TWO.

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      You snickered watching as Myungyeol chased each other.

    Oh my fangirl feels, she thought, her heart about to burst, cannot contain the happiness inside.

    She was watching a fancam video of Myungsoo, her number one bias in the whole entire world, "Playing tag" with Sungyeol, his BFF in the airport.

    She laughed loudly at their interaction, its sweetness though it's between two boys.

    "Hey! You're going to wake the neigbors!" said her sister Victoria.

    It was 11 pm already and she's staying up all night playing the video on loop.

    You ignored her sister and focused on the screen.

    "Hahahahaha! Why are they chasing each other? it's so cute!" She said as her sister strode off.

    She smiled the whole night, even before going back to sleep. It was a school day, and yet she got hope that tomorrow's going to be a more wonderful day.

 

 

 

 

 

Myungsoo woke with a start, Sungyeol was out of the house because of family matters and only Dongwoo was in the room with him.

   Dongwoo was sitting at the floor,watching dance videos from a laptop.

   "Good morning, hyung!" Myungsoo said as he rubbed his eyes. "Where's Sungyeol?"

   "Went to his house, I guess. We're free today,remember? But we have to practice the whole day tomorrow" Dongwoo said, smiling at the thing he's watching.

   "Ah.. araseo" Myungsoo said and he went to the Kitchen to fix himself some breakfast.

   Hoya was in the living room watching TV, scanning the channels.

  "Good Morning Hyung," Myungsoo said as he settled at the floor, planning to eat breakfast as he watched TV.

  "Good morning Soo" Hoya said apparently bored. 

   He handed the remote to Myungsoo and said "You're going to watch?"

  Myungsoo nodded as he bit the drumstick he's holding.

  With the grease on Myungsoo's hand, Hoya decided to just put the remote beside Myungsoo.

  "Thank you, hyung" Myungsoo said.

  "It's okay, there's nothing good in TV nowadays, anyway. " he said standing up "I'm just going to watch dance videos on Sungyeol's laptop with Dongwoo."

   Myungsoo was still half asleep so he didn't paid much attention to what Hoya said.

   He finished his food, scanned the channels like Hoya did, and figured there's really nothing good on Television.

   Myungsoo stood up and washed the dishes he used.

   What a boring day, he thought, I guess I should just hangout with the hyungs.

   He went to Sunggyu's and Woohyun's room and found it's empty.

   He opened the door to Hoya's and Sungjong's room and found Sungjong, beauty resting.

   Myungsoo went to their room where Dongwoo and Hoya watched dance videos.

   "Where's everyone hyungs?" he asked.

   "Taking a break, most probably. We just borrowed Sungyeol's laptop to not spend any money" Dongwoo said, clearly amused of what he's watching.

   "Wait.. SUNGYEOL'S LAPTOP?!" Myungsoo said, apparently wide awake now. "Let me see!"

   Myungsoo grabbed the laptop but Hoya pulled it back as Dongwoo pulled on a clueless expression.

   "Ya! Ya! we borrowed this from Sungyeol! Just ask him for permission next time!" Hoya said.

   "I'll just check on something" Mannered Myungsoo said "Please."

   Hoya took the laptop and handed it to Myungsoo.

   "There" he said. 

   Myungsoo eagerly grabbed the laptop and looked for Sungyeol's files.

   The two rappers, impatient, asked in chorus "What're you looking for?"

   Myungsoo ignored them and instead concentrated on opening the files only to find that it needs a password.

   "AISH SUNGYEOL HYUNG!" he cursed.

   "Bo?" Sungyeol said as he entered the room.

    Myungsoo was sick of Sungyeol's prank already. Fed up with everything though he doesn't really know why.

   "Nevermind!" he said, finally handing the laptop to YaDong.

   Sungyeol smirked as Myungsoo stormed from the room, closing the door behind him.

   "I fooled him,didn't I?" Sungyeol said, laughing his heart out, clearly amused of the annoyed face Myungsoo is showing.

 

 

 

 

You took a taxi to school.

   It was a friday and because of lack of sleep, she woke up late.

   But amidst the fact that she's going to be late and it can murder her grades, she doesn't care, she still smiles with confidence like a crazy person.

   She is an honor student with hardwork. Her determination? Her idols!

   She studies before logging in her computer, disciplining herself that she should sacrifice time for that is better that way.

   Her running late was intolerable for her parents and teachers but it never really get her down.

   With everything that's happening, she shows a bright smile to everyone; she is always inspired.

   Though her only weakness is the issues being thrown to INFINITE, the scandals and all the things that can possibly ruin their career.

   Good thing there are only few.

   She ran upstairs to her classroom and greeted "Good Morning" to everyone in her way.

   She was already holding the back door knob when her first period teacher has entered the classroom through the front door.

   The class, to show respect, all stood up and greeted their teacher.

   Perfect timing, she thought, as she sneakily walked towards her chair that's just inches away from the door.

   Awesome, she smirked because no one noticed her tardiness.

 

 

 

 

 

Sungyeol is pissed, Myungsoo's giving him the cold shoulder for hours, Yadong's just dancing in the living room engrossed of what they watched and reviewing it, and Sungjong went out to buy something that Sunggyu has texted a while ago.

   He feels sorry for fooling his bestfriend, and the guilt is eating him up alive.

   I didn't really do anything bad, didn't I? he thought. Why is he easily pissed?

   He logged in his secret facebook where he uploaded the picture of Myungsoo (he just got Myungsoo into thinking it was really in his laptop) and looked for him.

 

   Myungsoo was taking a shower, washing all his bad vibes away.

   Ugh! How could I fall for hyung's trick? He thought, regretting the fact that he ignored him.

   Lesson learned: Never mess with Lee Sungyeol.

   He wrapped himself with a towel and walked to his room.

   He saw Sungyeol's laptop open and his face in the screen.

   "YAAAAAAAAA!" he screamed [LOL. Just imagine Myungsoo screaming, it's really daebak :bd]

   "Oh! Myungsoo ya!" Sungyeol entered the room.

   "I thought you won't upload it?"

   "HAHAHA. Yeah, you just thought" he said, smiling.

    Myungsoo glared at him.

   "WAIT! Drop that glare of yours and listen to me" Sungyeol said "I'm going to delete it"

   "Jinjja?" Myungsoo asked.

   Sungyeol nodded.

   "See?" Sungyeol said as the cursor to delete the picture.

   "Jang~No more scandal," he said laughing.

   "Okay, okay" Myungsoo said. "Wait, what's that site? Google plus?"

   "It's better than that! Pe-is-buk.. Facebook!" Sungyeol said. "haven't heard of it?"

   " I think I heard of it, but why do you have one? I only knew our company uses it to give info to our foreign fans"

   "ne" Sungyeol nodded

    "And it gives us information about our foreign fans" he added as he smiled and raising both his eyebrows up and down.

   Myungsoo,too, raised his left eyebrow, curious of what Sungyeol has just said.

   "It also have games!" Sungyeol said and Myungsoo finally gave in.

 

 

 

 

 

In a matter of minutes, Sungyeol helped Myungsoo in making a facebook account.

   Myungsoo, of course, picked a profile picture that shows his "mysterious side"... a picture filled in black color.

   Sungyeol tried to encourage him into uploading one of his own photos as profile picture but he refused.

   Ugh. Stubborn Soo, he thought.

   They scanned around facebook, edited Myungsoo's profile details, uploaded some pictures from the fancafe and everything. Of course his first "friend" is Sungyeol and noone else.

   Myungsoo refreshed the page over and over again.

   "Hyung, why aren't I getting any friend request?" he asked.

   "I don't know, there are many posers here,too" Sungyeol said. "But..."

   "But what?" Myungsoo asked suspiciously.

   "At the least we get to keep our privacy." Sungyeol answered, wrapping his arm around Myungsoo's shoulders.

   "Aish!" Myungsoo just said as he explored around facebook, eager of what it brings.

 

      

 

Myungsoo searched "Kim Myungsoo" on his Facebook and found a thousand results.

   There are fanpages supporting him, and people who 'roleplay' as him as well.

   His eyes widened as he looked at the results.

   We're really popular now,he thought smiling.

 

   

 

You was smiling as she skipped back home.

   Everyone's dismissed early because of a meeting the faculty is having.

   I knew today's going to be a wonderful day! she thought.

   She greeted her parents and took her lunch to her room.

   She immediately opened her laptop and dressed to her house clothes as she waited.

    You sat on the chair in front of her laptop and tapped her fingers impatiently.

   She went to her daily routine, scanning the pages on what's new about Infinite and updating status about them all day.

   Apparently, there were no updates because it's still early so she just posted a status:

    You   : Infinite Oppas, Dashi dorawa!!!





   

Myungsoo couldn't believe his eyes in everything he is seeing: support pages, fan projects.. it was really overwhelming.

   Sungyeol left and bought a coffee at the cafe nearby even though the weather's hot.

   To express his gratitude, he added each and everyone of the people who roleplay as him and even those who calls him their husband, he even liked all the fan pages until his index finger went numb.

   

 

 

 

You were bored, clicking F5 every 5 minutes for updates about INFINITE as she sing along their songs that's playing on the cassette.

  "DORAWAA DORAWAA~ DASHI DORAWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA", she screamed her lungs out because of boredom.

  "Dorawa dorawa~~" she sang along the lyrics she only knew.

  "nayoge neon hana bake obseo dunun dunun i don't know i don't know obseo.. junjeu hdhaldlajdksk andwae.." she sang as she scrolled around each pages.

 

   After 5 refreshes, there was a red notification on the left side of her screen.

 

  '1 new friend request'

 

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Facts:

  • Sungyeol loves drinking coffee 
  • (Gah can't think of something anymore >.<)
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Rini6189
#1
Since he had experience being in Japan for his filming schedule of a Japanese drama, Myungsoo is better at speaking and understanding Japanese than his fellow group members. It seems like another unsuccessful attempt for her to get her message across to this so-called roleplayer of Myungsoo. Words have no emotional content to them when they're not spoken. That explains why he doesn't seem to be affected by them from reading it. Since his English isn't very fluent here, that excuses him for being unable to completely understand what she messaged him. He is being genuine by not acting friendly when he really isn't being that way. This is proving to be a real challenge to go up against someone who is not fluent in English.

The only Japanese that I know are from watching anime (with English subtitles) and reading manga. I just don't know how to read kanji since I've never learned it.
Rini6189
#2
Maybe she's so eager to go home right away to check her Facebook feed. It is weird to see Myungsoo "obsessing" (according to Hoya) over udon. If I have to continue eating the same thing over and over again, I'd grow tired of it easily and not want to eat it for a while. The other food that he's addicted to is kimchi. He does carry a small amount of it in his personal carrier bag wherever he goes. It's obvious that Sungyeol doesn't want Myungsoo to get the sheets dirty. They practically share the bed while rooming with each other. Sungyeol's definitely "married" to a Taeyeon roleplayer of Facebook. Since there's no chance of that happening in real life, he could have that fulfilled in his own dream world. That makes him no different from typical guys that daydream about their ideal girls. That status change shouldn't be a big deal since it's no secret that he has a big crush on Taeyeon. Sungyeol does have a thing for younger girls. Although she is older than him, Taeyeon does have a youthful appeal about her that makes her seem young for her age.
Rini6189
#3
Yes, it does look like you're stalling for time here. This is slowly building up to the point where she'd get to meet with Myungsoo face-to-face. I don't know what "PBB Teens" is about since I've never heard of it.

Maybe it's fate reaching out to her feelings by randomly playing those sad songs. It might be a way of getting her to re4alize what she's feeling deep down.

Girls with long hair must look more appealing/attractive to him than those with short hair. Everybody has their own preferences. In reality, it's really the heart that matters when it comes to love.

It's true that there's no perfection in anything in life. There's always the good and the bad. Life is full of obstacles.
Rini6189
#4
Ch. 14 mistakes (Part 3):

"April one's our concert in Korea," Myungsoo answered.
Correction: "April first is our concert in Korea," Myungsoo answered.

"We'll go back, 2 days before, I guess."
Correction: "We'll go back two days before that, I guess."

2 days before a schedule, they'll go there, when there's enough time.
Correction: Two days before a schedule, they'll go there when there's enough time.

But if the schedule's way too strict, it's hours after the schedule before.
Correction: If the schedule's way too strict, it's hours after the schedule before.

It's the 5th week of March, and they're practicing intensely everyday for preparation.
Correction: It's the fifth week of March. They've been practicing intensely everyday for preparation.

They went over each dances and practice them.
Correction: They went over each dance routine and practiced them.

From Comeback again to Covergirl, every step should be perfect or else it's back to the first track again.
Correction: "Come Back Again" to "Cover Girl,"

"This is life," Myungsoo sighed under his breath.
* A period should be in place of the comma since sighing is not a verbal action.

Everything seems to have a pattern, everyday is like a routine, nothing's new.
* The conjunction "and" should be added before "nothing."

And although he enjoyed what he is right now; though he smiles at the thought that everything's working perfectly fine, he can't help but smile wider at the mishaps, an alarm to let him realize nothing's ever perfect, it makes him feel.. human, to find the proper word.
Correction: Although he enjoys doing what he is right now and smiles at the thought that everything's working perfectly fine, he can't help but smile wider at the mishaps, an alarm to let him realize that nothing's ever perfect. It makes him feel.. human, the proper word to describe it.
Rini6189
#5
Ch. 14 mistakes (Part 2):

Although I've never really gotten a hang with most people in our school, they still hold a special place in my heart.
Correction: gotten to hang

She feels like she has an unfinished business, although she doesn't really know what it is.
Correction: She felt like she has some unfinished business; although, she didn't really know what it is.

Then suddenly, the rain poured.
Correction: Suddenly, the rain poured.

it was sunny just milliseconds ago, Why must rain pour now?
Correction: It was sunny just milliseconds ago. Why must rain pour now?

Another farewell, my love song, She thought.
Correction: Another "farewell, my love" song, she thought.

"What gives?," She said, then clicked "next"
Correction: "What gives?" She asked and then clicked "next."

Sheez, she thought, then clicked "next" again.
Correction: Sheez, she thought. Then she clicked "next" again.

Yes, I love this song, she smiled.
Correction: Yes, I love this song. She smiled.

"What's wrong with you, iPod?," she whispered, Good thing no one sat beside her yet.
Correction: "What's wrong with you, iPod?" She whispered. Good thing no one sat beside her yet.

"Hyung! When will we go back to Korea?,"
* Unnecessary comma

They were all seating on the floor of the practice room of the hotel that they rented.
Correction: They were all sitting on the floor of the practice room in the hotel that they rented.

Resting, wiping off their sweats, and drinking water and supplements.
Correction: They're resting, wiping off their sweat, and drinking water and taking supplements.
Rini6189
#6
Ch. 14 mistakes (Part 1):

Because of the news, ________ decided to go home early, to announce it to her parents.
* The extra comma after "early" should be removed.

Unexpectedly, the bus wasn't full as usual which had ________ thanking her lucky stars again.
* Comma after "usual

The ride home has always been slow. Since she lived cities away from her school.
Correction: The ride home has always been slow since she lives cities away from her school.

_______ was impatient because suddenly she feels like it'll take the bus forever to keep moving plus the broken airconditioner where she was seated, wasn't helping either.
Correction: _______ was impatient because she suddenly felt like it'd take the bus forever to keep moving. Plus, the broken air conditioner where she was seated wasn't helping either.

Today was normally hot, and her long hair's making her feel even hotter.
Correction: Today is really hot and her long hair's making her feel even hotter.

Though her country's well known for having a warm temperature, she decided not to get her hair cut whenever she's being offered to.
Correction: Though her country's well-known for having a warm temperature, she decided not to get her haircut whenever she's being offered to.

She was preparing it for when she'll see L, whose ideal type HAS to be someone who has Long & wavy hair.
Correction: She is preparing it for when she'd see L, whose ideal type HAS to be someone who has long and wavy hair.

She looked for a scrunchy or perhaps a pony tail in her bag but she can't find any so she sighed defeatedly.
Correction: She looked for a scrunchy or perhaps a hair tie in her bag, but she couldn't find any, so she sighed defeatedly.

She leaned and stared at the window while listening to songs in her iPod.
Correction: She leaned back and stared out the window while listening to the songs in her iPod.

Wanting for that person to comeback
Correction: come back
Rini6189
#7
Advancing to second place on the honor roll is a great leap toward improvement. All that studying and hard work must've paid off for her.

It seems that Sungyeol still hasn't learned his lessons about drinking coffee before going to sleep. He really is naive to not be completely aware of it. Myungsoo seems more like the hyung than he is in their relationship because of his maturity level. He actually is a deep sleeper in real life. I read from somewhere about Myungsoo revealing that he and his fellow group members take about ten minutes each to shower. Though, I don't know about him taking a little longer than that. Since he does tend to drift off into his own world when he's having some quiet time to himself, he's bound to not be conscious of the time slipping by.

This time, you're revealing facts about Myungsoo in the story rather than in author's notes.
Rini6189
#8
Ch. 13 mistakes (Part 3):

Despite his sculpture-like exterior and his godly face, Myungsoo's still human, over fatigue & lack of sleep can really be bad for the health.
Correction: Despite his sculpture-like exterior and his godly face, Myungsoo's still human. Fatigue and lack of sleep can really be bad for the health.
"I couldn't sleep last night,hyung," Myungsoo said casually.
Correction: Hyung

You're inlove?
Correction: in love

Our cold-hearted prince is inlove~~~", he shouted.
Correction: Our cold-hearted prince is in love~~~" He shouted.

Aish this Hyung.
* Comma after "aish"

Don't he know that coffee really does that? , Myungsoo thought,scratching his head.
Correction: Doesn't he know that coffee really does that? Myungsoo thought, scratching his head.

"Now if you'll excuse me, I have a date with this little miss called Americano~~", Sungyeol beamed & went out to get his drink.
Correction: "Now if you'll excuse me, I have a date with this little miss called Americano~~" Sungyeol beamed and went out to get his drink.

He dragged himself to the bathroom and showered for 12 minutes or so.
Correction: twelve

He also brushed his teeth & put on some BB cream.
* The symbol should be replaced with "and."

Myungsoo walked lifelessly & wore his usual clothes (a dark colored t-shirt + black jogging pants)
Correction: Myungsoo walked lifelessly and wore his usual clothes: a dark colored t-shirt and black jogging pants.

"Another day," he sighed.
Correction: "Another day." He sighed.

Myungsoo fixed himself breakfast with a bowl of udon & waited for Hyowan, their manager, to call him if it's time already.
Correction: Myungsoo fixed himself breakfast with a bowl of udon and waited for Hyowan, their manager, to call him when it's time already.
Rini6189
#9
Ch. 13 mistakes (Part 2):

I'll just wake him up after I'm done showering, this kid kinda takes time on the shower.
Correction: I'll just wake him up after I'm done showering. This kid kinda takes his time in the shower.

He showered for approximately 7 minutes, and wrapped a towel on his waist after he's done.
Correction: He showered for approximately seven minutes and wrapped a towel around his waist after he's done.

He was almost leaving to get his morning americano coffee from the cafe downstairs when he realized Myungsoo was still sleeping.
Correction: Americano
* It's a brand name, so it must be capitalized.

How deep could this kid sleep?
Correction: can

"YA! KIM MYUNGSOO! WAKE UP!,"
* Unnecessary comma

He jumped to his bed and tackled him, playfully.
* Unnecessary comma

"WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!",Sungyeol screamed his familiar dolphin scream which expectedly did the trick.
Correction: "WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Sungyeol screamed his familiar dolphin scream, which actually did the trick.

"I'm up!," Myungsoo said, "now get off me!"
Correction: "I'm up!" Myungsoo exclaimed. "Now get off me!"

Sungyeol smiled but then his face turned serious,
* A period should be at the end instead of a comma.

Though they've been rooming together for days, he was never used to non-make up Myungsoo.
Correction: Though they've been rooming together for days, he is never used to non-makeup Myungsoo.
Rini6189
#10
Ch. 13 mistakes (Part 1):

She beamed to class with her usual smile, without knowing why her classmates were smiling back.
Correction: She beamed to the class with her usual smile without knowing why her classmates were smiling back.

"Congratulations, ______!," Lilian said while patting her on the shoulder as she was settling to her seat.
Correction: "Congratulations, ______!" Lilian exclaimed while patting her on the shoulder as she was settling into her seat.

She look at her, confusingly, Why is she congratulating me?
Correction: She looked at her confusingly. Why is she congratulating me?

"Yeah! Let's celebrate!," Patrick said.
Correction: "Yeah! Let's celebrate!" Patrick exclaimed.

"Huh? What's happening?," she asked them innocently while smiling.
* Remove the comma and capitalize "she."

"You don't know? You're the salutatorian!," Jimmy, their valedictorian said, shaking her hand enthusiastically.
Correction: "You don't know? You're the salutatorian!" Jimmy, their valedictorian, announced while shaking her hand enthusiastically.

"Really?,"
* Unnecessary comma

"Congratulations bestfriend! From the 3rd spot, you've managed to be on the second spot, just in time for graduation!"
Correction: "Congratulations, best friend! From the 3rd spot, you've managed to be on the second spot just in time for graduation!"

"Wow...," __________ just said.
* Unnecessary comma

It was unexpected, she only wanted to pass her year and she never really bothered about the rankings and now, she's the second highest in her Thank you, my 7 lucky stars.
Correction: It was unexpected. She only wanted to pass her year and she never really bothered about the rankings, and now she's the second highest in her class. Thank you, my seven lucky stars.

8 am was their call time but it's already 6:30 and Myungsoo hasn't risen up from his bed yet.
Correction: 8 AM is their call time, but it's already 6:30 and Myungsoo hasn't risen up from his bed yet.