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Hi author callmesiv!!

I hope you are doing well!! I am commenting to let you know that I recommended this story of yours here>>https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1556739/starfan24-story-recommends

Have a star day!!

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Chapter 4: This is a really good one short but you were able to really show how they love each other and fought to be together. Congratulations authornim

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Chapter 4: hi author callmesiv!

it was a bit of an unexpected ending..but at least she got to tell him how she really felt towards him..i was kind of hoping that she wished for them to be like thag family she saw instead of being divine beings..and just normal people instead..i wonder what that would have been like if she had actually wished that..overall great job!

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Chapter 3: hi author callmesiv!

ah so that was how she escaped him..because of his hope..which is ironically her symbol..i wonder how does the concept of nightmare have hope..it makes sense but also does not..

not to say that this chapter is lacking or anything but maybe just maybe..since i am naturally curious..what is human life like for her?how did she a previous goddess adapt to it all?was she already put on earth an adult human or did she have to grow up?maybe make a spin off of that if you are up for it..and maybe just maybe gd watching over her and protecting her from afar..

also..he would find her on that night..and she would succumb to her human desires and emotions..i am glad about this ..

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Chapter 2: hi author callmesiv!

what he did was so cruel to her..but at the same maybe she was also his ray of hope??maybe she too gave him hope just as much as he gave her fear and nightmares..maybe they are two sides of the same coin..

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Chapter 1: hi author callmesiv!

damn i am loving this so far!you did such a great job!

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Chapter 4: wow.. it made me cry.. i miss this kind of DG fanfics. so beautifully written.

Chapter 4: Wow that was really an extraordinary kind of love. I love the ending and how the story flows it's realistic evil and good are not really meant to be together. But the justice you gave to the ending of two star-crossed lovers is so good. Thank you!