Chapter 1: You did well! Having the motivation to write sure is already hard in itself especially if you're not an expert on it so kudos for writing more than a thousand words!
And let's admit it, we'll never get wrong with fluff 🤧💙
Chapter 1: you should work on the dialogues first, its a story and not a script. anyway, it has a nice plot and interesting set of personalities. i hope you take criticism well
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