In My Head

Description

 

Pairing: EunHae

Rating: M for psychological purpose...? /shrugs

Genre: Angst

Disclaimer: Yeah, don't I wish I owned them.

Summary: You caressed my waist, drawing shudders from me as your fingers lightly tickled me in places that only you know are ticklish. We smiled at each other and you slowly brushed your lips against mine, gently murmuring words of affection and sweet nothings. It made me giggle how your words took on a possessive feel and you kept on repeating how I was only yours and no one else’s. You were marking your territory on me and I let you ever so willingly.  You never had to worry really, for I was always yours.  I had always been yours. 

Foreword

 

 

Heyo guys!! Long time no see T_T Anyway, presenting my new fic! Its 3 in the morning and I just had the sudden inspiration for something like this. Blame my internship at the hospital for this theme, not me. Although I don't know how good this is. I tried my best, well, as best as I could without waking my roomate up with my continuous typing ._. Anyway, the story will be up in a while!

 

So enjoy! And leave a comment or two! *no pressure but offers cookies*

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DeadMeru #1
*crying till no end* I swear I really am for once. What the bloody hell Lee Donghae ??? WANNA DIE ?????? TT_____TT
So beautifully written seriously...
nonchuu
#2
Cheating is the one thing I totally cannot understand. It's not that I've ever been cheated, but I guess I'd have similar thoughts. And I really want to know how is it seen from the other side, like of the one who actually cheats.
Yeeeah, the fic was great, as always, and it really made me think about the topic...
Amalya
#3
This is very well written and I enjoyed it. It's very sad but the words do a great job of evoking emotions; from the love you know they felt in the beginning, to the confusion, anger and loss that Hyukjae experiences. The descriptions were very vivid and it was easy to see what you were describing.

As sad as it was, I liked how you handled Hyukjae's confinement too. The desperate need and uncertainty really shine through as he seems so very lost. On a side note, I even enjoyed the nurse, whose professionalism was blended with sadness quite beautifully. Thank you for writing this.
paamee #4
If going to hospitals makes such good fics..take me with you everyday!! :P
I like it how you left the end hanging!! Like there is more.. maybe for people to wonder what really happened?!!
pchu.. :*
IshidaMichaelis
#5
Omo, is Hyukjae in a mental hospital? O.o
This is so sad.. T T
How could Donghae do something like that to Hyukjae? :'(
But thanks for writing.. :)
I like how you describe Hyukjae's feeling and what had happened before. It is really in detail and I can feel the sadness in Hyukjae's heart. :)

And now I know why you choose that title for your story.. ;)

Keep up the good work! Hwaiting! ^^
IshidaMichaelis
#6
Seems interesting! I'm waiting for the update! :D