Time Machine

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Another one-shot made by yours truly ^^

This inspired from SNSD's Time Machine, at first I didn't really like this song but after undestanding the lyrics and seeing the video. It's now my fave song <33

Just  a drama playing in my mind and I want to write it down. This is going to be a tear-jerking story so prepare your tissues.

Hope You guys will like this :)

This fic was reviewed by; ★The Young Forever Studios★ | Bacon&Eggs;

Foreword

"One mistake, got a one regret"

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Billa10 #1
Hea dear....can u get a sequel f dis fanfic. I rely like it!!
Its super duper interesting fanfic... I hop u cn consider it...
topmagician #2
Maybe I'll make one and thanks for the advice @Kay-tea114
I'll try If I finish updating the other stories plus finishing the other one shots :)
krismealways #3
omg, that was beautiful bby ;-;
i demand a sequel to this since the ending was sad !!
Kay_tea114 #4
*sobs* Time . Small mistakes end up making wounds on our hearts.

The only thing that bugged me was when GD hugged her after she left. When you're fed up with the person you're arguing you just simply leave without a goodbye. I felt like you should've had her "thinking" that he was sobbing on the way out or something. ^^
eternalmagnae38 #5
this made me cry. i demand a sequel! pretty please? keep it up!
vipsonexotic #6
I wanna cry T.T I love the way you interpret the lyrics. Nice job! I hope u'll make a sequel to this:)
TwinklingHana #7
Ohhhh. I wanna cry. I was listening to the song so it's kinda more real to me. :) It's really nice. <3 I just hope she does get a time machine and get back to Jiyong. ^_^
LollipopCloud9 #8
I love it!! I was listening to Time Machine while reading this so it seem real to me . I love it <3 !!!
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