can I forget you

Tomorrow When The Aliens Come
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I finally moved out
From my parents' home
I'm free
I'm me
I'm a woman of the city
Living out the dream
We breathed into
Together

 

Those summer nights we spent
Aimlessly talking
Talking for hours
About everything and nothing
We spoke of our futures
What we'd do once we're ready
Reach adulthood
Join a path that's unsteady

 

Time goes on
Life goes on
I do my job
Come home to rest
Have some wine
Take a bath
It's simple but that's how I am
I like it this way
And maybe

 

And maybe
It's the best I can do
I forget how life was like before you
Did I ever?
Could I ever?
Live the same?
You were always there
Moment to moment
I'm empty of who I once was

 

You taught me love
You taught me danger
You taught me comfort
You were the game changer
In my old life
Of black and white
You brought in the colours
To my line of sight

 

Tell me, Bbom-ah
How can I forget you?

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ckaz99
Completed 2019/09/20. Thanks for reading ^^

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startofspring
#1
Chapter 25: Bomi quoting Winnie the Pooh is such a great touch given that she loves it in real life.

I cannot thank you enough for this marvelous fic. The poemfic is so refreshing. Wasn’t expecting this additional epic epilogue. You’ve put two great masterpiece, the poemfic and the epilogue into one fic. Please keep writing for Chobom ♡

BTW you need to look up #Area51storm trending on twitter now. You have foreseen the future author-nim :0
pandanonymous
#2
Chapter 25: GIVE ME THE ALIENS' NUMBER AND I'LL DIAL RIGHT AWAY AND TELL THEM ABOUT THIS WONDERFUL FANFIC!
What. An. Amazing. Epilogue!!! You should know that the action had me holding onto the goddamn chair for the safety of my heart. Ahh! And all those chobom flashback are just- THE GREATEST! My heart was in a rollercoaster ride. I love the angst and the fluff, I loved it so much! You did so good in this one ckaznim! And oh! CONGRATULATIONS on finishing this fanfic! I noticed that you always like work on challenging plots. Brave. I love your chobom timeline fanfic and I remember I told you that I find it difficult writing for chobom AS chobom irl. That's why I really look up to you! And now this. Poetic Alien Style~ Hahaha! All good. I'm out of words to say. Ahhhhhhh! Thank you for this! WILL LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT WORKS~ <3
ChobomPanda
#3
Chapter 25: Ahhhhhh. I don't know. I feel like I have a lot of questions at the same time already got the answer. For a person like me who's not a fan of alien themed fics, this poem-fic is really worth giving a try. Everything is narrated beautifully.

The consistency of Chorong's desperation from the first word of this fic up to the end. Really really great. Such a great deep angsty story here. (New favorite wahhhh) the flashbacks, the timeline. The rollercoaster feeling of mixing fluff and then angsty moments, I love it. I got a lot to say but my brain is really freaking out with the feels. The action, saving part. The longing. If feels like my heart is breaking only to be healed again. And I feel the need to read this again from the beginning for my brain to function properly hahaha.

And of course I can feel how you enjoyed writing this and your excitement of sharing it with us. I'm really glad that you're enjoying and using Chobom for the characters. I really thank you for sharing this. I miss Chobom, and this fic really ease my one set drought. Congratulations for completing this.
phouse
#4
Chapter 25: those aliens would love some angsty stories for sure.

congratulations for completing this story, all this time i was wondering whether all the abduction and dreams are real or some metaphors lol. I'm glad this fic really turned into sci-fi story and really love to see it was chorong who battling to save bomi, it usually the other way around you see.

anw congratulations and see you on another story!
pandanonymous
#5
Chapter 12: SO WHEN CHORONG KISSED HER AND BID GOODBYE LAST CHAPER IS FOR REAL REAL GOODBYE?! Oh my god.
pandanonymous
#6
Chapter 10: It feels like hell when you dream about something but can’t do anything about it. Lol. Chorong having this repetitive dream of Bomi must be frustrating af for her not being able to communicate with the girl. But then again the last part where Chorong finally gets to hold Bomi, must’ve given her hope of finding the missing girl and the fact that in the dream, Bomi somehow gave her the signal to hold her hands must’ve mean someth.
pandanonymous
#7
Chapter 7: When everyone’s moving on from Bomi.. except Chorong.. damn somebody hold my hands please T.T And dreaming about Bomi, feeling everything so real, imagine what pain Chorong is in. ;(
I love how this is updating day by day. Kudos to you ckaznim~ isnt it hard to write these poems? You’re making it look so easy, (or you’re really really that good?) Hehehe! Anyway! HAPPY CHOBOM DAY!! <3
ChobomPanda
#8
Chapter 5: Seriously, how come you express things in simple words. This one is a fresh glimpse of style for a Chobom fanwork. And how I'm glad that it's you who made something like this. (I'm always gonna be a fan of your writing style hahahaa.)

Poetic and angsty in one work? (*smiles*) I love how Chorong is expressing that Bomi is the one suffering but in reality... It's her... Looking forward for more... Thank you so much :)
pandanonymous
#9
Chapter 4: BETTER THAN LANG LEAV! Lol. But seriously I love the angsts. <3 Straight to my very soul. Also this reminds me of that one song "Talking to the moon"? Especially the part when the neighbours were talking about Chorong. T.T It's poetic and I can't believe the lesser the words the more it stings. I will be looking forward to this updates. Thank you for writing this ckaznim~
Loverong #10
I like the title of this story. It’s unique! I wonder if the alien will return bomi.