The Enigmatic Pieces

Description

A simple thing can affects your life in so many way. Sometimes it would bring you laughter,joy, and love. But sometimes, it would bring you nothing but loneliness, pain, and insanity.

Foreword

One street's light was standing tall, fighting as mighty as it can to light the deadly night.

On the side of the road, laid a young man. He was wearing a white school uniform, his hair was tossled all over the place as there were dirt visible in them.

The young man grunted softly, slowly opening his eyes. He raised his hand to hold his aching head as he looked around his surroundings.

 

 

 

The road was really dark. There's no street lights, no nothing. The only thing I saw shining was the moon. But there I was, standing in the middle of no where, alone. Well, I thought I was alone until I saw a little girl standing alone right across the street in front of me. The little girl was hugging a teddy bear in her chest. "Excuse me.", I called her and started walking across the street. "Hey, little girl?", I called her again when she didn't respond.

The little girl suddenly pointed towards the right end of the street. I followed her index finger and turned my head to the right. There I saw a big truck coming towards me in high speed. I was shocked, I tried to move out of the way but I can't, my body just won't move no matter how hard I tried. I turned towards the girl only to find that she's no longer standing there.

I tried to shout for help but nobody was there. I gave up. I don't know what I had got to do anymore. So I just closed my eyes until I felt a sudden jolt all over my body.....

 

 

a/n: hi guys, this is my very first fanfic that i've ever posted to public, so please forgive me if the story is not good enough :) and thank u for reading :D oh btw, pleae mind my grammar, english is not my mother language hhe :P

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Soshiss
#1
Interesting foreword, i will read it now ~
UkissistheB2st #2
Chapter 4: Update please? I really like this story so far! ^_^
TeenLoveIzInfinite #3
ohhh really ????
me tooo!!!!!
god i have writen german and math
tomorrow i will write english
god i reallly hope about posting^^
yeah you always must think poitive^^
(but i never do it^^
sometimes i call myself emo^^
but i aren't)
oh sorry and nice to meet you jenni
i hope my best friend could help you with the pic
wish me luck^^
because i am really scared
did
WoonieBeast
#4
slr~ n im so sorry for not updating so long :( i've been busy with school exam :( but im free now, i promise u i'll post more chappie x) n i love how our conversation always have positive things xD n my name is Jenni x)
TeenLoveIzInfinite #5
so i am here~~~
god we really have a conversation^^
i am very glad that you always answer my comments it's so nice that you take time to read and answer them but it have to say that our conversation have such positive things
i mean we really special all write in wall post and so on
what we do???
yeah we write here^^
and we have karma points^^
oh god it's ok if you don't update
i mean you have not update every day and i have to say that i have storys the last update was in September or July
but i am happy that you will update in the next two days because i have holidays and i really will enjoy you chapter!!!!
oh and i am Elly^^
WoonieBeast
#6
hi! im so sorry for not updating :( i promise the new chapter will be out on either wednesday or thursday :)
yay conversation -claps hands-
really? neomu gamsahamnida -bows 90 degrees- X)
you're from germany? ayayaya you're right, we're so far from each other kekekeke XD
i will definitely ask your help, thank you X)
love you too <3
TeenLoveIzInfinite #7
i see we have here an conversation^^
i like it^^ i very proud to hear that my comment make a happy people
oh you from Indonesian???
your English is very good!!!
i am from Germany (we reall far away from each other~~~)oh it's ok if there aren't any couples
i can't wait for the next chapter i mean there i will know what the girl means
and if you have problems or something you can always ask me love you<3<3<3
WoonieBeast
#8
@TeenLoveIzInfinet: thank u very much, i litterally jumped when i saw your first comment hhe :D well im from indonesia, hb u? Dont worry you will know who that little girl really is in the next chapter *ups spoiler alert :P* yeah, i really like it when the members were worrying the other member :D no, there wouldnt be any couple, sorry :( thank u for the support u gave me, really appreciate it :D

@Hwang_Abbie: thank u for loving the chapter XD i know right? Thats why i am so glad that this is just a story, really cant imagine if DongWoonie really get into an accident >_<
TeenLoveIzInfinite #9
sorry that is my third comment~~~
but my notebook has problems and one of the important things he delect!!!
i really wonder what for role the little girl plays in the story
and i considered about it very much but sorry i haven't an answer *________________* i hope you will show us it in the next chapters
because i will die if you don't do it !!!