Part Seven

Heartbeat

Seungwan wakes up.

She feels like it should take longer for reality to set in. She should scramble out of the empty bed, dash through empty rooms, barge into darkened kitchen, living room, hallway, even make a half-hearted sweep of the bathroom.

It should take longer to realize. Longer than this sliver of a moment, the half-second in which she opens her eyes to gaze up at a blank ceiling.

It should creep in slowly, around the edges of sleep, solidifying with every step. First an unplaceable dread, then a fading worry, fading as confusion grows, and then awareness unacknowledged. Fear that is nothing more than bargaining.

But she doesn't get to wait. She doesn't get to hope, not even for a second. Not even for the few steps that would take her out of the bedroom.

She just knows, right away.

Joohyun is gone.

Seungwan wakes up, and Joohyun is gone.

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Aizbox
#1
Chapter 8: I don't know what just happened but that's a lot. Confusing, a lot.
Aizbox
#2
Chapter 7: This Psychological Thriller is getting into me. Ahhhhh
TaeSicaDaisy #3
Chapter 8: Woah. Damn. Ouch.

Was Joohyun dead? Or did she leave Seungwan??? I need answers 😭
ssh2129
#4
Chapter 2: Its so good. But im nervous to read the next chapter. Whats happening here?!
yunita_aulia
#5
So seungwan practically it's a description of mental Rollercoaster of a brokenhearted woman who can't moved on. Woah. For the first 3 chapters, i thought seungwan is mentally ill or something. But when i slowly digest the story, i can say that it's her mind that do the story telling. The key of the story is in the foreword and last chapter, yet we still can interpret this into sooo many conclusions! Woah.... it's just so amazing!
wizi1_
#6
Chapter 2: Why the hell I feel so scared and nervous omfg
wizi1_
#7
Chapter 1: WTF IS HAPPENING— IDK Y BUT I’M GETTING NERVOUS FOR SOME REASON
Vicheca
#8
Chapter 8: Oh wow. This was so well put together. Every chapter was connected in a way that's so satisfyingly smooth. Damn. And every girl she conjured up was just her stalling but never really forgetting the girl she'll eventually remember when she wakes up but have to let go in the end. The higher order angst. Wow.
Favebolous #9
Chapter 2: I haven't read this, I'll read it
kei1596 #10
The flashing of events is quite scary for me and I don't even know why lol XD It's like I'm watching it and it's gone and then there's another scene and it's gone. It must be really great to watch this as a movie. It has a Eternal Sunshine of Spotless Mind vibe that really pulls you in and twirls you around and around. Lol I enjoyed it a lot and how you wrote it so amazing! OTL And the best part of it is....unknown