Sparks fly when Niel, the new kid on the block suddenly defeats Chunji at a game of Singstar. Interest piqued, Chunji seeks to find out more about this mysterious boy.
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Chapter 7: I have been reading this for the past few days, whenever I get a chance because its so addicting and let me just say that it is truly amazing. I had such bouts of rage when things didn't go right and I sobbed my eyes out at the very end, especially when they finally admitted their love. Haha sure I looked pretty strange sitting by myself on campus and crying over my phone. Although I normally don't like it when romantic things happen for absolutely no reason, I thought the kiss in the beginning was perfect! In fact I was prepared to be really angry if nothing happened! I imagined that scene to be charged with angry and although may have wished for more, I'm so happy you made that decision to write the kiss in there. It kick started everything perfectly and was a great basis to make chunji reconsider everything from his uality to how he felt about niel. The second kiss they had made me go crazy, i was like yessss FINALLY!!!! Niel seemed so desperate to just touch chunji and make sure he was okay, I could imagine he didn't really care if he crossed a line, he probably wasn't even thinking straight. I also really loved how you wrote niel as a character, he's so straight forward and kind of cynical in the way he views life, it was cool and very refreshing to see him portrayed that way. That scene where Niel gives into Jonghyun (by the way was that Jonghyun from Shinee?) and chunji catches them made me really angry I was like WHY?! The story was still absolutely amazing though, and I don't regret the hours of sleep I lost in order to read it ^.^
Chapter 7: OMG. I read it all at once, so this is gonna be a looong comment xD
First, I read ep 1 before, and had it bookmarked. To be honest I found weird the kiss scene, like it was too sudden and with no real foundation, so it made me a little uninterested to continue the story.
Maaaany weeks later, I came across the story again, and thought about giving it another try. Oh sweet choice.
Even though I still think the story could've done without both kiss scenes, the one at chapter one and the one after the bathroom scene, altogether I think it's a prefect story.
Mostly I think the kisses are a little out of place, considering that if Niel had kissed him, then Chanhee wouldn't be feeling sooooo insecure about the younger one's feelings. I get it that he still wouldn't know if he was in love or something serious, but he at least could be positive there was some kind of attraction, but he doubts it all the time. And also, since Niel thinks of Chunji as someone that's not gay, then they kiss should've ended up differently, or it couldn't have happened at all. I don't know if I'm making myself clear lol.
But besides that, the rest of the story was just prefect. You narrative and way of describing Chunji's feelings and reactions got me screaming at the screen and biting my fingers more than once on each chapter. I totally got in the moments and in his reactions and feelings, and even though I never like it when the "i love you" part comes because it's usually really hurried, here it was just at the right time. And I could totally understand Niel's frustation and still believe that he was in love with Chunji. Same for Chunji, who was so obsessed to know what was going on in Niel's mind that made him fall for him unknowingly. I really liked it. I really did.
And I totally fangirled with the last ep, the little fluff part at the end was so cute askjdkasjdhajdhkajdhkjahdakjshdkadjh.
I really hope I get to read more Chuniel fanfics from you!!! :D :D :D
Sorry it's such a long comment!
Chapter 7: For being such a short fic, it all folded out pretty nicely. No loose ends or wishing for some sort of completion. It was really nice, is what I am getting at. Well done ~
Chapter 7: I'm totally in love with this fanfic. Someone already said that you have wide vocabulary. I agree. And this is also the reason why sometimes I needed dictionary. XD I'm learning english in school but it's not the same like born in England. Anyway, this isn't important.
At first it was a little boring and I was wondering when they will be together but now, after reading I think it is good that they confess at last chapter. I like the fact that chapters are long. There may not be a lot of them but they are long and I'm not feeling like something is missing. I really enjoyed reading. I was mad, happy, I laughed and I even cried. There was everything. You did good job. I think I'll get back to this fanfic in future.
(I'm really sorry for my english. I now it's not the best. I was wondering if I should wirte this comment or not but I decided to do it because I know that when I get comments about something I write, I always smile because this is sign that someone read this.)
Hwaiting~
Chapter 7: I'm totally in love with this fanfic. Someone already said that you have wide vocabulary. I agree. And this is also the reason why sometimes I needed dictionary. XD I'm learning english in school but it's not the same like born in England. Anyway, this isn't important.
At first it was a little boring and I was wondering when they will be together but now, after reading I think it is good that they confess at last chapter. I like the fact that chapters are long. There may not be a lot of them but they are long and I'm not feeling like something is missing. I really enjoyed reading. I was mad, happy, I laughed and I even cried. There was everything. You did good job. I think I'll get back to this fanfic in future.
(I'm really sorry for my english. I now it's not the best. I was wondering if I should wirte this comment or not but I decided to do it because I know that when I get comments about something I write, I always smile because this is sign that Someone
Hahaha, God, they had SOO much tension I couldn't even stand it..
I was like off thee edge of my seat when Chunji asked him out. XD.
They ending was freaking sweet. <33 Chunji, tsk, tsk, tsk. An idiot fer sure ♥
okay done reading this. what can i say? hmmm... you have a very wide vocabulary (so vast, i like it) and patience in writing. though i actually felt bored at the beginning because of the many words but because it was well composed, i went on. i also see deep thoughts in there which is kinda refreshing from all the simple thoughts and plots i have been reading here in aff. niel's character is a great one. :) i enjoyed the last chapter where he would just talk his thoughts out. and oh, i love the ending. loved that they still made it out smooth. good going! thumbs up! :)
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