GD's House

Barbie Domination

     Lurching to a stop, the car became stagnant as did the breath in TOP's chest. TOP swallowed his words, as a man dressed in a highlighter pink suit bent down from in front of the security gates. Before he could even say a word, TOP whipped out a golden card that read his name, and the guard swiftly fell back on the balls of his feet, and his stomach pulsed.

"Oh yes, I'm sorry!" he said as if he did a grave thing---he hadn't noticed this was the one and only TOP the ruler of Seoul pretty much. The police couldn't even rival this brilliant player----this king. TOP nodded at the man with heavy lids, he really hoped his daughter destroyed this boy---for he couldn't except the fact she was beating herself up because of it. The house ahead was painted in graffiti, GD was always  the wacky one of the brotherly quintet, none the less it was quite appealing and alluring to the eye. He veered off to the side and stopped his car into the reserved garage with lights strung all over it. TOP looked at his daughter's face twisting with anticipation, she hungered this---to beat the living daylights out of her enemy, he felt proud. It meant she wouldn't give up.

 

 Once word was messaged to GD that TOP had entered his estate, he made a smile

"What does he want?" he didn't sound like he was snarling, in fact he seemed rather                                                          delighted. 

"He says he'd like to discuss it in private," said the usher, with black fluffy poms for shoulder accessories, on his jean jacket. GD looked into the screen intently,

"Alright send him up," he hadn't seen the child at the elder brother's side but he expected the matter was important. Swiftly the escalator slinked from the bottom, upwards off the ground, 

"I know you'll win," TOP said, BOM was going to bring the other girls who had gone off shopping as TOP had promised to take the hungering child and her sisters to GD's warehouse. Words dribbled from , but they were incoherent in his ears---she was pumping herself up before finally saying

"I won't lose," though her mind was blaring with fear---what if she did lose? Interrupting her froth of thoughts; the elevator snapped with the arrival of the floor GD stood on. GD had insisted on leaving his office though he was to be concoting a plan to eliminate theft in some of the stores he owned, like Liquid Apple designer stores and Heartbreaker Kareoke buildings, that dotted his part of south Seoul. He smiled as soon as he saw TOP who gave him a nonchalant, rather emotionless look. Then his brown spheres dropped their sights on a quaint female standing tall, up to TOP's diaphragm. At least she gleaned at him, her eye smile baffled him, causing him to sigh in adoration,

"You brought my princess?!" he said spreading his arms to her. Willingly she went, and took in his deep cologne and the freshness of his suit---which smelled nothing similar to TOP who had the puncturing aroma of his missions out on the streets. TOP glared at the contact

"She's my daughter," he mumbled but GD waved him off

"I'll switch one of my sons for your daughters one of these days," his joke only reached TOP's princess. 

"I'll keep my girls," TOP said in somewhat of a sugary tone---though he was lacked enthusiasm. He studied GD whom had shaved off one side of his head and grew out the other, and dipped the black ends of his hair in a blonde dye. GD looked up away from the girl ushering TOP to his side

"So what brings you here?" he asked while holding the girl's hand. TOP breathed 

"About the tournament today,"

"TOP you're not the type to congratulate…," it made TOP smile that GD was thinking that TOP had come here to congratulate that bastard kid of GD's for defeating one of his precious princesses. 

"You know me so well, because sadly that wasn't what I was here for," GD looked over at TOP knowingly after hearing his answer then looked towards a opening with beads showering down from the ceiling. 

"I can hope can't I?" he snickered at his stupidity, "So what about the tournament?"

TOP looked at his daughter who looked up at him as if to tell him to just spit out the words.

"She wants to have a rematch with your son," now that caused GD to stop in mid-stride.

"Say what now?" he asked utterly baffled.

"You heard him," peeped the darling at his left. TOP inwardly smiled at the toughness of his daughter---indeed she resembled him a lot. GD faked a smile

"I don't think that's a great idea,"

"It's her wish," pressured TOP. GD looked between the two firm glances

"If you insist, just be warned he fights like a thug out of battles,"

"News flash my daughter's a gangster," GD laughed to himself at TOP's edgy tone as they pushed through the dangling chains of beads and entered a living room area.

"Okay, I'll inform my son," he walked out and left the two there.

 When he came back, the boy trotted out with calculating eyes. His black hair flounced over his eyes as he looked down on the girl

"This that simpleton I beat down today?" he said crudely. TOP's eyes flamed with rage

"What did that brat just say?!"

"Excuse him, he has harsh language sometimes," GD gave him a look that promised he would hurt him, and the boy bowed apologetically---to and extent

"I mean, I will not back down from your offer," he said. GD smiled at the words, 

"So lets get down to the training room," he lead them away with TOP next to him to talk. GD growled

"You know she can't beat him,"

"Why're you so sure,"

"I just don't want to see my princess get hurt again,"

"She'll be fine,"

"She's being rash---like you,"

"As they say, she's daddy's little girl," GD looked at TOP with a pained looking, seeing the brutality of his son against---partially his princess hurt just as much as when another child of his was sent to the hospital for injuries----and GD didn't let that go---AT ALL.

   Behind the two, the competitors shot glares at each other

"You ready to get you're kicked again?"

"Are you ready for me to mess you up?" she recoiled. The boy smiled amusingly

"You couldn't except defeat?"

"Not by a 'simpleton' like you," she incorporated his earlier insult into her words.

"Oh, so you're a smart huh,"

"Trust me, I'm more than that,"

"Don't start crying when I lay you out,"

"Thats if you can knock me down again,"

 

       The other boys had gathered in the room as well and the other sisters quietly snuck in as the two stared at each other in the wrestling pit in the training room. GD prayed that this went well. 

"GO!" adrenaline sang in her veins, and became her blood source as she watched him shoot forwards. She raised a leg and chopped his arm down to pin him down with that foot. She planned out punching him across his evil face but he kneed her and then kicked her off of him, without the slightest hesitation to be this brutal with a girl. She arose in milliseconds moving aside as he had jumped up to deliver a flying punch. He butterfly span sideways, his legs out as if to kid her and she dodged accordingly and timed her hit right to plow a fist into his stomach. He flailed backwards in a matter of seconds.

"Oh!" his brothers gasped. Feeling confident she ran towards him only for him to recover and charge her way too

"AHHH!" they yelled in unison he was surprised by the array of punches and slithering jabs she threw his way, he blocked each with his forearms, and then he grabbed her arm. Oh no this was the same move he used back at the Black Records Tournaments. He grabbed her other---oh gawd not again! Panicking she watched him jump and shoot out his legs, ing them into her chest and flipping off her. She flew backwards as did he but he made sure to land safely with his quick aerial turn, and then he hit the platform with his feet; when if he hadn't turned he'd fall flat on his back. Agony pussed under her chest, and the pain of it before rushed back to her…she hated that move. 

"Princess!" TOP's voice pounded the walls. She couldn't let him down---so she got up as quick as she could, avoiding his leading kick that had left her on the ground in the previous match. She corkscrewed her body past hits and curled her leg around him shoving him down in one sudden movement. He hit the ground with her foot pushed into his back. She stepped away from him readying herself for what he was going to do now. He rose again and she blocked his rushed punch and punched him with her free hand. She knived him with her legs in the chest, in the stomach and back. He jumped over a sliding kick and then kicked her left ways

"OOOOO!" her sisters said in fright. He did another aerial dive, and his feet crunched into her back

"SAY YOU SURRENDER!" Bom yelled out with tears touching her eyes. Yes, this was a brutal fight---but they were used to it. She held back tears as he grabbed her off of the ground, and she stand limply and in pain.

"Didn't I tell you I'd beat your ?" that sparked a new determination. She used his shoulders as firm grips and pressed all her weight against him whiled also cutting her foot into the back of his knees. He crumbled with her weight making his impact on the ground rougher. He grabbed her arms and turned them over so that he could smash his knuckles against her…perfect face. She blocked using her forearm and banged her forehead against his. Pain split in her mind, and he felt the same sensation. But then he was under again and she launched a barrade of hits

"EEEAHHHH!" she screamed at the top of her lungs. He was about to say surrender when he beating stopped; as she noticed TOP, the man with ice cream blue hair….no longer was here supporting her. He took this opportunity to attack and grabbed the hem of her shirt and yanked her sideways, though her legs were tight around his sides, which brought him halfway over with her, her legs were crushing the thighs of one of his legs. He elbowed her in the chest to get her to loosen grip. She did and he took that as the opportunity to do a butterfly flip and stomp his foot into her stomach

"Oww," she mumbled through a quiet cry. He saw her tears and held his breath

"I win," he told them. 

"I didn't say surrender," she managed to whine, at this the boy turned abruptly to kick her aside 

"I'll stop if you give up," he said only to her. She finally quieted down, Mia laid back utterly restless. TOP was gone and everything blurred as she closed her eyes and tears surfaced again.

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story officially starts tomorrow! Cannot wait, though I'm pulling out chunks of hair trying to pick between all my applicants!

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-xmunstrr
#1
Just XxChuu dropping by to say I changed my username!
Now I'm -xmunstrr!
inkspill #2
@ShiKy25
interesting observation, I guess I'll have to update often so you can see how I planned out this story
*starts working on the chapter she's on*
ShiKy25
#3
I Pity BOm...
Hmm~
If TOP died when the barbies are still young.. It means that.. they've been searching for the stupid killer for many years now and still failed to do so......well.. Goodluck to them..

T^T.. he shouldn't die this early... poor girls~
--mrsjae
#4
TOP will be dead ?? This early ? Aww =( who the hell want to kill him !? Poor BOM. Cliffhanger -.- . Its alright ! =D i'm looking forward to the next chapter
secretseweet
#5
Omg who the hell want to kill him will seriously in deep !!!
Poor Bom has to worry about so many thing >.<
I hope Mia will forgive him
Please let nothing happen to him*crossed finger*
-xmunstrr
#6
...Who did it!?!
I'm like, clinging to the edge of my seat!
TOP is dying, huh?
The next chapter is going to be sad isn't it?
Such a cliffhanger!! TT-TT
Why~~~~
But great job author-nim!! ^^
Can't wait for the next update!
lookitskasper
#7
Oh my god, I knew it was coming but... NOOOO! TOOOOOP! Is he gonna show up dead in the next chapter? I thought the barbies would be older when he was killed, it would if they were still like little kids.
And poor Bom, she has so many worries between the Barbies and TOP.
tiara-
#8
Omg this was an amazing chapter!! I thought Top would have already died when the mysterious person was about to pull the trigger I was releved when you should up I cant wait for the next chapter^^
ShiKy25
#9
Whoohoohooo~ TOP has a lot of barbies.. ^^
ChOrCeE
#10
whoa! that's a great news..everyone got chosen which means..1..2..3..4..5..8? T.O.P has 8 barbies in total?Wow! (*claps*)
ow~ just read the official chapter..Ya! T.O.P appa..why did you left Mia?