When love begins

Description

Losing your heart resembles losing your mind. A two-shot told from Kris' (Chapter 1) and Chen's (Chapter 2) point of view. Two short poem-fics.

Foreword

Improved, spell checked, third chapter will be added.

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Chenchenlay #1
Chapter 2: Oh My Chen...is it done ? Sob Sob
XiaoMei17
#2
Chapter 2: Ohmygosh, you actually ended it like that......... O.O
onetruethree801
#3
Chapter 2: I.CANNOT.ACCEPT.THIS

WAEEE ;; T^T
xellamari #4
Chapter 2: Awww this is nice! Please let them confess <3
kitten83
#5
Chapter 2: Awwww...i wan a confession...hope u will make a sequel out of it
dinda_dira
#6
please make a last chapter more
that was cool
i love it
Mie_xD
#7
Love this but dont really like the ending T_T i want to see (read) it when Chen told Kris that he loves him <33333

Your writing style is lovely when you write pink and it kind of hurtful when you write angst T-T

Thk for writing this fic
renprix
#8
oh my... I want a third chapter~! Pwease???
Versatile
#9
That was... beautiful ;__________;
mikazuki_angel #10
I didn't know why I did not subscribe to this...I'm an idiot...I swear I thought I did so that I could get the update...but I didn't
This fic was the first ChenRis that I encountered...and hella wanted to read it...gosh I can't believe I didn't subscribe to this! D: Well anyways...as long as I got to read it then I'm fine...
Back to the story...I loved it...though it was sad...the ending was good...though they like each other... (^///^) but didn't say a thing...we can assume that this is Chen's way to build the courage to say anything about his feelings to Kris...It is "When Love Begins" so...they can walk at their own pace at love....
Loved this fic!! So much!! If you plan to put up another chapter...the confession chapter...that's even better...MORE CHENRIS MOMENTS!! ^^