Family's Gift

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Yoochun looked at them hesistantly, questions started filling up his head; should he? Should he ask them? Would they answer nicely? Would they help? Is it okay to bother them at the first place?

He was struck with a dillema. The five of them were all still new to each other, and yet he must already ask them a favor which meant so much to him.

Foreword

Hello there EVERYONE!!! You're heeere!!! You're actually heeeere! Reading my story!!! I'm telling you, this means SO MUCH TO ME!!! Thank you so much for wanting to read my fic! Don't forget to comment~ Comments cheer me up! :9

 

I am a Cassiopeia!!! And a relatively new one at that. ._. Actually, I'm very new here (in so many ways)... so I don't really know all the korean phrases out there. (I do know a bit of Japanese though... :9)

 

This is my very first fic here!!! I decided to use a oneshot as my debut as a fanfic writer~~~ Hope you like it!!! Be nice and comment, neh? I love you sooo much!!! X9 Comments make me know what kind of writer I am!!

I do not own DBSK. If I did...

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I would be very happy.

This story is purely an idea of my own~ Any similarities with other stories are purely coincidental.

Please. Do not plagiarize.

 

I hope you don't mind if the layout of this page isn't very... WOW. I'm not good in making posters... digitally. My hands are already comfortable with a manual pencil. And pens. And stuffs of the same sort.

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Melodia-no-hanashi #1
Chapter 1: this is so nice and cute and .. hopeful
their brotherhood is beautiful, and chunmin are naughty ~~
I like it !
inktoxicated #2
Chapter 1: I LAUGHED AND I SMILED THIS WHOLE TIME. SEE? YOU ARE AMAZING. DON'T DENY IT! IT'S AN AWESOME FIC.

I Love Your Writing Style.
newbiecassie #3
I wonder what they'll feel when they somehow read this story. Will they laugh? Cry? or just think of this as their past and nothing else? because I believe there were many stuffs like this back in the day they were together. something that makes me regret for being a 'newbiecassie' for I might never witness this kind of friendship anymore.
No matter they're together or separated, I really hope their hearts stay as one.
WCASSIE5 #4
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...i lovvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeee thissss <3
DearIC #5
Awwwww this story was love~! Personally because I have something for Yoochun's wrists XD...I seriously LOVE how his wrists look when he is using a bracelet or something like that ^^ and of course I loved it more because of how you portrayed the boys! That friendship that turned into brotherhood! :) and awww~ Yoochun feeling shy to ask the rest for help was so sweet! In reality he must have been scared to be the last to enter the group....and Su...LOL...he will be cute Junsu forever~ Minchun bullying Su is so funny too~! (but poor him XD) GREAT ONE SHOT! and I CAN'T wait to read the other fic with tension in it~ even though it will make me sad to think of the boys fighting I think that as humans that shared a strong bond feelings can make them crazy in that kind of situations.....
Miss_Yoo #6
ow,,,short story,,,it's so great,,,
that bracelet is something very precious for him, ow,,,my Micky :-)
Poor Junsu, he always got bullied,,,,but i like it,,,haha
anonymous_runner #7
Waaa.... So great.T_T.
Omg.. your first fanfic is perfect. LoL, to think that i wrote mine so bad.
The topic isn't cliche, the meaning is deep, and of course ur grammar etc way more better 1000x than me. :)
junsu is so cute..hahaha, and poor him being bullied like that. Yunho last scene is cool, and waa.. This is great, dongsaeng-ah.
Hope to see more of ur stories in the future.
amanda13 #8
kenapa pada nangis ??!! aku gak nangis toh ._. tapi kereeeeeen liiiin traalalalalalalalalalalalalalala ~~~
_DyNaR_ #9
ow....ur story make me teary eyes,darling..
even this story is happy ending,but when i saw the last part of what yoochun says it makes my heart ache so much..
i hate them..i hate them why they must got separated?
thanks for ur awesome short story,dear..^^
ionlyluvmusic #10
kyaaa...
it's cute ^^!!
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