Chapter 1: Why Me?

[TWO SHOT] My Distant Love (내 멀리 사랑)

Sample words = thoughts

“Sample words” = dialogue

Sample words= text messages

Park Min Hee’s POV

“Thanks for taking me out to tonight,” I replied.

“Yeah, whatever,” he said back.

I went inside my apartment to sit on the couch with no one to comfort me in the darkness of the night. I looked out the cloudy window to see the sky was crying with the sadness falling on to the people below. 

Why was I chosen to go through this terrible love,I thought to myself.

Suddenly something wet slid down my cheek and ran to my chin. Then more and more of it started to follow the leader.

I’ve been like this in so many situations, but why does it feel more painful this time,I thought as I made my way to my comforting bed.

The voice in my head told me:

You don’t need to cry anymore, Park Min Hee. Just go to sleep and think about this in the morning.

 

The Next Day . . .

 

I woke up this morning with a horrible headache and very dry eyes. I just put anything on today; didn’t feel like dressing really awesome.

[Outfit for the day: CLICK]

I needed some advice from my best friend in this world, so I decided to text her.

To: My BFF

From: Park Min Hee

I need help deciding on what I should do about Kim Hyung Joon.

Please meet at the Cho Co Late Café around 1O:OO.

As I made my way to the door, I grabbed my bag and keys.

“Hello Min Hee-ah,” a person with a deep voice said to me as I closed my door.

“Oh !”

Kim Hyung Joon’s POVand outfit {CLICK}

“Yah! Don’t scare me like that!” Park Min Hee yelled.

“You need to yell; I’m right here,” I replied back.

I wrapped my hands around her waist and placed my chin on her right shoulder. I could tell she was starting to blush.

“Stop giving me mix feelings, Kim Hyung Joon,” she mumbled.

“What?” I asked.

“Let go of me, Hyung Joon!” she said as she took off to the elevator.

“Wait! Min Hee! Come back!” I said as I ran after her. She ran pretty fast. She got into the empty elevator and was furiously trying to press the button to go to the lobby below. Luckily, I was fast enough to get in before the doors closed on us.

“What the hell was that for?” I asked her with anger.

Then I notice she was on her knees; crying her eyes out.

She stood back up with her back now facing me as her shoulders droop down.

 I didn’t know why she was like this; not even a clue.

“What’s wrong Min Hee?”

Park Min Hee’s POV

“You; you are what is wrong with me,” I replied as I turned to face him. Is he that stupid? He doesn’t have a damn clue what is wrong with right now? Jerk.

The elevator came to sudden jolt and the lights were flickering on and off.

“Please don’t tell the elevator just died,” I mumbled.

The lights turned off completely and I just sit back down calmly.

Oh wait; I’m stuck in the elevator with Hyung Joon!

Damn it! Why does this have to happen to me?

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This is the first chapter!(:

It's not my best work, but I really just wanted to put one up for you guys.

Comment below if I should continue or just keep it a one shot.

That's all for now.

E d i t;;

I also would like to change the title, but don't know what put.

Please comment on what it should be. Thanks.(:

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czakhareina #1
ohh a hyungjunnie fic nice.. also wrote two fanfic with HJB cause there are just a few Hyungjun fic.. ^___^<br />
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anyway *reads in fast speed *<br />
"finished" - czak<br />
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firstly let me just ask, HyungJoon here is playing as himself right, the superstar the member of ss501...?<br />
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anyway here are my comments: this part "Please don’t tell the elevator just died,” i think you need to make it more dramatic like make her scream first "NO!!!"then that is you add her mummbling "please dont let this be please dont let this be please dont let this be..." then lights turned off completely<br />
not really want to change the story, cause its nice in itself but i think you make it more dramatic in the ending, or make the ending of chapter a cliffhanger... but that is just me....<br />
LOVE IT by the way, cause elevator scenes can just go 3 ways, romantic, or a disaster.. which will it be for your story..?
Creamy-Tofu #2
Ooo interesting ^^<br />
Wonder what is going to happen in the elevator<br />
Update soon i can't wait to read more<br />
Plus i love Baby Joon hehe<br />
xx
Ntxhee #3
@Baby Doodle Thanks for enjoying the one shot!(:<br />
I might continue it when I get an idea what to do where I left off.xD
Baby_Doodle #4
Lovely bit of drama there, no?<br />
T'will be waiting for more!
Ntxhee #5
@Baby_Doodle Thanks for commenting!(:
Baby_Doodle #6
Can't Wait to read it!