Tomorrow's Christmas

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"One Christmas. That's all I'm asking. I just want to celebrate Christmas with my family," Bomi restated, catching Chorong's eyes as she planted the papers back into her hands. "Please? Come with me. Just tonight." 

 

 

Foreword

A/N:  ckaz99 x Lukemadeanaccount 

Thank you so much to Luke for working with me on the idea, rounding out the plot and lending a hand in writing and editing! I can't imagine doing this one without you. This is really a collaborative work and I'm so happy with how it turned out. 

Thank you to pandanonymous for putting me on board for this Christmas Chobom writing event (I wouldn't have thought to write a Christmas story otherwise!)

Also, I want to say thank you to the new friends I've been meeting since writing this year. From the lovely comments to wonderful chats, I'm so grateful and I love this family! /sobs/

And thank you all for reading~ Wishing everyone a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! 

 

photo cr:  8h_13m

ckaz99
Merry Christmas! ❤️

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cbennh_tjsthysys #1
Chapter 1: this is so cool
GrimAce
#2
Chapter 1: Hats off to the Author/s and Editors of the story! Such a masterpiece~ I thought I saw wrongly when I read the date but then "oh! I see~" Love the tiny details, the description of events and things. I can imagine them in my head, Amazing!
So Author, I'm here haha Have I told you how Awesome you are? No? Then, You're Awesome! And I'm loving your works! Gonna be reading your other works soon~ Thank you for writing this! Stay Safe, Warm, and Hydrated! ^^-
ilovesoshiapinkmmm
#3
Chapter 1: Wow... I'm lost for words to describe how well-written this story is... it's really heartwarming... Thanks for this wonderful piece XD
pandanonymous
#4
Chapter 1: What a story. As expected of Ckaz’ work, very detailed and when I say detailed I meant it like, you read = you see. It’s a movie in my head. But you.. starting it with chobom.. T.T fighting abt work and spending time with family just breaks my heart. Very effective writing. I can totally grasp Chorong being all work work work and Bomi on the other hand goes for family more than anything else. Damn.
I’m seriously feeling the pain with Chorong then the time skip got me. Now I’m guessing this is Luke’s part of the story. ^^
As I was reading this I have ‘Meet the Robinsons’ in my head, my mind is as simple as that. >.< But really even though I’m clueless over the futuristic stuff, you guys have written it so well for everyone to understand and visualize. :)
“I’m still here” uh oh. Oh no. I’d go crazy if I were in her position. Imagine the sacrifices she gave only to know that 10 years later she’ll be in the same position as she was. Cruel. And Bomi not being there with her just all the remaining light in the room. I mean all that she worked hard for was for Bomi, for their future. And her not being by her side.. pain, just pain. WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS CKAZ NIM T.T
OKAY HER LAST MEMORY OF BOMI GOT ME STANDING UP FROM MY CHAIR. Did u kill her?! No no. No? Hahahahahaha! I should really shut up for a while and read. This is getting really intense. JUST BRING CHORONG BACK FOR HER TO FIX THE MESS SHE DID. ;(
And she met future Bomi.. I’m hurt? This hurts so bad I don’t think I’d be able to eat breakfast. T.T
Wait wait so it’s not a time skip but.. time travel? a dream? Heol. I need answers.
BUT HEY DEAR GOD FINALLY IT’S THAT RUN IN THE RAIN WHERE SOMEONE IS ABOUT TO MAKE THINGS RIGHT! Go get your girl Park Chorong! I did enjoy that Christmas scene in Bomi’s parents’ place, we deserve the fluff after such tragic future life that Chorong saw. T.T And that little conversation in bed, that fluff is what I’m here for!! Ahhh my heart is warm <3
This is another masterpiece! Who would’ve written such au! You guys did well on this one! Kudos to that! ^^ And I know that I’m late to reading this but still.. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!!! AND HAPPY CHOBOM DAY!! <3
WavingPanda
#5
Chapter 1: ckaz99 and Lukemadeanaccount, this is exquisite! Wonderful job.

I can clearly read ckaz99 through the dialogues and the character's depiction; their emotions, reactions and thoughts. I could suppose that Lukemadeanaccount's work is in those technological details, the futuristic world that feels like a videogame but also, like an impeding reality. I could be very off, but I'm blown away by the incredible job you two did. To write a collaborative story is nothing easy, but you two actually blend together. It's great!

About the plot, I never thought I'd read a Chobom version of A Christmas Carol, but if I ever thought I would, definitely wouldn't be anything near to this one, and that's a compliment. It's an alternative universe but Chorong and Bomi are true their behaviours despite of it. It felt natural, I loved the details about them as a couple and their time together, especially Chorong's time in her apartment, where she could rapidly spot Bomi's absence.

Oh! Chorong was honest to Bomi about her ways to rectify her actions on Christmas day, it was a nice gesture and very hers to do. Bomi being gentle and vulnerable about Chorong showing up, indicates she worries a lot but buries it down. I liked that too.

It was unexpected and I loved it. Great piece, honestly. The time and effort spent on this worked out. Congratulations on a work fabulously done. :')
itsdynesheinzhei
#6
Chapter 1: Wow-- what a very well made. You got a really good collaboration there buddy. This is a masterpiece. Congrats for this one ckaz and to your partner @Luke authornim thanks for the gift.
NotAFan95
#7
Chapter 1: Greatly written, heartful message, ChoBom being cute all along and a happy ending. That's what I like~
A great duo has just born.

I'll wait for more of your works, alone or together.

To Luke: Got the references, you dummy.
KwonJoYeon
#8
Chapter 1: It's another job well done authornim!^^ thanks for writinf chobom story on christmas day
phouse
#9
Chapter 1: it's ci-fi
it's romance
it's a sci-mance!

lol but seriously I like the flow of this story, it keeps my on the edge
Pandayum
#10
Chapter 1: Holy I love how many different idea could be created with one theme, and yours was hella fun to read so great job ayeeeeeee