OK IM SO PUMPED FOR THIS BC I HAVE AN ACTUAL ADDICTION TO BOBA
(its really not healthy but oh well...i'm literally drinking boba rn)
just a question, are our characters workers or customers?
Chapter 2: thank you for the lovely review~! i'm so glad you like kyungmi haha she is a quirky little ball of fluff. i love your idea that people might take advantage of kyungmi because of how kind-hearted she is! that would make for a nice little character arc~
i added all of maggie's things in bold in the app so hopefully that works~
as for gabby: kyungmi actually convinced her parents to let her move to haean for school. when yeeun went to college, she moved to seoul, which is closer than busan but still away from home. therefore, because yeeun moved out, kyungmi's argument was like "yeeun got to move out to go to college. if you want me to be more like yeeun, i should be allowed to move out for college too." it's a weak argument (but that's how i imagine kyungmi making it lol) and her parents somewhat agreed with the pretense that she should figure out what she wants to do by the time she finishes college. and yes! her coping mechanism, besides bottling up her emotions, is to dig her nails into her palms and its usually triggered when her parents start nagging at her.
Chapter 2: Thanks for the review! I made the changes to my app and bolded whatever I changed/whatever answered the questions lol oh btw, i had the problem in the "summary" section before but you had to scroll down under the picture lol
Chapter 2: A crotch shot is kicking/hitting someone between the legs, that's a crotch shot
Okay so I've underlined it in the blog but! he's currently job hunting, not employed. Kun's trying to help him find a job and not having much success.
And yes... his birthdate is also in the app, in the scrolling basics section :)))) December 12, 2001.
I've also underlined this in the app, but I had already explained in the rs section that Kun and Guanting did not, in fact, meet in school. They met when Kun was picking his little brother up from school and the little brother decided Guanting was a friend because he was also Chinese.
Okay so I kinda think I fixed what was broken? Changes are in another color and Kyungsoo has been added. If anything else needs fixed, lmk.
Chapter 1: also would the story start with the various kidz stumbling into the milk tea shop for the first time or can they have been there before? i need to know
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