Chapter 16: Close enough

Black mail benefits [Editing]

 

A/N: try reading this while listening to COVER GIRL

 

----------------------------- Sungyeol's POV

 

After school, i waited for Hyunae outside the room while she's fixing the chairs. She'll

pack my things for tomorrow's trip. " Hyunae, not yet done ?."  i asked and scratched my

forehead, " I'm finished." She said and dusted of her skirt. She went closer to me and

linked arms, " Let's go to your house, shall we ?." she said and giggled.

" Okay. Let's go." I replied and smiled brightly at her, How i  wish we're like this always. 

" Want a piggy back ride ?." I asked her and flashed a smile, " A-Aniya ! No thanks. "

Hyunae replied and stuttered. " Okay." I replied and chuckled, pulling her closer to me.

Once we arrived at home, she immediately went up to

my room and took my travel bag. Hyunae was scanning through my drawers when she

pulled my boxers out, " So i see you like cute printed stuffs." Hyunae chuckled and waved

my cartoon printed boxers. " Hey ! G-Give it to me !." I said and blushed insanely, i went

closer and tackled her. Making her fall underneath me, staying like that for minutes. I

gulped and stared deeply into her eyes, don't know what to do. If only i could kiss her

soft lips.  I saw Hyunae scanned my face and turned light pink, she pushed me away and

chuckled nervously. " Well that was awkward." she mumbled and flattened her hair.

Hyunae went back fixing my stuffs and i came closer to help her. " Aren't you excited on

what may happen tomorrow ?." Hyunae asked and giggled, like nothing happened. " I'm

quite excited but, i'm sure that would because of the place."  i replied and look

away. I can't show that i'm excited, she might caught me off guard and know that I really

like her to be with tomorrow. " So you're teaming with Infinite, right ?." i asked her and

she nodded cheerfully, " As always." she said and winked at me. " You know what, i really

want to hang out with you tomorrow. I think that would be fun !." she said and

grinned widely, " I know you're a choding, and i don't know i like you being that choding

type." she added and ruffled my hair. Stop this Hyunae, you're making me fall for you. 

Hyunae tackled me and started tickling me, " Yah ! Haha ! Hyunae ! S-Stop it !." I laughed

and rolled o nthe floor," I won't choding." she teased and continued to tickle me. I

flipped her over, pinning her down again. Our face were inches apart, this time i breath in

deeply and leaned closer i was about to kiss her when my phone rang.

I pulled away and rolled my eyes, i went to my table and answer it. " YOBOSEYO ?!." i

exclaimed, " SUNGYEOL ! Come over here after you fix your things, arasso ?." Sunggyu

hyung commanded, " Arasso." I replied and hung up. Such a er.

" Sungyeol, who's that ?." Hyunae curiously asked, " Sunggyu hyung." i mumbled and shook

my head. Good thing Sunggyu called, Sungyeol almost took my second kiss.

" Okay. If i've got nothing to do, can i go home now ?." Hyunae asked and played with her

fingers, " Okay just take your dinner here first." I said and smiled lightly. " Okay." she

replied and nodded. After we ate dinner, just the usual routine, i asked my driver to drive

her back to her house. I went out again to go at Sunggyu's house. What's this all about ?

 


 

 

a/n:

 

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xchessthebest
#1
Aw, Sungyeol's too sweet. :'))
Update soon!
Rini6189
#2
It is sweet of Sungyeol to be taking good care of Hyunae. Despite her denseness toward some things, Hyunae is aware of her true feelings. In a previous chapter, she did think to herself about wishing that Sungyeol returns the same love she has toward him. It's admirable of Sungyeol to finally pour out his heart to Hyunae. Being close to losing her seems to have opened his eyes and his heart to see how precious she is to him. This ought to give her something to think about while she lays down to rest. It should make her heart glad hearing the confession from him.

Some Ch. 40 mistakes:

No I'm okay.
Correction: Yes, I'm okay.

My heartbeat's went on a quicker phase.
Correction: My heart beated at a quicker pace.

I mumbled and looked at her, seeing her expression with confusement.
* It should be "confusion" instead of "confusement."

* Note: The pronoun "I" is capitalized no matter where it is in the sentence.
hwangyeonyeon #3
Awwww, Sungyeollie just confessed. ^-^
kevinian_0330
#4
SWEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!!!
update soon :))
jeslene140 #5
Kyaaaaah Please update soon >.<
Rini6189
#6
It's a good thing that Infinite arrived at the scene in time to come to her rescue. Sungyeol is so noble to dive after Hyunae to prevent her from drowning to death. This scene reminds me of a particular scene in "Ouran High School Host Club" where Tamaki dove after Haruhi right after she was pushed off a cliff. Just as much as Tamaki cares for Haruhi, Sungyeol is so deeply in love with Hyunae to the point that he can't bear to lose her. There's a difference between kissing and giving CPR. Sungyeol's just like a kid when he's jealous. He doesn't have to worry since Myungsoo already clarified before that he doesn't like Hyunae that way. If he does, he wouldn't have gone to all that trouble to help bring the two together. Myungsoo does make it obvious that he supports them as a couple. Hyunae said so herself a few chapters back that she's really into Sungyeol now. It's sweet of him to stay by her side when she's unconscious. The question remains about how they'd make A Pink pay for their actions.

Some Ch. 39 mistakes:

I jumped off the cliff and angled my self to fasten the falling speed.
Correction: I jumped off the cliff and angled myself to increase the falling speed.
* Fasten means to tightly secure something (i.e. a seatbelt).

Use mouth to mouth resiscitation Myungsoo.
Correction: Use mouth-to-mouth resuscitation, Myungsoo.

*It's spelled "unconscious."
kevinian_0330
#7
CHODING!!!!!! XDD
Y U SO SWEET XDD
PLEASE UPDATE SOON^^
xchessthebest
#8
Aw, Sungyeol's so cute when he's jealous. "Hyunae's mine! She's only mine!" Hahah.
I really wish she ended up with Myungsoo.. but a twist is good too. c:
hwangyeonyeon #9
Good Job! I likey this fiction. *Wiggles eyebrow.
Rini6189
#10
Hyunae is missing out on the fun by not joining the boys. Her inability to swim explains why she's reluctant to hit the water. She could benefit by taking swimming lessons from them. Sungyeol is considerate of her to not continue further because of her uneasiness. Infinite is worried about Hyunae's safety because A Pink's around to cause her harm. Despite their warnings, Hyunae must be worried about Sungyeol to not want to just sit around and do nothing. So, she decided to go out to look for him. A Pink is going too far by using Hyunae to threaten Infinite because of Sungyeol rejecting Namjoo. They're doing this to make Sungyeol regret his decision. It would mean big trouble for her since she can't swim. Hopefully, they'd get there to save Hyunae in time.

* Note: The pronoun "I" is capitalized no matter where it is in the sentence.

Some Ch. 38 mistakes:

Sungyeol was left dumbfounded and scratched his head, i chuckled on his expression.
Correction: Sungyeol was left dumbfounded and scratched his head. I chuckled at his expression.

"I'm going at the same room with noona!"
Correction: "I'm going to be in the same room with Noona!"

Sungyeol said and dragged me on the more deeper part.
* It should be "to" instead of "on."