Not So Picture Perfect

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Plot:

Pictures, pictures, pictures! That's all Hee Seul ever thought about. In Cherryblossom High, she was part of the Paparazzi group, looking for juciy and hot stories to post on their school blog and newspaper. She had a passion for taking pictures and dreamed about becoming a famous and successful photographer someday. In all of her teenage life, she never planned to take a surprising picture that could change her life and someone else's.

Fame, fortune, and love was what L.joe, the school kingka, lived for. He loved being the center of attention in everything, especially with his stupid fangirls. Being in a gang called TeenTop, he had a high reputation of being the cold hearted and mysterious one. He didn't care about anything or anyone. As long as he was the center of attention, he was okay with everything.

What happens when an "accidental" photo is taken and is spreaded through the whole school, ruining his image? Will they be able to fix this mess and clear everything up? Or will they just crash and burn?

They say cameras never lie, or do they?

Characters:

Cha Hee Seul

   

- Part of the school's Paparazzi

- Has a passion for taking pictures and wishes to become a famous photographer someday

- Isn't popular but is well known through out the whole school because of her mischiveous personality

- Has a sweet side to herself

- Has no idea who L.joe and TeenTop are

- Is the only member in the Paparazzi who hasn't posted an exciting school on the school blog or newspaper

Lee Byunghyun aka L.joe:

 

- Is a gang member in TeenTop

- Is known for being the school's coldest kingka

- Likes being in the limelight

- Hates it when he doesn't get any attention

- No one ever messes with him since he's very skilled at fighting

- Knows who Hee Seul is, but doesn't pay much attention to her

Kim Myungsoo aka L:

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- The school Paparazzi's leader

- Is very skilled at taking pictures

- Loves to eat food

- Other then being the leader of the Paparazzi, he's in a gang called Infinite outside of school

- Cold and rough in the outside, sweet and caring in the inside

- He has a big rivalry with L.joe

Infinite

  Infinite

TeenTop

  Teen Top Crazy

Foreword

  

Annyeong~! This is my first fanfic here and I've been working really hard on it. I've been writing this fanfic for a few days now, and now I think that I'm ready to post and share with you guys! ^0^ I hope you guys enjoy and please comment and subscribe to let me know what you think.

Please don't  plagiarize! This is my story and I worked very hard to plan everything out. I do not own the characters, just the story plot. If this story sounds familiar, please take note that it's just a coincidence. Thank you!

Story Title: Not So Picture Perfect

Author: SmilingSunflower :)

Date started: May 13, 2012

Date ended: -----

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smileycandy123 #1
Update soon please :)
Rini6189 #2
L.Joe was playing around with her. Getting her riled up seems to be a source of amusement for him. Since what L.Joe did to her made her feel irritated, it's hard for Heeseul to control her emotions. It's easy for her to get worked up when someone gets on her bad side. She's already in a bad mood as it is, so she won't be able to hold herself back from her outbursts. For him to be worked up about what she was about to call him for stuffing with an apple, it must hurt Myungsoo inside to be insulted by her. It could be love that has this effect on people to make their emotions run wild. I think it's because of Heeseul that he thought about sitting at the Paparazzi club table--to spend time around her. Being called by a cute nickname must've made him feel uncomfortable or embarrassed that he prefers to not be called that. Being the choding that he is, Sungyeol does that just to stir things up in order to relieve himself of boredom. xD woohyun can be entertaining to liven up the atmosphere. Sunggyu really is fitting to be the leader as the serious, mature one and the voice of authority.

Myungsoo is one of the main characters, so his background needs to be introduced to the readers. He does have an important role in the story along with L.Joe and Heeseul. It must be for thrill seeking that getting involved in gang activities on the streets that the danger attracts him. Males generally have it in their nature to be aggressive, so they tend to test their strength in competitions where they can make use of it--like in sports. It's that adrenaline rush that makes it exhilarating. This chapter isn't boring. There is some amusement in it, which makes it fitting for a comedy. This fic is listed under the category of comedy.
Rini6189 #3
Ch. 3 mistakes (Part 2):

THOU SHALL NOT CALL HIS HYUNGIE A STUPID CHODING WHEN HE IS VERY SMART, NICE, HANDSOME, AND WAY TALLER AND STRONGER THEN YOU!
Correction: THAN

Hoya rubbed his temples and put his ipod on full blast, but it wasn't enough to drown away the bickering of the three youngest and Dongwoo's random blabbering to try to attempt to make the atmosphere seem more happier and playful....
* It should be "drown out" instead of "drown away."

Woohyun, wanting to join into the small bickering/nonsense of talking began singing some lyrics to "Be Mine" just for the fun and attention of it.
* Comma after "talking"

he yelled, stopping the group from talking and yelling at eachother.
Correction: each other

Sunggyu was a very kind hearted and nice person, but he could also be very mean, strict, and scary when he's upset.
Correction: kind-hearted

Sunggyu wasn't mad enough to show his scary side not too long ago, but if you get him irritated enough you would regret it.
* Comma after "enough"
Rini6189 #4
Ch. 3 mistakes (Part 1):

Hee Seul was infact the best painter in her whole art class and everyone admired her delicate and her very vivid imagination.
Correction: Hee Seul was, in fact, the best painter in her whole art class and everyone admired her delicate and her very vivid imagination.

The table was only for the one and only insclusive members of the Paparazzi, and anyone who isn't part of the group would be kicked out immediately without hesitation.
Correction: exclusive

She knew those eyes and it was no other then the Paparazzi's leader, Myungsoo.
Correction: none other than

When L oppa is gone or out, she's the one in charge of the whole Paparazzi and she can also have the same and cold personality as him when she's in a bad mood.
* The word "and" should be removed.

Other then being strict and cold like L, she is more caring, supportive, and understanding then him.
* The word that's used twice should be "than" instead of "then" since a comparison is being made between the two siblings.

As he opened the door to the roof top he found Sungjong laying on Sungyeol's lap, Dongwoo practicing his dance moves, Hoya listening to music, Sunggyu studying for some sort of test, and Woohyun sitting on the edge of the roof swinging his leds.
Correction: legs

L glared at Sungyeol and covered his ears in irritation, no wanting to hear the cute nickname of his.
Correction: not
ihearthongki_ #5
Really nice story! Update soon!
bangrowl222 #6
kyaaaaaaaaaaaa! ssup? imma a new reader and heck, THERE'S LJOE!! AND I LOVE YOUR STORY!! how awethome is that? lol. :B anw, just wondering, why heeseul called ljoe, 'ljoe oppa'? just, isnt it too early and hell, she hates him. but dont bother bout it, kekeke. i was just talking nonsense. :B again, I LOVE YOUR STORY! .... AND LJOE! xD well well well, update soon! n_n
Melinda #7
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Rini6189 #8
Whether the beginning of a story is boring, it's how the author writes it depending on the genre. Personally, I don't find it boring. It's a good start to introduce the main characters into the story. Since she is working under him as a paparazzi, Myungsoo gets more chances to spend time with her than L.Joe. I understand that there needs to be an L.Joe chapter because he is one of the lead characters. So, both guys deserve equal appearance time.

The word "than" is used for making comparisons. I notice that you've used "then," which indicates the following of an action or event. The grammar isn't glaringly bad. There are just a few typos here and there.
Rini6189 #9
This seems to be an interesting plot. Heeseul really is a nature lover to care so much about the environment and the animals inhabiting it. Nature must be her inspiration for her love of photography. It seems that she's developing a little crush on L.Joe because of the way she looked at him in the photo she'd snapped of his best side. The two main guys live double lives, which makes things complicated. Yet, they're able to put up a good front when the authority figures are around to appear as model students. "Two-faced" is the best way of putting it, according to Heeseul. She doesn't know about Myungsoo since he's very good at hiding things about himself so that his cover doesn't get blown easily. He is nice to pick up her accidentally tossed pencil and hand it back to her without regarding her coldly or harshly. It proves that he does have a soft side to him despite his cold-looking exterior. L.Joe is the one who doesn't care what people think, so he doesn't bother to keep his gangster life a secret from his peers. It is funny that she can be so fierce when confronting L.Joe. The mess that she made of her own painting is the result of that. As a member of the paparazzi club, she could consider taking a scandalous shot of him to get back at him when he goes too far. That would help her get on Myungsoo's good side and make him consider keeping her in the club. Because of the kind of person that she is, it seems unlikely that she'd go with such a dirty tactic.
KikaLee #10
oh ho ho ho.
LOL
I like how Hee Seul is all cute but when she confronts L. Joe, she turns all angry and fierce.
I can relate to that... unfortunately. .___."
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I like this chapter~
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