I love you, Na Mi

My twins nutcrackers

 

Na Mi’s POV

I close my eyes, ready for Youngmin’s kiss, when suddenly-

 

Push push baby

Oh push baby

Push push baby

Just like Sistar-

 

. Who’s that?

“Eh, sorry” Youngmin pulls his body and covers his face with his hands. I quickly take my cellphone from my pajamas’ pocket and look at the caller ID.

 

So Eun Hee.

 

I press the ‘accept call’ button and place the phone at my ear.

“Yoboseyo?” I answer lazily.

“How are you?” she asks with a faint voice.

“Fine. What’s up?”

“I’m bored... And I decide to call you!”

I hang up. She calls me and interrupts my kiss with Youngmin just because SHE’S BORED?!!

“Who’s that?” Youngmin asks me. He blushes tomato red.

“Eun Hee. With her unimportant stuffs” I answer him unspiritedly.

“Unimportant?”

“Yeah. She asks how am I and disrupt our kiss just because she’s bored!” I say uncontrolably.

.

.

.

Wait. DID I JUST SAID EUN HEE DISRUPT OUR KISS TO YOUNGMIN? HOW IF YOUNGMIN THINKS THAT I WANT TO KISS HIM? HOW IF JUST NOW HE DIDN’T REALLY WANT TO KISS ME? HOW IF-

“Kiss?” he asks with a smirk on his lips.

“I- I mean- I mean- ah, forget it!” I quickly run to the bathroom and lock the door. I look myself on the mirror. I’m blushing. Suddenly I hear something from the front door.

“Na Mi ah, there’s someone at the door” Youngmin knocks the bathroom door.

“Coming” I put on some baby powder to my face to hide my blushing face and open the bathroom door.

“There’s someone at the door” Youngmin smirks to me again. I just quickly run to the front door and open it.

“Ah, it’s you” I leave Kwangmin at the front door.

“Hyung, I need to talk with you. Just two of us” Youngmin grabs Kwangmin’s hand to the backyard.

 

Youngmin’s POV

“Why did you do that, hyung?!” a punch flies to Kwangmin’s face. My punch. He falls down, but he stands again.

“Did what?” he asks with a calm tone.

“Why did you kiss her?!”

“Do you feel jealous? What’s wrong? It’s just a kiss”

“It’s not an ordinary kiss. That’s her first kiss!” I yell in front of his face.

“Really? What’s the difference between first kiss, second kiss, or third kiss, or else? They’re just the same. They’re just kisses”

“Say that once again and I’ll kill you”

He grins.

“You’re jealous?” he smiles evilly to me.

“She’s my friend, and I’ll never let my friend cries just because a bastard like you!” I push him backwards.

His face turn shocked.

“She cried?”

“Yes. And that’s because of you! Eventhough you’re my twins, I can’t let you hurt her. She’s special! She’s our lifesaver, and you treat her like this? You’re such a jerk, hyung” I point at his face and left.

 

-The following day-

Kwangmin’s POV

05.00 am

“Wake up, wake up” I shake Na Mi’s body. She struggles a little and gets up.

“What do you want?” she quickly diverts her gaze from mine.

“I... I want to apologize. I’m sorry for yesterday”

“I know you always like to tease me like that”

No. That’s not the reason.

“I’m so sorry. I don’t mean to make you cry. Forgive me, please?”

Please. Forgive me. I love you.

“Huh, fine. I forgive you”

“Look here” I pull her face closer to mine and kiss her forehead.

“You just apologize!” her face turns red.

“Just go back to sleep”

I really love you, Na Mi.

 

Na Mi’s POV

RINGG!!!

I snooze the ing noisy alarm and wake up. 06.00 am. I quickly look down. Kwangmin sleeps with peaceful face when Youngmin is biting the pillow in sleep. They’re cute~

Wait. I mean Youngmin’s cute~

Not Kwangmin.

I look at the alarm again. Something happened at 05.00 am just now, right?

Oh yeah, Kwangmin apologizes to me.

But...

He kisses my forehead?

I touch my forehead. He kisses my forehead...

STOP DAYDREAMING, NA MI.

I get up and walk carefully outside.

The kitchen is my destination now.

No more eggs or stuff... I think as I check the fridge. Actually, the fridge is completely empty.

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luhans
#1
Aww.. It was a cliffhanger ending. but it was really good. :) nice job author.

so what happened to YoungMin and to everyone?
iAppy13 #2
Ermm actually I'm still on chapter 2 and I've realize that YoungMin saying "hyung" to KwangMin which is wired because YoungMin is older... By 6 mins. ^^,
Rini6189
#3
You're welcome!

Knowing that Nami would choose Kwangmin over him, Taemin must've thought that there's no hope for him since she's the reason why he decided to cease gang activities. So, returning to his old lifestyle is the path he decided to choose in order to move on by keeping himself busy. Kwangmin really has good timing to show up at the scene like that. He truly loves Nami to be willing to put his life on the line for her. It's good that he'd followed her when he did to keep an eye on her knowing the danger she's putting herself into. At least she and Taemin get to remain friends in the end. That's better than having no connection with her at all. Giving it some thought has helped her to come to terms with her true feelings. What's important is that she's happy with her choice at the end: Kwangmin.

If Mina and Youngmin were to get romantically involved in the future, they'd make a cute couple. From the way that it ended up between them, they're hitting it off as good friends. It's nice to see that Mina is getting along well with him by putting the grudge they had towards each other after their encounter on the streets behind them. At this point, Youngmin seems to have already let got of Nami for Kwangmin to be happy with her. He's one caring, understanding, loving brother.

Gangster refers to a person who gets involved in dangerous activities that are a part of their lifestyle on the streets. Since you're referring to a group of people, "gang" is the proper term to use.

I ever kissed these 2 guys.
Correction: even

The ending is okay. If you'd thought of something more that you could add to expand on it, it could turn out better with some details to give the readers a good impression at the end. It doesn't seem dramatically romantic if that's what you were trying to portray. There seems to be more dialogue than details. Reading novels can give you ideas on pulling off great endings.
dara-ish
#4
nice ending ^^
poor taemin but I think he will get another girl :)
SeoKyung #5
End ? Poor taemin
kellen_1825 #6
Wahhhhhhh this is acute ending.. but. but how about my youngmin I thought she likes Na mi too. Aigooo to many question teehee great job ^^
NewBeginnings
#7
XD I'm not smart :P
I like your ending.. Poor taemin oppa.. But I'll choose Kwangkwang oppa too xD
<3
I'm gonna miss this story>_<
pipoomica
#8
dammit, she didnt choose kwangmin
but as long as she's happy thats good
CaramelBee
#9
@KwangWooYoung79BF : You guess it right! You're smart XD
@woomin4ever : yeash XD
@Rini6189 : ah ya CPR! I totally forgot XD Thanks!

thanks to all my loyal readers that read this story from the beginning to the end, thanks for supporting me even if I update rarely! thanks too for supporting me by saying good luck in my exams! I love you all! hope we can meet again in another story of mine! Thanks! ^^
Rini6189
#10
Taemin must be reeling from the aftereffects of being accidentaly knocked out by Kwangmin to be feeling hostile towards him. It seemed that they were fighting over Nami like two stags in competition to win a doe as his mate. At least they resolved it in the hospital with Nami in the room. xD Youngmin's still continuing with the game of making Kwangmin jealous to prove that his brother has feelings for Nami. That's obviously a secret message meant for Taemin to unscramble. "Tiger" must be his gangster name. Things must not be going well out on the streets for them to want Taemin to return to his former lifestyle.

Ch. 22 mistake:

Taemin widens his eyes then Kwangmin elbows him, making he smile and nods furiously.
Correction: Taemin widens his eyes, then Kwangmin elbows him, which makes him smile and nod furiously.

Without his knowing, I copy that letters to my notebook.
Correction: Without him knowing, I copy those letters into my notebook.

I've thought of actually checking out "Salamander Guru" some time. The only whole episode that I'd watched is the one with Taemin and Key as cameos. Because of school, I didn't have much time for that. Taemin does look convincing in drag. Despite the drama, there is some good humor in it. It is SHINee Minho's first major acting project in a drama. Acting is one of his passions. It'd be great to see him at work doing what he loves.