ONE.

You stared at the wall clock as the teacher gives the lecture, She was eager for the class to dismiss. It's not the last day of school, but still she's too excited to go home and check her facebook & the Infinite pages for updates.

*RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING*

The bell rung and because of adrenaline rush, she stood up from her seat, ready to put her backpack on.

"What's wrong, miss?," asked her English teacher.

"Ah.. sir.. the bell rung already.. it's dismissal already," she answered, stuttering but managing to keep a confident look on her face.

"We're not yet done with the lesson, sit down please," he said with a straight face.

Mr. Cajucom was one of the most strictest teacher in the school but according to the others, he goes well with the other students. He was bald at one portion, and already in his mid 40's.

The class looked at you you and laughed, trying to hide it, and she took her seat because of embarassment.

Why study English when we speak of the language everyday? Stupid, idiot, nincompoop... she cursed inside her mind. Damn it, DAMN THIS, This is pointless.

"Be patient," he told you , smiling now, apparently hiding his laughter from her,too.

"Now class, you can go after you answer my questions.." he started.

Just answer his question huh. She thought, already formulating a plan in her head.

You 's face lit up and she threw her backpack outside the room.

"Who did that?" her teacher asked.

"Me, sir!" she said,raising her hand.

You stood up and sneakily ran out the classroom, smiling at how clever she is.

In the other part of the planet, Myungsoo is sleeping in the plane back to Korea, his eyes covered by a blindfold.

He's sitting beside Sungyeol who apparently cannot sleep with all the coffee he had.

Sungyeol was turning fitfully, he don't know how to sleep in the seat although it's comfortable.

"UGH! I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!," Sungyeol shouted.

"Shh.." Myungsoo said, without opening his eyes.

If I can't sleep, then you should not sleep,too, Sungyeol thought, his face irritated on how soundly all the others are sleeping.

He was jealous. He wanted to sleep too but he can't curse the coffee he's still drinking like water.

He took a sip at the coffee and found it's already empty.

"UGH! I'm bored!" he ranted.

"Shh.." Myungsoo said again, without moving a muscle except the one's on his lips.

"Ya! Are you awake?" Sungyeol asked Myungsoo.

"I'm sleeping." he replied.

"Then how come you can answer me?"

"because you're noisy and I can't sleep."

A light bulb popped out of Sungyeol's mind.

"If that's the case then let's play a game, I'm bored!!" Sungyeol whined.

"I want to sleep, hyung" Myungsoo said.

"But you can't! just like me! so you should stop trying! We can go to sleep once we're in the dorm anyway," he persuaded Myungsoo.

Myungsoo didn't say anything.

"Ya! Ya!" Sungyeol started, shaking Myungsoo's shoulder.

Myungsoo tried to sleep and ignored Sungyeol.

"Aish. This person! I thought he said he can't sleep," Sungyeol said, still irritated.

He took a pen and planned vengeance on Myungsoo.

"Ah jinjja!" Myungsoo said as he wiped his face with a towel.

"Hyung.. what happened?" Sungjong asked, urging not to laugh.

"That's what you get on ignoring me!" he said, laughing at Myungsoo.

As Myungsoo slept, Sungyeol drew on his face to kill his own boredom and took a picture of it via his cellphone

He grabbed his mouth mask and wore it, at least Sungyeol drew on the bottom half of my face only, he thought.

"HAHAHAHA! I'm going to post this on twitter!" Sungyeol threatened him.

"YA! Sungyeol hyung!" Myungsoo shouted, annoyed.

He can't hear what Myungsoo just said but he was satisfied with what he's done. He ran off, offering Myungsoo to chase after him and he did.

The manager stopped them before they get far.

"Ya! You two! Stop foolling around and get inside the car!" Manager Gonam shouted.

They obeyed him and raced their way to the van like kids.

When they reached the car door they elbowed each other, not giving way to who can enter the van first.

Myungsoo and Sungyeol sat at the back of the van, beside each other and not acknowledging each other as if they're in a cold war.

"What's up with those two?" Manager Gonam drove as he asked Sunggyu who was beside him.

"I don't know," Sunggyu answered, still unable to know what's going on with the jetlag.

"Ya! Why are you two fighting again?" Manager Gonam finally asked Sungyeol and Myungsoo.

The two of them stayed quiet, elbowing each other, but Myungsoo took of his mouth mask.

"Hahaha.Sungyeol sshi~ What have you done to our visual's face?" Dongwoo asked when he saw the drawings on the Myungsoo's face.

Myungsoo have him a look.

"That's okay! He's more handsome now" Woohyun said as he laughed.

"Sungyeol ah! Why did you do that? Don't ever do it again, okay?" Manager Gonam said but he also tried not to laugh.

"It's just a prank" Sungyeol said, smiling, not acting guilty at all.

"Hyungnim! he said he'll upload my picture on twitter!" Myungsoo complained.

"What? No, don't do that Sungyeol! We'll lose our visual" Managernim pleaded.

"Why not?" asked Sungyeol.

"With that face, no one will take him seriously anymore," Gonam replied and the lot laughed at Myungsoo.

They finally got home and Myungsoo made his way to his bed.

"I'm still serious, you know" Sungyeol threatened as he appeared by the doorway, flaunting his phone. "I'm going to upload it if it's the last thing I do!"

"Whatever!" Myungsoo just said as he got some shut eye.

Myungsoo woke in the middle of the night, the stars were nowhere to be found, it's just..dark but he's used to it. For 20 years he's been addicted to the darkness, addicted to the color black.

He tried to sleep again but his tummy grumbled for he's not eaten dinner so he made his way to the kitchen and drank a glass of milk.

When he got back to his room, he saw a light coming from Sungyeol's phone.

THAT gave him an idea.

He watched his step, sneakily walking to get Sungyeol's phone.

HA~ Sungyeol Hyung won't threaten me anymore! he thought, thinking how clever his plan is.

He knelt down beside Sungyeol's bed and grabbed the phone slowly and subtly.

When he successfully grabbed the phone, he deleted the picture quickly.

Aha! That takes care of everything!, he thought.

He almost stood up when he felt a hand grabbing his wrist.

He looked at the hand and saw Sungyeol, wide awake.

"Mehrong! I saved that picture on my laptop already!" Sungyeol said, smiling evily.

AISH THIS HYUNG! >.<

Facts:

Sungyeol loves to play prank on other members
Sungyeol is a light sleeper (Any sound or movement can wake him up)
Myungsoo & Sungyeol "hates" each other. (Haha. They listed each other as the thing they hate the most x)) )
One of their Manager is Ryu Gonam
Myungsoo said he's been inlove with the color black for 20 years xD

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Rini6189 #1 Jun 26, 2012 22:59:39

Since he had experience being in Japan for his filming schedule of a Japanese drama, Myungsoo is better at speaking and understanding Japanese than his fellow group members. It seems like another unsuccessful attempt for her to get her message across to this so-called roleplayer of Myungsoo. Words have no emotional content to them when they're not spoken. That explains why he doesn't seem to be affected by them from reading it. Since his English isn't very fluent here, that excuses him for being unable to completely understand what she messaged him. He is being genuine by not acting friendly when he really isn't being that way. This is proving to be a real challenge to go up against someone who is not fluent in English.

The only Japanese that I know are from watching anime (with English subtitles) and reading manga. I just don't know how to read kanji since I've never learned it.

Rini6189 #2 Jun 26, 2012 21:53:31

Maybe she's so eager to go home right away to check her Facebook feed. It is weird to see Myungsoo "obsessing" (according to Hoya) over udon. If I have to continue eating the same thing over and over again, I'd grow tired of it easily and not want to eat it for a while. The other food that he's addicted to is kimchi. He does carry a small amount of it in his personal carrier bag wherever he goes. It's obvious that Sungyeol doesn't want Myungsoo to get the sheets dirty. They practically share the bed while rooming with each other. Sungyeol's definitely "married" to a Taeyeon roleplayer of Facebook. Since there's no chance of that happening in real life, he could have that fulfilled in his own dream world. That makes him no different from typical guys that daydream about their ideal girls. That status change shouldn't be a big deal since it's no secret that he has a big crush on Taeyeon. Sungyeol does have a thing for younger girls. Although she is older than him, Taeyeon does have a youthful appeal about her that makes her seem young for her age.

Rini6189 #3 May 27, 2012 23:24:09

Yes, it does look like you're stalling for time here. This is slowly building up to the point where she'd get to meet with Myungsoo face-to-face. I don't know what "PBB Teens" is about since I've never heard of it.

Maybe it's fate reaching out to her feelings by randomly playing those sad songs. It might be a way of getting her to re4alize what she's feeling deep down.

Girls with long hair must look more appealing/attractive to him than those with short hair. Everybody has their own preferences. In reality, it's really the heart that matters when it comes to love.

It's true that there's no perfection in anything in life. There's always the good and the bad. Life is full of obstacles.

Rini6189 #4 May 27, 2012 23:01:17

Ch. 14 mistakes (Part 3):

"April one's our concert in Korea," Myungsoo answered.
Correction: "April first is our concert in Korea," Myungsoo answered.

"We'll go back, 2 days before, I guess."
Correction: "We'll go back two days before that, I guess."

2 days before a schedule, they'll go there, when there's enough time.
Correction: Two days before a schedule, they'll go there when there's enough time.

But if the schedule's way too strict, it's hours after the schedule before.
Correction: If the schedule's way too strict, it's hours after the schedule before.

It's the 5th week of March, and they're practicing intensely everyday for preparation.
Correction: It's the fifth week of March. They've been practicing intensely everyday for preparation.

They went over each dances and practice them.
Correction: They went over each dance routine and practiced them.

From Comeback again to Covergirl, every step should be perfect or else it's back to the first track again.
Correction: "Come Back Again" to "Cover Girl,"

"This is life," Myungsoo sighed under his breath.
* A period should be in place of the comma since sighing is not a verbal action.

Everything seems to have a pattern, everyday is like a routine, nothing's new.
* The conjunction "and" should be added before "nothing."

And although he enjoyed what he is right now; though he smiles at the thought that everything's working perfectly fine, he can't help but smile wider at the mishaps, an alarm to let him realize nothing's ever perfect, it makes him feel.. human, to find the proper word.
Correction: Although he enjoys doing what he is right now and smiles at the thought that everything's working perfectly fine, he can't help but smile wider at the mishaps, an alarm to let him realize that nothing's ever perfect. It makes him feel.. human, the proper word to describe it.

Rini6189 #5 May 27, 2012 23:00:44

Ch. 14 mistakes (Part 2):

Although I've never really gotten a hang with most people in our school, they still hold a special place in my heart.
Correction: gotten to hang

She feels like she has an unfinished business, although she doesn't really know what it is.
Correction: She felt like she has some unfinished business; although, she didn't really know what it is.

Then suddenly, the rain poured.
Correction: Suddenly, the rain poured.

it was sunny just milliseconds ago, Why must rain pour now?
Correction: It was sunny just milliseconds ago. Why must rain pour now?

Another farewell, my love song, She thought.
Correction: Another "farewell, my love" song, she thought.

"What gives?," She said, then clicked "next"
Correction: "What gives?" She asked and then clicked "next."

Sheez, she thought, then clicked "next" again.
Correction: Sheez, she thought. Then she clicked "next" again.

Yes, I love this song, she smiled.
Correction: Yes, I love this song. She smiled.

"What's wrong with you, iPod?," she whispered, Good thing no one sat beside her yet.
Correction: "What's wrong with you, iPod?" She whispered. Good thing no one sat beside her yet.

"Hyung! When will we go back to Korea?,"
* Unnecessary comma

They were all seating on the floor of the practice room of the hotel that they rented.
Correction: They were all sitting on the floor of the practice room in the hotel that they rented.

Resting, wiping off their sweats, and drinking water and supplements.
Correction: They're resting, wiping off their sweat, and drinking water and taking supplements.

Rini6189 #6 May 27, 2012 22:59:15

Ch. 14 mistakes (Part 1):

Because of the news, ________ decided to go home early, to announce it to her parents.
* The extra comma after "early" should be removed.

Unexpectedly, the bus wasn't full as usual which had ________ thanking her lucky stars again.
* Comma after "usual

The ride home has always been slow. Since she lived cities away from her school.
Correction: The ride home has always been slow since she lives cities away from her school.

_______ was impatient because suddenly she feels like it'll take the bus forever to keep moving plus the broken airconditioner where she was seated, wasn't helping either.
Correction: _______ was impatient because she suddenly felt like it'd take the bus forever to keep moving. Plus, the broken air conditioner where she was seated wasn't helping either.

Today was normally hot, and her long hair's making her feel even hotter.
Correction: Today is really hot and her long hair's making her feel even hotter.

Though her country's well known for having a warm temperature, she decided not to get her hair cut whenever she's being offered to.
Correction: Though her country's well-known for having a warm temperature, she decided not to get her haircut whenever she's being offered to.

She was preparing it for when she'll see L, whose ideal type HAS to be someone who has Long & wavy hair.
Correction: She is preparing it for when she'd see L, whose ideal type HAS to be someone who has long and wavy hair.

She looked for a scrunchy or perhaps a pony tail in her bag but she can't find any so she sighed defeatedly.
Correction: She looked for a scrunchy or perhaps a hair tie in her bag, but she couldn't find any, so she sighed defeatedly.

She leaned and stared at the window while listening to songs in her iPod.
Correction: She leaned back and stared out the window while listening to the songs in her iPod.

Wanting for that person to comeback
Correction: come back

Rini6189 #7 May 27, 2012 21:56:18

Advancing to second place on the honor roll is a great leap toward improvement. All that studying and hard work must've paid off for her.

It seems that Sungyeol still hasn't learned his lessons about drinking coffee before going to sleep. He really is naive to not be completely aware of it. Myungsoo seems more like the hyung than he is in their relationship because of his maturity level. He actually is a deep sleeper in real life. I read from somewhere about Myungsoo revealing that he and his fellow group members take about ten minutes each to shower. Though, I don't know about him taking a little longer than that. Since he does tend to drift off into his own world when he's having some quiet time to himself, he's bound to not be conscious of the time slipping by.

This time, you're revealing facts about Myungsoo in the story rather than in author's notes.

Rini6189 #8 May 27, 2012 21:45:41

Ch. 13 mistakes (Part 3):

Despite his sculpture-like exterior and his godly face, Myungsoo's still human, over fatigue & lack of sleep can really be bad for the health.
Correction: Despite his sculpture-like exterior and his godly face, Myungsoo's still human. Fatigue and lack of sleep can really be bad for the health.
"I couldn't sleep last night,hyung," Myungsoo said casually.
Correction: Hyung

You're inlove?
Correction: in love

Our cold-hearted prince is inlove~~~", he shouted.
Correction: Our cold-hearted prince is in love~~~" He shouted.

Aish this Hyung.
* Comma after "aish"

Don't he know that coffee really does that? , Myungsoo thought,scratching his head.
Correction: Doesn't he know that coffee really does that? Myungsoo thought, scratching his head.

"Now if you'll excuse me, I have a date with this little miss called Americano~~", Sungyeol beamed & went out to get his drink.
Correction: "Now if you'll excuse me, I have a date with this little miss called Americano~~" Sungyeol beamed and went out to get his drink.

He dragged himself to the bathroom and showered for 12 minutes or so.
Correction: twelve

He also brushed his teeth & put on some BB cream.
* The symbol should be replaced with "and."

Myungsoo walked lifelessly & wore his usual clothes (a dark colored t-shirt + black jogging pants)
Correction: Myungsoo walked lifelessly and wore his usual clothes: a dark colored t-shirt and black jogging pants.

"Another day," he sighed.
Correction: "Another day." He sighed.

Myungsoo fixed himself breakfast with a bowl of udon & waited for Hyowan, their manager, to call him if it's time already.
Correction: Myungsoo fixed himself breakfast with a bowl of udon and waited for Hyowan, their manager, to call him when it's time already.

Rini6189 #9 May 27, 2012 21:44:52

Ch. 13 mistakes (Part 2):

I'll just wake him up after I'm done showering, this kid kinda takes time on the shower.
Correction: I'll just wake him up after I'm done showering. This kid kinda takes his time in the shower.

He showered for approximately 7 minutes, and wrapped a towel on his waist after he's done.
Correction: He showered for approximately seven minutes and wrapped a towel around his waist after he's done.

He was almost leaving to get his morning americano coffee from the cafe downstairs when he realized Myungsoo was still sleeping.
Correction: Americano
* It's a brand name, so it must be capitalized.

How deep could this kid sleep?
Correction: can

"YA! KIM MYUNGSOO! WAKE UP!,"
* Unnecessary comma

He jumped to his bed and tackled him, playfully.
* Unnecessary comma

"WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!",Sungyeol screamed his familiar dolphin scream which expectedly did the trick.
Correction: "WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Sungyeol screamed his familiar dolphin scream, which actually did the trick.

"I'm up!," Myungsoo said, "now get off me!"
Correction: "I'm up!" Myungsoo exclaimed. "Now get off me!"

Sungyeol smiled but then his face turned serious,
* A period should be at the end instead of a comma.

Though they've been rooming together for days, he was never used to non-make up Myungsoo.
Correction: Though they've been rooming together for days, he is never used to non-makeup Myungsoo.

Rini6189 #10 May 27, 2012 21:41:22

Ch. 13 mistakes (Part 1):

She beamed to class with her usual smile, without knowing why her classmates were smiling back.
Correction: She beamed to the class with her usual smile without knowing why her classmates were smiling back.

"Congratulations, ______!," Lilian said while patting her on the shoulder as she was settling to her seat.
Correction: "Congratulations, ______!" Lilian exclaimed while patting her on the shoulder as she was settling into her seat.

She look at her, confusingly, Why is she congratulating me?
Correction: She looked at her confusingly. Why is she congratulating me?

"Yeah! Let's celebrate!," Patrick said.
Correction: "Yeah! Let's celebrate!" Patrick exclaimed.

"Huh? What's happening?," she asked them innocently while smiling.
* Remove the comma and capitalize "she."

"You don't know? You're the salutatorian!," Jimmy, their valedictorian said, shaking her hand enthusiastically.
Correction: "You don't know? You're the salutatorian!" Jimmy, their valedictorian, announced while shaking her hand enthusiastically.

"Really?,"
* Unnecessary comma

"Congratulations bestfriend! From the 3rd spot, you've managed to be on the second spot, just in time for graduation!"
Correction: "Congratulations, best friend! From the 3rd spot, you've managed to be on the second spot just in time for graduation!"

"Wow...," __________ just said.
* Unnecessary comma

It was unexpected, she only wanted to pass her year and she never really bothered about the rankings and now, she's the second highest in her Thank you, my 7 lucky stars.
Correction: It was unexpected. She only wanted to pass her year and she never really bothered about the rankings, and now she's the second highest in her class. Thank you, my seven lucky stars.

8 am was their call time but it's already 6:30 and Myungsoo hasn't risen up from his bed yet.
Correction: 8 AM is their call time, but it's already 6:30 and Myungsoo hasn't risen up from his bed yet.