first wave

something unforgettable
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A smile stretched on your lips as you felt the soft sand on your bare feet, feeling content with where you are now; a small island that you couldn’t remember what it’s called. The visit to the island hadn’t been planned thoroughly, all you knew was that your savings are enough to last you a month in this island. You were blessed that you found a good stay-in with reasonable price.

 

The life in the city have been too rough for you. Too demanding that you decided to resign from your work. Your parents are certainly not happy with your decision, telling you that you just wasted a good promotion as you have been working with the company for three years. But you badly need an escape, badly need to know that your life actually worth something more than just work and money.

 

You heaved out a heavy sigh, gazing at the sky that was painted with hues of orange that indicated the sun is going down; a sight that you aren’t able to get if you were in the city as the tall buildings covered it.

 

Shifting your eyes to gaze at the sea, you couldn’t help but to spot a guy. He was clad in a swimming suit, the clothing hugging his body that showed his muscle and it lets your mind wonder how it would look like uncovered. It amazed you when he goes through the waves of the water with his surfboard, surfacing above it right before your eyes. You knew you’re mesmerized by him in an instance.

 

His black hair sticking to his face and soon his eyes catched yours, making your cheeks heated. He gave you a slight smirk but it was washed away literally when a big wave hits him making him stumble off his surfboard. You couldn’t help but to laugh at it, your feet unconsciously bringing you close towards the beach until the small wave of water hits your ankle. The man that you had been staring at surfaced, his arms was placed on his surfboard and you are able to get a clear sight of his arm muscles underneath his swim suit.

 

You assumed he was crinkling his eyes and scrunching his nose at you when he spotted you again, making you smile at him. Soon, you find him standing right in front of you, his surfboard placed by his side. Letting you able to see beads of water falling down from his hair to his face, you never want to wipe someone’s face dry so badly in your life.

 

“Hey,” you started slowly as you look up to find his eyes, realizing that his eyes hold way too many stars for you to count, “sorry for shamelssly looking at you.” Said you accompanied with a sheepish smile. He just laughed, sounding so out of breath that you found it attractive.

 

“It’s fine, it’s not everyday that a beautiful girl caught staring at me.” He was playful with his words, by now you know that you were blushing because of him.

 

“That is a lie, with how attractive you are people must have been looking at you.” You stated, you didn’t meant for a hint of jealousy to show, but you realized it did when he raised an eyebrow at you.

 

“Well, don’t be jealous, sweetheart. As I said, not everyday a beautiful girl stared at me. If you get the hint.” He said nonchalantly.

 

Oh. Now you get the hint. He was not implying that nobody stared at him; but he was implying that you were beautiful. Nobody ever called you beautiful, sure, more often than not people called you pretty. But never beautiful.

 

“Shut up.” You managed to say, pursing your lips at him due to embarrassment. He just laughed, again sounding so out of breath.

 

“Anyways, my name is Baekhyun. You are?”

 

Baekhyun. You tried to call out to his name, and the way his name rolled out your tongue sounded perfect. Telling him your name, you couldn’t help but to feel your blood rushing to your cheeks at what he said. “Beautiful girl with a beautiful name. Fitting.”

 

There was a comfortable silence after the short introductory as Baekhyun was running his fingers

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nonna_27
#1
Chapter 4: Omg all the chapters are amazing really, and gosh each one make me laugh the first one was super funny when she was checking him out and he smirk at her but then the wave hit him lol the part was super hilarious, but was also super cute..
Really I love the story a lot each chapter are super amazing.

And the last part I really love it because now we know why Baekhyun went there, I feel sad about his past but then I'm happy because he meet her and things get well even now the she decide to stay with him ❤

And well the last part have me laughing so hard lol really the was the best when he say about the hickeys lol I'm still laughing lol xD.

But I just have a question are you planning make another chapter or this is the last one?

And thank you really for such amazing story I really really love it a lot ❤ and thanks for make this for us really, you really make happy with this whole story ❤
keyseopie #2
Chapter 4: He needs a hickey somewhere in between his thighs tho ?
cynthbee
#3
Oh my goooshh! I was reading this a few days ago on Tumblr and I was even frustrated that I can't access my Tumblr Account that time, that I bookmarked your page since then. ❤️ You have no idea how grateful I am right now! You're amazing, liv! Keep spoiling us with these masterpieces! ❤️
alexajjang
#4
Chapter 4: Baekhyun has suffered so much ;_; he deserves to be loved forever!

ps: he's so naughty and y ugh but if I were her, I'd give him a loooooot of love marks to make other girls envy me muahaha xD
SkyeButterfly
#5
Chapter 4: Thank you for writing (˃ᆺ˂)

I always love a good backstory, and this chapter has it!! I think it's so dumb that his ex-fiancee dumped him because he wasn't rich enough, but it's not uncommon. I feel bad that he thinks that love is something that can be bought with love--despite that it really isn't his fault. Slowly, I think he'll be able to overcome that mindset because he is now with the ~right~ person! I think it would be cool to see a scene where he gets confused or surprised that an extravagant present doesn't please the OC as much as something more simple or plain, but that's just a suggestion unless....? YOUR AUTHOR'S NOTE AHSDHGSLK YES! A cute surfer boy really isn't a cute surfer boy without a bit of mystery. Love that.

Your tenses slip here and there, but it's nothing that hinders my understanding of the story.
shiningrubygirl #6
Chapter 4: Wow, I can’t imagine the heartbreak Baekhyun felt when his ex-fiancée to suddenly end their relationship over materialistic things. I’m so happy that Baekhyun finally able to fell in love again with the right person this time. I love the progress of Baekhyun’s relationship with OC. Hopefully both of them will always be happy and stick together until the end. Thanks for the update and happy new year authornim! :)
LittleBabyBreath
#7
Chapter 4: Lol a hockey on his that’s a first
SkyeButterfly
#8
Chapter 3: I think I somehow unsubbed to this fic because I didn't get the notification for your update :-(

REGARDLESS I HAVE SOMETHING TO SAY!

I like the detail with the Rolex (and not just because I'm a for Rolex watches) because it says something about Baekhyun's character--more specifically, how a part of him is still down-to-earth. He wasn't always rich, therefore some of the materialistic things he owns have value to him since they signify an important event in his life. Besides that, there wasn't a lot of plot development I could sense other than the fact that Baekhyun is still this ~mysterious~ guy. He's a puzzle, but we love to see it! He's got a boyishness to him that just makes me feel like (っ °Д °;)っ Things have been going well, and I can't help to think that a New Year = New Surprises. Hopefully more of Baekhyun's history will be revealed...?

Oh, and some things I noticed: your tenses are getting better! You still need to keep them consistent, but you're getting better at it!

As always, thank you for writing ♥
alexajjang
#9
Chapter 3: I looooove this chapter so much!!! their relationship is growing a lot and finally we can see more about Baekhyun's life outside the island. He's perfect *_*

Happy New Year!!!