A Better Actor

The Scent Of Flower
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Title: A Better Actor

Characters: Yifan (Kris) X  Sung Kang   X You

Genre: Cute, Romance and Drama {Maybe }

Summary: You went to an audition with your friend just for fun and ended up with the lead female role. The movie was a beautiful romance-type film, but the main male character dies. Yifan is the main, and the filming turns dramatic when two actors argue over who gets to keep you at the end of the film. 

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Shrysea #1
Chapter 2: I love the plot and obstacles you put. You could have developed a bit her interaction with Junmyeon to the reader to really notice her change of feeling for him.

I liked the creation of Mmmh song as a pretext to seduce her !

There is a major correction to do since a whole part of your story is copy paste starting when Jongin asked her out, check it out.



I will send you a private message about grammar ;)
DeeDee101 #2
Chapter 1: Oh my god... This is so beautiful. This is what Nini would do. I hate when people don't want to see his sweet side but rather this other side. You portrayed him well. Grammar is perfect by the way ❤️❤️❤️
Shrysea #3
Eager to read this one.
By the way... Happy AFF Birthday!!!
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