I left a message for you about improving. Now, the plot! This chapter was pretty adorable! Poor Key was rejected and Minho's such a blocker T.T I really liked the name poem part! It was a nice touch ^^ Fighting!
Please please please have this edited. Even if you don't bring it to me, see if your auntie or grandfather (the published author - *hint hint*) will look at it first. It is great to be able to weave a tale that will carry others along with your imagination. Not have them stumble back to reality every few words. You are very brave for doing this. Now turn off your light - it is your bedtime!
aw, OnKey!! This is cute so far XD Keep going~ But check for some grammer, spelling errors and don't forget to capitalize ^^ My favorite animal is a tiger~
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