why are you so gorgeous

why are you so gorgeous

"Why is he so gorgeous?" key said to jjong 

They had known eachother from a very young age, their mothers had been close friends since key's mum had delivered Jjong, so they practically grew up together.

"Who is gorgeous?" jjong said with his usual dopey smile.

"You know who" key said with a grin as  he hit jjong on the arm.

"Oooh Jinky-hyung." jjong and Jinky had known eachother from when Jinky's brother was friends with jjong's brother. though they had stopped hanging out when jinky's brother had passed away.

 

"Minho-ah do you think that key would notice me if i wear the red scarf tomorrow?" Jinki said as he noticed Key staring at him.

"Yeah i think he would, but why would you want him to notice you?"

"Well you know how i said i had a crush on a junior, well, key is my crush" 

"Oh, i thought it was Suhyun-ssi from first year." Minho said with an embarrased look.

"No i don't see myself liking her even if she is really pretty and popular"

"Me neither she is a bit too pretty and a bit too popular"

 

Minho and Jinki were almost inseperable they would always go to the toilet together, eat lunch together and when they had seperate classes minho would always create a fuss to make sure he could pick jinki up, just in case he got hurt in any way shape or form (onew sangtae).

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heartykeykeke
#1
I left a message for you about improving. Now, the plot! This chapter was pretty adorable! Poor Key was rejected and Minho's such a blocker T.T I really liked the name poem part! It was a nice touch ^^ Fighting!
KuroAkuma
#2
Please please please have this edited. Even if you don't bring it to me, see if your auntie or grandfather (the published author - *hint hint*) will look at it first. It is great to be able to weave a tale that will carry others along with your imagination. Not have them stumble back to reality every few words. You are very brave for doing this. Now turn off your light - it is your bedtime!
heartykeykeke
#3
aw, OnKey!! This is cute so far XD Keep going~ But check for some grammer, spelling errors and don't forget to capitalize ^^ My favorite animal is a tiger~
SHINee_sangtae
#4
i love bunny rabbits what is your fave animal?