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He fixes his face, trying hard not to blush, when he notices where they have reached.
 
The bridge.
 
 

Foreword

Fifth! Carry on^^

 

Sequel To: Peeping Toms and Unnoticed Affections

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BabeThao
#1
this is amazing
DeadMeru #2
My heart officially EXPLODED due to the overload of joy/sweetness/cuteness, congrats, I love you, I'm gonna stalk you and left useless comments everywhere forever XD
idkwhatisgoingon #3
i loved the story T^T
please why don't u turn it into a multichaptered story and keep on writing?? pleasee :3
sorry if i'm too demanding xDD i simply liked it so much :D
Eunhae58 #4
I love the way you ended it :D I loved all five stories. I wish you would continue to write them but i must respect your choices in wanting to contine or not :D I will look forward to reading more of your stories c:
nonchuu
#5
How I could have missed an update of my totaly-absolutely-favourite oneshot series? Aish!<br />
I sooo love Hyukkie, he's like an ideal guy: romantic, misterious...<br />
And the best ending - while reading i was getting more and more curious how You'd end it, and it's beyond satisfying(is there even a word like that?) ~
saoumi_sjlover
#6
"On the other hand, DongHae, while trying to calm his increasingly pounding heart, tries to look at HyukJae from the corner of his eyes. And all that comes to his mind, yet again, is beautiful."<br />
I'm pretty sure Hae really thinks Hyuk is truly beautiful! It's nice how you made Hyuk complex not be Hae's problem!! Aw...^__^<br />
I don't usually read EunHae unless there's WonKyu involved, but I really like your story! Sadly, you're ending this series...wae? T_T
paamee #7
oh god oh god!! and all this time they hadn't uttered a single word??? whoa!!<br />
you're a if there isn't another update, sequel i mean!! hehe :) ;) <3
Amalya
#8
^_^ Where the other ones were sweet, this one is absolutely endearing and smile inducing the entire time. I like how you played on both their attraction to each other and the awkward self-conscious thoughts as well. It was a nice touch.<br />
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And the lack of dialogue with the exception of the line at the end suited this piece very well. Words were just not necessary when their expressions and their body language said it all. Well done my dear.<br />
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I also think that the ending is nigh on perfect. While I would be curious to see where this goes, what you've built up to this point is neatly wrapped up in that last paragraph. Thank you for writing this series. <3
smileeffects
#9
I love it just the way you left it....all of it verse,from beginning till this are beautiful...^^