prologue

Her Light

00: Weddings could bring you biggest joy but also a tragedy. 



 

"I, Chanyeol, take thee Sooyoung to be my wedded wife," the priest began, waiting for Chanyeol to repeat. 

The male let no sound. He simply stared at the spot before him, ignoring everybody, including Sooyoung next to him who was confused as priest. This wasn't the time for his games. There are people and she doesn't like humiliating herself before so many guests.

At the corner of her eye, she caught Kaeri and Joohyun glaring at Chanyeol. If the glare could kill, Chanyeol would be dead. She grew tired of his jokes, he should know better. She would have stern talk later with him. 

"Chanyeol."

"Dude.." Jongin warned, "grow up, this is no fun anymore."

Still silence. 

Her fiance was taking too long to respond, his eyes were unfocused. He kept glancing towards her best friend Byul, as if she would give him sort of response.  It was absurd. Yet again, a worm of doubt appeared. There was something at the way she looked at him.

A look of a pure love is reserved for your boyfriend instead of your best friend's fiance.

The first sign was before her but she ignored it. 

Her stomach turned into knott, when her best friend got up, ignoring judgemental gazes of people. Unbothered, the other female stared at Chanyeol, ignoring her entirely.  The look he gave her was the look of someone whom he can't have, a look of a pure torture.

An intense pain clenched her heart; still not ready to believe. 

She had refused to believe everything that Kaeri told her. She was in denial even now. She was just overprotective. Just because she endured the similar doesn't mean it will happen to me. She would told herself.

What if her friend was right? What if Chanyeol was pretending whole this time? 

But her mind and her soul were unsettled, recalling past week when Kaeri almost gave up to be her maid of honor but eventually Sooyoung convinced her. Insecurity got best of her. Her eyes caught a right moment. Byul slipped hand into Chanyeol's hand, glancing superiorly at Sooyoung.

Cover from her eyes disappeared. 

In her brain Kaeri's words rang. Sure, he loves you. How easy we use that word, yet we take her for granted just to manipulate person we claim to love. That's what he does to you. Don't come to me crying when he leaves you before the wedding. 

She wanted to laugh. Kaeri mistaken - he didn't left her before the wedding, but on the ceremony. Should she laugh? Should she cry? How stupid and pathetic she looked like right now, watching him leaving with her now former best friend. Where her pride go? 

Her pride gone the moment she broke vow given to herself. She won't cry for a man. Chanyeol did one good thing. He taught her not to trust anyone ever again. It would be hard to give her heart again without fearing she'd get hurt. 


 

A/N: The prologue is short because it should offer as a small introduction as how everything started. It doesn't necessarily have to be long. Please let me know what you think ;)

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Charlot1081
764 streak #1
Chapter 1: Oh my stars, Kaeri, you're her maid of honor. And you're just going to walk away with Chanyeol on the fricken wedding day?? No. Can't defend you, Sir. *smh*
Teneky
707 streak #2
So many things to read, so little time! But I am in for this ride!
Shrysea
#3
Chapter 2: So not only Byul it is but Lechyeol it was considering his lecherous character.



If Byul was satisfying him over Sooyoung, what was the point to stay with her in the first place. Is she rich or something for him to leech over her until being in front of the Altair?



Death threats are never a good idea according to my TV series experiences XD. Always ends up against the one pronouncing them. Better ignore them completely, narcissistics despise that the most after all.



Would have leave the restaurant after calling a waiter stating it would be Chanyeol paying for her since he owes her that at least before waving at byul remembering her that if he was able to do that to her there is no assurance he won't do it again with byul and another one...



And "Babygirl"?! Yeurk sounds e-like in my ears. I don't think a single man would like to be called "babyboy" right? ...
superpaupular
#4
Chapter 2: Things like this where I wish killing is accepted by the law🤬 I'm so mad at Byul and Chanyeol!
Shrysea
#5
Chapter 1: Yeah! I'm proud of "Byul"!
Shrysea
#6
Chapter 1: Well, it would have been even more fun with the priest asking if anyone was against the marriage and the Byul standing up to oppose before grasping Chanyeol hand and running outside the church together.

I laughed at the "Dude" of Jongin.

Some details would have been nice in the prologue to introduce a little more each character. Like if Jongin and Taemin were Chanyeol's best men or just sitting in front row admiring their wife and girlfriend in formal dress ( no description of them by the way, even of the wedding dress, no color of flower if I recall) like setting the happy ambiance, the dreamy atmosphere, the pride of the bride in front of all her friends and family, her hopes/expectations and plans for the future. All that would have been useful to accentuate the heartbreaking situation and put more drama into the scene in my opinion. But of course that's a prologue and I am a perfectionist and always see the potential of something and how to improve it. So don't take it badly. ;) just advices to improve.

As always you have great ideas and good characters. I'm curious of the following chapters.
Gingerdip
#7
Chapter 2: Not the victim blaming im gna be SICK grrrr how tf did she not see the red flags w her best friend?? Byul is totally a her??? And chanyeol too omg don't get me started and not our main man junmyeon just appearing out of nowhere and roasting the out of chanbyul as he should DESERVED hes so y purr
JaeKnight
#8
Chapter 2: wtfff i’m still here, unmotivated, writing 0 sentences (actually a few paragraphs but 0 sentences sounds cooler) for any of my stories and here you are spewing new chapters like it’s nothing?!?! DEEEEEE

Plssssss InHyun moment (kinda sounds like InYeon)—*clears throat* moment of silence — “a charming guy came like an angel to neutralize darkness in which she dwelled” T___________T I felt that for my bb???

“Jongin showed her that the choices she made were wrong, that her actions hurt people around her.” PLSS WHY ARE YOU attacking Nayeon like that XDD T___T that hurts (bc it’s true). FO readers need to read this XDDDD But yes exactly, “while their other friends divorced, they stayed together” yest theyre that type, they went through /a lot/ so they can surely survive staying married XD psh, piece of cake

“Bunny boo”—I’ve already expressed my feelings about this,,,, bunny boo

Ok back to the main story. The NERVE chanyeol has to ask sooyoung to be in a polyamorous relationship?! I mean sure, some are open to it but like, *ehem* Sooyoung doesnt seem to be the type of person XDDD
anyway, Byul?! The same nerve???? as if theyve done nothing to sooyoung?? Chanyeol and byul is a disaster and naive. Omg, i’m a type of person who cares about my personal and career goals and if my man can’t respect that, he aint for me. And SY being bitter at the beginning of the chapter is completely understandable, imagine your man doing that on your wedding ceremony?? smh

And yes suho (it better be) to the rescue and speaking facts “yall adults”.
JaeKnight
#9
Chapter 1: gosh chanyeol getting the cold feet at that very moment, i can already imagine how much of a jerk he is (and you warned me) XD, same goes for the best friend like wth. poor sooyoung tho, she already doesn't deserve it