga
#6
wow!! tiffany gave mercy?? so siwon already died? kinda confused about the last part of the story (not the author's note).. i couldn't believe our lovely angels playing this role here 0______0 anyway, nice story and please update soon.
ctmgonzaga
#7
chapter 1 : whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa? so creepy!! my position when reading this was.. my hands on my neck... keke,, im like watching a suspense movie.. though i hate suspense and blood, ill read cause it's interesting.. update soon ^^
turquoise_star8 #8
Seokyu please ...
IHeartTabi #9
Hazel hahah omg , why u no write short thing about me in your foreword . you meanie . i wrote a sentence about you ):

hahahaha ! Anyways , love you xoxo .