This is the first chapter of my story.

Please listen to this song while reading this chapter :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xgSC2va89zM

Darkness Eyes by DBSK

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Nobody's P.O.V

At the Lee's house...

It is a cold night and inside the living room, you and your mother are seating across each other then your mother says something...

Mrs. Lee : I have something to tell you _______ but this might get you a little bit shock.

you start to get nervous and worry of what your mother will tell you.

Mrs. Lee : well...you know that your appa has a big amount of debt to his friend.

you : why am I involve in this omma?

Mrs. Lee : well...you'll be working as a maid  for your father's friend's son.

you : what? omma...

Mrs. Lee : I hope you understand because I earn a little in working at the market while your brother is earning also a little in China.

you : yes omma, I understand.

Mrs. Lee : you will transfer to JYP High School.

you : omma...what about Sooyoung? she will be all alone since Minhyuk left to go to Japan.

Mrs. Lee : I guess Sooyoung will have new friends and you can visit her during the weekends and vacations.

you : ne omma.

Mrs. Lee : and your father's friend, Mr. Ok will come here tomorrow morning and he will pick you up to move to his son's house.

you : ne omma, I'll start packing this evening.

you just sigh then you stand up and go upstairs to your room.

Inside your room...

you just lie down on your bed and start crying.

Your P.O.V.

why is this happening to me? why my life is like this? It is all appa's fault. If appa will just be a good and hardworking father maybe Donghae oppa will not go to China with Ryeowook oppa, omma will not feel burden with all of the problems that appa cause and I will not be working as a maid for appa's friend's son. I hate this but I must understand our situation now.

Nobody's P.O.V.

After a few minutes...

you stop crying and you decide to call your friend, Sooyoung. so, you get your cell phone and call her...

Sooyoung : yoboseyo?

you : Sooyoung~ah...

Sooyoung notices that your voice is kind of different.

Sooyoung : _______~ah, are you alright? I think you cried, why?

you : I have something to tell you.

Sooyoung : what is it ________?

then you tell Sooyoung everything that your mother told you.

Sooyoung : what? your going to transfer to JYP High and you will move too?

you : ne, I hope you understand.

Sooyoung : I understand.

you : but there will be no one with you.

Sooyoung : don't worry, I'll hang out with Yuri and Seohyun.

you : okay.

Sooyoung : and you must be careful because you know the students there.

you : neh Sooyoung.

Sooyoung : and tell me if that son of your father's friend is not treating you well just call me and he will be dead meat, understand?

you giggle at Sooyoung then you say to her...

you : neh Sooyoung~ah, I will tell you.

Sooyoung : okay, I have to sleep now; goodnight.

you : goodnight Sooyoung~ah.

Then the both of you hangs up after that, you get up from your bed and get your trolley bag

you start packing your clothes and other stuff that you will need.

After a few hours...

you're done packing then you lie down on your bed again.

Your P.O.V.

I hope Mr. Ok's son will be nice to me and not like those men who do bad things to a woman.

I hope he will be nice to me and will treat me equally.

Nobody's P.O.V.

While downstairs at the living room...

your mother is seating at the sofa and waiting for your father.

Then the door opens and your father seats across your mother...

Mrs. Lee : I already told our daughter.

Mr. Lee : what did she say?

Mrs. Lee : she said yes because maybe she thinks her life will better there than here.

Mrs. Lee just stands up and go upstairs to her room while Mr. Lee just sits down feeling all guilty of what he had done to his family.

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