Chapter 17: Hyung, I like her !

Black mail benefits [Editing]

 

A/N: Listen to Nothing's Over

 

------------------------- Sungyeol's POV

 

I went to Sunggyu hyung's house, banging his gate outside. 

" SUNGGYU HYUNG ! OPEN THE GATES !." I shouted and kept on banging it,

" SHUT UP CHODING ! WAIT A MINUTE." i can hear him shout from the main door.

" Faster would you ?! It's kinda cold here outside." I shouted back at him

and sighed. Sunggyu went closer to me and opened the gates, letting me go inside his house.

" So what's the negotiation all about ?." i asked and sat on the couch, " It's about you

and Myungsoo." Sunggyu said and eyed me suspiciously. " What ? We're okay. There's

nothing wrong with us." I denied and avoided eye contact with Sunggyu, " Are you sure

about that ? Cause your eyes don't tell me so." Sunggyu said and smirked.

" Anyway, since you'll be going with Hyunae tomorrow,  i wish no one would fight between

you and Myungsoo." Sunggyu said and sat beside me, " Why would we fight ?." I asked

him and chuckled. I actually know your point hyung, but i won't tell you what i feel.

" Oh, yeah. Why would you ? Let's say, Myungsoo wants to date Hyunae while she's close

to you." Sunggyu said and looked at me seriously, " You know Myungsoo easily gets

jealous." he added. What ?! Myungsoo's already going to date her ?! How could be this

possible? " H-Hyunae and I, are only ..... f-friends."  i replied and stuttered, feeling the

rapid heart beat of mine. " Friends." Sunggyu chuckled and shuffled to get something on

the drawer, " Haven't you forgot this ?." Sunggyu  waved Hyunae's letter to me, " You

made a three month contract with her." Sunggyu stated and smirked.

He knows that in just a moment, i will burst my feelings out and tell everything that i feel.

" Look, i just want to play with her." I replied and sighed, scratching the back of my

head.  " Play ? Then why did you make her close to you ? With Infinite ? Isn't she a

SLAVE ?." Sunggyu asked suspiciously and leaned closer to me, staring deep down in my

eyes. Tsch, You're cornering me.  I breathe in deeply and swallowed hard, i hope

everything that i will say would help. " Sunggyu hyung...." i mumbled, "  Yes ?." Sunggyu

replied and smirked, " I..... I like Park Hyunae. I like her a .... lot."

i muttered and looked away, i stood up and shook my head. Hyung really knows when i'm

about to break out. " Look Sungyeol, nothing's over." Sunggyu said and placed his hand on

my shoulder. I turned to face him and eyed him, puzzled, " What do you mean ?."

" Myungsoo haven't fall for her, YET. So you still have the chance to get Hyunae back."  

Sunggyu said and smiled at me. I smiled back to him and give a thumbs up, " Okay, I'm

going to make it sure." i replied and grinned. I thought i was going to lose her that easy,

wait for me Park Hyunae. Let me teach you how to fall for me.

 


 

 

A/N:

 

Chapter Update~

NOTHING'S OVERRRRRR, NOTHING'S OVERRRRRRRR~

/sobs/ i hate this feeling ; n ; still lucky to have the motivation to

update this today < // 3 it's painful ! OMONA~

disregard my note kekeke~ i'm going insane !

he make me go insane

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xchessthebest
#1
Aw, Sungyeol's too sweet. :'))
Update soon!
Rini6189
#2
It is sweet of Sungyeol to be taking good care of Hyunae. Despite her denseness toward some things, Hyunae is aware of her true feelings. In a previous chapter, she did think to herself about wishing that Sungyeol returns the same love she has toward him. It's admirable of Sungyeol to finally pour out his heart to Hyunae. Being close to losing her seems to have opened his eyes and his heart to see how precious she is to him. This ought to give her something to think about while she lays down to rest. It should make her heart glad hearing the confession from him.

Some Ch. 40 mistakes:

No I'm okay.
Correction: Yes, I'm okay.

My heartbeat's went on a quicker phase.
Correction: My heart beated at a quicker pace.

I mumbled and looked at her, seeing her expression with confusement.
* It should be "confusion" instead of "confusement."

* Note: The pronoun "I" is capitalized no matter where it is in the sentence.
hwangyeonyeon #3
Awwww, Sungyeollie just confessed. ^-^
kevinian_0330
#4
SWEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!!!
update soon :))
jeslene140 #5
Kyaaaaah Please update soon >.<
Rini6189
#6
It's a good thing that Infinite arrived at the scene in time to come to her rescue. Sungyeol is so noble to dive after Hyunae to prevent her from drowning to death. This scene reminds me of a particular scene in "Ouran High School Host Club" where Tamaki dove after Haruhi right after she was pushed off a cliff. Just as much as Tamaki cares for Haruhi, Sungyeol is so deeply in love with Hyunae to the point that he can't bear to lose her. There's a difference between kissing and giving CPR. Sungyeol's just like a kid when he's jealous. He doesn't have to worry since Myungsoo already clarified before that he doesn't like Hyunae that way. If he does, he wouldn't have gone to all that trouble to help bring the two together. Myungsoo does make it obvious that he supports them as a couple. Hyunae said so herself a few chapters back that she's really into Sungyeol now. It's sweet of him to stay by her side when she's unconscious. The question remains about how they'd make A Pink pay for their actions.

Some Ch. 39 mistakes:

I jumped off the cliff and angled my self to fasten the falling speed.
Correction: I jumped off the cliff and angled myself to increase the falling speed.
* Fasten means to tightly secure something (i.e. a seatbelt).

Use mouth to mouth resiscitation Myungsoo.
Correction: Use mouth-to-mouth resuscitation, Myungsoo.

*It's spelled "unconscious."
kevinian_0330
#7
CHODING!!!!!! XDD
Y U SO SWEET XDD
PLEASE UPDATE SOON^^
xchessthebest
#8
Aw, Sungyeol's so cute when he's jealous. "Hyunae's mine! She's only mine!" Hahah.
I really wish she ended up with Myungsoo.. but a twist is good too. c:
hwangyeonyeon #9
Good Job! I likey this fiction. *Wiggles eyebrow.
Rini6189
#10
Hyunae is missing out on the fun by not joining the boys. Her inability to swim explains why she's reluctant to hit the water. She could benefit by taking swimming lessons from them. Sungyeol is considerate of her to not continue further because of her uneasiness. Infinite is worried about Hyunae's safety because A Pink's around to cause her harm. Despite their warnings, Hyunae must be worried about Sungyeol to not want to just sit around and do nothing. So, she decided to go out to look for him. A Pink is going too far by using Hyunae to threaten Infinite because of Sungyeol rejecting Namjoo. They're doing this to make Sungyeol regret his decision. It would mean big trouble for her since she can't swim. Hopefully, they'd get there to save Hyunae in time.

* Note: The pronoun "I" is capitalized no matter where it is in the sentence.

Some Ch. 38 mistakes:

Sungyeol was left dumbfounded and scratched his head, i chuckled on his expression.
Correction: Sungyeol was left dumbfounded and scratched his head. I chuckled at his expression.

"I'm going at the same room with noona!"
Correction: "I'm going to be in the same room with Noona!"

Sungyeol said and dragged me on the more deeper part.
* It should be "to" instead of "on."