something unforgettable

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a vacation trip to a small island shouldn’t have meant something more than a way to clear your head from the stress and busyness of the polluted city. it all changed when you met a surfer that was so keen and persuasive to teach you how to surf. not only he was able to make you surf in a short amount of time, he also was able to let your heart be freed to the oceans for him to catch.

 

 

Foreword

 

 

 

You are falling for me, aren't you? Don't be too afraid
To me, it sure is you. Just breathe and you'll be my partner
Feel the rhythm, as your body remembers
I like it, something unforgettable

Red Velvet, Umpah Umpah.

 

 

characters: byun baekhyun x you
au(s): surfer!au, summer fling!au
genre(s): romance, fluff, slight angst, slight slice of life.
story length: three-shot

 

 

beautiful very beautiful artwork by -hypnotized!
(click on the banner to be directed to her page)

 

 

 

NOTES:
+ man this really doesn't have any self ing restrain. she keep writing without remembering that she have like many fics to complete but we will get to talk about that. soon. he he he. 
+ anyway, this fic is for my friend, alex. she was the one who inspired me to write this.
+ enjoy!

 

livia. (twitter curiouscat

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11/17 - 4:52AM GMT7+: updated with a new beautiful poster!

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nonna_27
#1
Chapter 4: Omg all the chapters are amazing really, and gosh each one make me laugh the first one was super funny when she was checking him out and he smirk at her but then the wave hit him lol the part was super hilarious, but was also super cute..
Really I love the story a lot each chapter are super amazing.

And the last part I really love it because now we know why Baekhyun went there, I feel sad about his past but then I'm happy because he meet her and things get well even now the she decide to stay with him ❤

And well the last part have me laughing so hard lol really the was the best when he say about the hickeys lol I'm still laughing lol xD.

But I just have a question are you planning make another chapter or this is the last one?

And thank you really for such amazing story I really really love it a lot ❤ and thanks for make this for us really, you really make happy with this whole story ❤
keyseopie #2
Chapter 4: He needs a hickey somewhere in between his thighs tho ?
cynthbee
#3
Oh my goooshh! I was reading this a few days ago on Tumblr and I was even frustrated that I can't access my Tumblr Account that time, that I bookmarked your page since then. ❤️ You have no idea how grateful I am right now! You're amazing, liv! Keep spoiling us with these masterpieces! ❤️
alexajjang
#4
Chapter 4: Baekhyun has suffered so much ;_; he deserves to be loved forever!

ps: he's so naughty and y ugh but if I were her, I'd give him a loooooot of love marks to make other girls envy me muahaha xD
SkyeButterfly
#5
Chapter 4: Thank you for writing (˃ᆺ˂)

I always love a good backstory, and this chapter has it!! I think it's so dumb that his ex-fiancee dumped him because he wasn't rich enough, but it's not uncommon. I feel bad that he thinks that love is something that can be bought with love--despite that it really isn't his fault. Slowly, I think he'll be able to overcome that mindset because he is now with the ~right~ person! I think it would be cool to see a scene where he gets confused or surprised that an extravagant present doesn't please the OC as much as something more simple or plain, but that's just a suggestion unless....? YOUR AUTHOR'S NOTE AHSDHGSLK YES! A cute surfer boy really isn't a cute surfer boy without a bit of mystery. Love that.

Your tenses slip here and there, but it's nothing that hinders my understanding of the story.
shiningrubygirl #6
Chapter 4: Wow, I can’t imagine the heartbreak Baekhyun felt when his ex-fiancée to suddenly end their relationship over materialistic things. I’m so happy that Baekhyun finally able to fell in love again with the right person this time. I love the progress of Baekhyun’s relationship with OC. Hopefully both of them will always be happy and stick together until the end. Thanks for the update and happy new year authornim! :)
LittleBabyBreath
#7
Chapter 4: Lol a hockey on his that’s a first
SkyeButterfly
#8
Chapter 3: I think I somehow unsubbed to this fic because I didn't get the notification for your update :-(

REGARDLESS I HAVE SOMETHING TO SAY!

I like the detail with the Rolex (and not just because I'm a for Rolex watches) because it says something about Baekhyun's character--more specifically, how a part of him is still down-to-earth. He wasn't always rich, therefore some of the materialistic things he owns have value to him since they signify an important event in his life. Besides that, there wasn't a lot of plot development I could sense other than the fact that Baekhyun is still this ~mysterious~ guy. He's a puzzle, but we love to see it! He's got a boyishness to him that just makes me feel like (っ °Д °;)っ Things have been going well, and I can't help to think that a New Year = New Surprises. Hopefully more of Baekhyun's history will be revealed...?

Oh, and some things I noticed: your tenses are getting better! You still need to keep them consistent, but you're getting better at it!

As always, thank you for writing ♥
alexajjang
#9
Chapter 3: I looooove this chapter so much!!! their relationship is growing a lot and finally we can see more about Baekhyun's life outside the island. He's perfect *_*

Happy New Year!!!