008 Insanity

Inspire Me

Roses are red,

Violets are blue,

I don't own much,

but I own you.

I'll beat you up, and shred your heart to pieces,

This is so you won't leave me.

Don't you dare try to escape from me,

I won't let you go that easily.

Maybe you don't understand my pain,

But my love for you is what drove me insane.

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farquack #1
Chapter 13: last chapter... amazing :DDDDDDDDD
Justagurl
#2
Chapter 12: Hmmmm...
Your poems are dark with a light meaning. They are pretty poems too might I say.
It's funny they are the opposite of mine. Mine are light, shallow, thin but with a deep meaning. We are strange people aren't we? But then the best people are.
I liked your Alice in Wonderland remake. It was strange. But it failed to delight me. I'm sorry, I'm a blunt person. But I think all remakes don't delight me. Maybe it's because I watched Snow White this morning. Or maybe because it was too short. Yes that must be it. I need it longer, more explanations. More detail.
I'm sorry I'm umm talking to myself.
But I do appreciate your drabbles, quotes, and poems. They are wonderful.
You are a very poetic person. Lightreacher. Yes that is what you are.
MIRaclebiased #3
Well I am inspired! But your poems scared me a little... xD I might use one of these chaps to write a fic in the future ^^
immortalevanescence
#4
Woah, scary. Trapped in Wonderland?
It's like Alice of Human Sacrafice from vocaloid. Maybe you've seen it?
Anyways, Rin and Len are trapped in Wonderland; it's a dream; and the dream never lets them go.
babyshinee
#5
I also like the plot in chapter 8th but punishment and vice versa isn't my thing although I can read them still XD
babyshinee
#6
I love the little intro on the 9th chapter too. Seriously, it would be awesome if someone writes a chapter fic out of it :)
babyshinee
#7
I like the poem in chapter 8th! :D
kagaki #8
I like the last chapter :D
immortalevanescence
#9
OMO, really nice ;]
Hope there'll be many more quotes to come <3 :D