Get to No. 1

Description

This is a story based off of the F.cuz MV No. 1 and Tasha's MV Get it In, yes it is another story based off a music video, but i just feel inspired by them that I have to write about it, and this music video really inspired me. Plus it had a kick heroine which is extremely rare in the Kpop world. it's a bit unedited, but i wanted to know what you guys thought of the story, if you see any blatant grammar errors, please message me, k? (yes this is also full of grammar errors)

Foreword

Ran is trying to find her brothers who have been kidnapped, she finds out where they are and goes after the people who took them.

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Ravens
#1
idk why i didnt sub to this earlier ._. mianhae ♥
texlauraloo
#2
Yahh, I love this fic! More more more people should be reading this! your talented!
Cbearz #3
This chapter is great you should have more people read it
Aplusshawolcassi #4
Sorry it took so long to post this, yes english is my first language, i'm just really bad at grammar. and when i write i like to sound formal, it's my style :) thank you so much, your compliment means a lot to me
Midnightfire777
#5
I love your work!! But I'm curious, is English your first language? There's just a lot of run-on sentences.....and a couple grammar errors with the dialogue too.....You might try speaking your dialogue out loud, because it all sounds really formal ^^ Otherwise, all your ideas are great! Your interpretation of the music videos is cool too!!
Aplusshawolcassi #6
sorry, I'm sorta got writers block with this story, but will update as soon as i can :)
texlauraloo
#7
WHUUAA
UPDATE
PLEASE