Painting a Jerk

Not So Picture Perfect

L.joe tapped his fingers impatiently as he jotted down notes on his journal. Even though he was a kingka, he still had to keep up his grades. He was a model student since he always got straight A's. Every single teacher wanted every single person in their class to be just like him. A nice, quiet, polite, and smart student that always listened during class.

WRONG! The teachers thought wrong! He was the complete opposite and everyone in the whole school knew that. Most say he has a split personality depending on who's around. If there was a teacher or adult around, he would act all nice and caring to everyone. But once the teacher or adult is gone, he's back to being his regular jerk faced self.

Hee Seul watched him from a far and scribbled in her notebook furiously, still angry at him for being a jerk and calling her ugly. Instead of taking dilligent notes like she always did, she was writing all of her feelings out on her notebook.

Stupid L.joe! You babo! You shouldn't have called me ugly or even tried to take my camera away! YOU KNOW THAT I'M IN THE PAPARAZZI AND THAT I CAN RUIN YOUR WHOLE LIFE AND IMAGE! I'm going to make your life a living nightmare.

Hee Seul sighed since she knew deep inside her that she wouldn't have the guts to ruin his life. She couldn't even take a picture or write down a story about a single scoop that L would be interested in. Hee Seul was also honestly afraid that his "gang" would go after her. Who knows what might happen when no one is around to save her.

Hee Seul grew furious with this idea and began to write harder and faster. She wrote so fast that her pencil flew and hit L's head who was sitting right infront of her. She gulped and quickly averted her eyes to look down at her notes, acting like she was reviewing what she was reading. Aigoo, oppa is really going to hate me for accidentally flinging my pencil at his head.

L felt something hit his head and he stopped writing, brushing his hair and sighing. My gosh, what does Hee Seul want this time? Let me guess, another pencil

Annoyed, L turned around to face Hee Seul and found her looking at her notes, acting as if she was readin them. L smirked and shook his head. Acting innocent this time? Psh, this kid. She needs to know that I'm smarter then I look, he thought to himself.

"What is it now?" he asked her impatiently.

Hee Seul looked up and acted like she was shocked and giggled. "OH! Oppa! Kekeke, I didn't see you there. And neh, I do need something. I need my bunny pencil back" she said innocently and swinged her legs under her desk.

L scoffed and picked up her pink pencil decorated with bunnies. "Is this it?" Hee Seul nodded her head and held out her hand.

"Neh, now give me please."

He twisted the pencil between his fingers for a moment and tossed her pencil on his desk. "Here, just don't write too fast again and hit my head. you're already on my bad side anyways." he told her and turned back around to face the board.

Hee Seul nodded her head in agreement and took her pencil, sticking her tongue at him as soon as she turned around. "Mianhe oppa." she said and pouted. "Why am I on everyone's bad side?" she muttered and crossed her arms.

After 15 more minutes of scribbling in her notebook, the bell rang and she ran out of her classroom to her favorite class, art. Hee Seul adored art and art class was her only free time to let her mind and imagionation roam around in pure peace. She loved listening to the piano piece playing as she and the other students painted their hearts away.

Closing her eyes, Hee Seul smiled to herself and tried to imagine a beautiful scene of  a waterfall, falling off of a cliff, drowning into the ocean. A place where fresh and salt water met and mixed. After picturing her scene, she tied her hair up, put on her apron, and began painting the ocean with a dark blue color. 

Hee Seul wasn't the best painter and she wasn't the worst either. You can say that she was in the middle, average you can say. She didn't care though if she wasn't the best. All she wanted to do was to let her imagionation flow and to feel peace in quiet for just an hour.

"Ahh, this is so peaceful. Good thing L.joe oppa isn't in thi-"

BANG! The door slammed open and there standing by the door was L.joe. He smirked at her and took over the canvas that whas right by hers.

"Hello Hee Seul," he said and winked at her. Hee Seul rolled her eyes and continued painting.

"I thought you weren't in this class L.joe oppa. I've never seen you here before." she said and sighed, thinking that she spoke too soon about him.

L.joe looked at her canvas and nodded his head. "Oh that! Hehe, I was too busy doing other things with my friends. That's why I didn't attend much, but now we're not planning to do anything so I decided to show up for a change." he said and picked up a paint brush, dipping it in a red paint.

Hee Seul nodded her head and kept painting her ocean and waterfall. What did he mean by "other things?" And by friends does he mean his "gang?" What could they be doing during their free period and what is L.joe actually hiding? She thought for a long moment of time until hr thought were interrupted by L.joe's big head blocking her face from her canvas.

"Yah! What is this supposed to be?" he asked as he pointed to her canvas.

"A water fall falling down a cliff into the ocean. Wae?"

L.joe put a hand to his mouth and laughed. "Hahaha, IT LOOKS NOTHING LIKE WHAT YOU DESCRIBED!" he howled and smiled widely. "It looks like a mental whale with it's baby!"

Hee Seul's ears grew red and she hit his arm. "YAH! Don't insult my picture and whales like that! it so does look like what I described! It looks exactly like what I pictured in my mind!" she said and bit her lower lip while looking at her canvas.

L.joe knocked on her head. "Boink, boink, boink! Well it looks like you have a pretty messed up imagination then!" he said and leaned close to her face, poking her nose with his paint brush.

Hee Seul's eyes widened and she shook her head, blushing. "Y-YAH! MY IMAGINATION IS NOT MESSED UP! And what was that for? thanks a lot! Now I have a big red blob on my nose!" she whined and stuck her tongue out at him.

He laughed and pouted at her. "Boo hoo hoo! Well I don't care Rudolph! Kekeke, I shall call you that now! RUDOLPH!" he repeated and chuckled.

Hee Seul glared at him and shook her head. "YAH! I'm not Rudolph 2 FACE!" 

L.joe smirked and his chin. "2 Faced? I like it. Kekeke, don't think that that stupid insult would hurt my feeings Rudolph." he said as the bell rang, signaling for lunch. "Bye, see you around, Rudolph." he said again and walked away.

After he left, Hee Seul took her paint brush again and scribbled all over her painting. "STUPID! MEAN! FACED! BABO! UGLY ! GAAAAAAH~!" she yelled as she let out all of her anger on her own master piece. She realised what she did and facepalmed.

"Aigoo, what have I done?" she asked herself. "My painting~!" Hee Seul stared at her picture and sighed. "It's all that 2 Face's fault!"

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Second chapter is up! I hope you guys enjoyed this chapter! I'm sorry that I didn't put a lot of L in this chapter, but the next chapter he'll have a lot of parts for sure! And silent readers, please don't be afraid to comment or subscribe. It keeps me motivated! ^0^

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smileycandy123 #1
Update soon please :)
Rini6189
#2
L.Joe was playing around with her. Getting her riled up seems to be a source of amusement for him. Since what L.Joe did to her made her feel irritated, it's hard for Heeseul to control her emotions. It's easy for her to get worked up when someone gets on her bad side. She's already in a bad mood as it is, so she won't be able to hold herself back from her outbursts. For him to be worked up about what she was about to call him for stuffing with an apple, it must hurt Myungsoo inside to be insulted by her. It could be love that has this effect on people to make their emotions run wild. I think it's because of Heeseul that he thought about sitting at the Paparazzi club table--to spend time around her. Being called by a cute nickname must've made him feel uncomfortable or embarrassed that he prefers to not be called that. Being the choding that he is, Sungyeol does that just to stir things up in order to relieve himself of boredom. xD woohyun can be entertaining to liven up the atmosphere. Sunggyu really is fitting to be the leader as the serious, mature one and the voice of authority.

Myungsoo is one of the main characters, so his background needs to be introduced to the readers. He does have an important role in the story along with L.Joe and Heeseul. It must be for thrill seeking that getting involved in gang activities on the streets that the danger attracts him. Males generally have it in their nature to be aggressive, so they tend to test their strength in competitions where they can make use of it--like in sports. It's that adrenaline rush that makes it exhilarating. This chapter isn't boring. There is some amusement in it, which makes it fitting for a comedy. This fic is listed under the category of comedy.
Rini6189
#3
Ch. 3 mistakes (Part 2):

THOU SHALL NOT CALL HIS HYUNGIE A STUPID CHODING WHEN HE IS VERY SMART, NICE, HANDSOME, AND WAY TALLER AND STRONGER THEN YOU!
Correction: THAN

Hoya rubbed his temples and put his ipod on full blast, but it wasn't enough to drown away the bickering of the three youngest and Dongwoo's random blabbering to try to attempt to make the atmosphere seem more happier and playful....
* It should be "drown out" instead of "drown away."

Woohyun, wanting to join into the small bickering/nonsense of talking began singing some lyrics to "Be Mine" just for the fun and attention of it.
* Comma after "talking"

he yelled, stopping the group from talking and yelling at eachother.
Correction: each other

Sunggyu was a very kind hearted and nice person, but he could also be very mean, strict, and scary when he's upset.
Correction: kind-hearted

Sunggyu wasn't mad enough to show his scary side not too long ago, but if you get him irritated enough you would regret it.
* Comma after "enough"
Rini6189
#4
Ch. 3 mistakes (Part 1):

Hee Seul was infact the best painter in her whole art class and everyone admired her delicate and her very vivid imagination.
Correction: Hee Seul was, in fact, the best painter in her whole art class and everyone admired her delicate and her very vivid imagination.

The table was only for the one and only insclusive members of the Paparazzi, and anyone who isn't part of the group would be kicked out immediately without hesitation.
Correction: exclusive

She knew those eyes and it was no other then the Paparazzi's leader, Myungsoo.
Correction: none other than

When L oppa is gone or out, she's the one in charge of the whole Paparazzi and she can also have the same and cold personality as him when she's in a bad mood.
* The word "and" should be removed.

Other then being strict and cold like L, she is more caring, supportive, and understanding then him.
* The word that's used twice should be "than" instead of "then" since a comparison is being made between the two siblings.

As he opened the door to the roof top he found Sungjong laying on Sungyeol's lap, Dongwoo practicing his dance moves, Hoya listening to music, Sunggyu studying for some sort of test, and Woohyun sitting on the edge of the roof swinging his leds.
Correction: legs

L glared at Sungyeol and covered his ears in irritation, no wanting to hear the cute nickname of his.
Correction: not
ihearthongki_
#5
Really nice story! Update soon!
bangrowl222
#6
kyaaaaaaaaaaaa! ssup? imma a new reader and heck, THERE'S LJOE!! AND I LOVE YOUR STORY!! how awethome is that? lol. :B anw, just wondering, why heeseul called ljoe, 'ljoe oppa'? just, isnt it too early and hell, she hates him. but dont bother bout it, kekeke. i was just talking nonsense. :B again, I LOVE YOUR STORY! .... AND LJOE! xD well well well, update soon! n_n
Melinda
#7
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Rini6189
#8
Whether the beginning of a story is boring, it's how the author writes it depending on the genre. Personally, I don't find it boring. It's a good start to introduce the main characters into the story. Since she is working under him as a paparazzi, Myungsoo gets more chances to spend time with her than L.Joe. I understand that there needs to be an L.Joe chapter because he is one of the lead characters. So, both guys deserve equal appearance time.

The word "than" is used for making comparisons. I notice that you've used "then," which indicates the following of an action or event. The grammar isn't glaringly bad. There are just a few typos here and there.
Rini6189
#9
This seems to be an interesting plot. Heeseul really is a nature lover to care so much about the environment and the animals inhabiting it. Nature must be her inspiration for her love of photography. It seems that she's developing a little crush on L.Joe because of the way she looked at him in the photo she'd snapped of his best side. The two main guys live double lives, which makes things complicated. Yet, they're able to put up a good front when the authority figures are around to appear as model students. "Two-faced" is the best way of putting it, according to Heeseul. She doesn't know about Myungsoo since he's very good at hiding things about himself so that his cover doesn't get blown easily. He is nice to pick up her accidentally tossed pencil and hand it back to her without regarding her coldly or harshly. It proves that he does have a soft side to him despite his cold-looking exterior. L.Joe is the one who doesn't care what people think, so he doesn't bother to keep his gangster life a secret from his peers. It is funny that she can be so fierce when confronting L.Joe. The mess that she made of her own painting is the result of that. As a member of the paparazzi club, she could consider taking a scandalous shot of him to get back at him when he goes too far. That would help her get on Myungsoo's good side and make him consider keeping her in the club. Because of the kind of person that she is, it seems unlikely that she'd go with such a dirty tactic.
KikaLee #10
oh ho ho ho.
LOL
I like how Hee Seul is all cute but when she confronts L. Joe, she turns all angry and fierce.
I can relate to that... unfortunately. .___."
Cx
I like this chapter~