[TWO SHOT] My Distant Love (내 멀리 사랑)

Description

Park Min Hee is madly in love with Kim Hyung Joon, but he doesn’t show it back. He starts seeing this other girl to cover for her, but Park Min Hee doesn't believe this. She’s starting to doubt their love for each other because of all the things she’s been through for him; netizens, paparazzi, fans, etc. Should she end this forbidden love or continue through this perilous battle?

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→ Title: My Distant Love (내 멀리 사랑)

→ Author: Ntxhee

→ Rating: PG to PG-13(;

→ Characters: SS501's Kim Hyung Joon && Park Min Hee AKA YOU with SS501 memebers as minors

→ Genre: Romantic Tragedy

→ Inspiration: Grenade by Bruno Mars >.<

→ Warnings: Only the OC belongs to me; I don't own SS501 or know them in real life. [I wish I did though. . .]

→ © Ntxhee 2011 ; All rights reserved. Distribution of any kind is prohibited without the permission of Ntxhee.

Foreword

This is my first fanfic/one shot. ^^

I'm still working, editing, etc. it right now.

Please give me feedback! (:

U P D A T E:

Just finished the first chapter.

Would love some feedback.<3

I also changed the Title from "Mankae's Distant Love" to "My Distant Love".

Hope it's okay with you guys.(:

[--♥--]

Listening to; 다른여자 말고 너 by Kim Hyung Joon♥

Currently; Procrastinating D:

LOVE YA~

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czakhareina #1
ohh a hyungjunnie fic nice.. also wrote two fanfic with HJB cause there are just a few Hyungjun fic.. ^___^<br />
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anyway *reads in fast speed *<br />
"finished" - czak<br />
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firstly let me just ask, HyungJoon here is playing as himself right, the superstar the member of ss501...?<br />
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anyway here are my comments: this part "Please don’t tell the elevator just died,” i think you need to make it more dramatic like make her scream first "NO!!!"then that is you add her mummbling "please dont let this be please dont let this be please dont let this be..." then lights turned off completely<br />
not really want to change the story, cause its nice in itself but i think you make it more dramatic in the ending, or make the ending of chapter a cliffhanger... but that is just me....<br />
LOVE IT by the way, cause elevator scenes can just go 3 ways, romantic, or a disaster.. which will it be for your story..?
Creamy-Tofu #2
Ooo interesting ^^<br />
Wonder what is going to happen in the elevator<br />
Update soon i can't wait to read more<br />
Plus i love Baby Joon hehe<br />
xx
Ntxhee #3
@Baby Doodle Thanks for enjoying the one shot!(:<br />
I might continue it when I get an idea what to do where I left off.xD
Baby_Doodle #4
Lovely bit of drama there, no?<br />
T'will be waiting for more!
Ntxhee #5
@Baby_Doodle Thanks for commenting!(:
Baby_Doodle #6
Can't Wait to read it!
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