Hamartia

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There's a poetic tragedy about it. Four people, two pairs in love, but kept torn apart by powers beyond their control. By expectations to fufil the wishful fantasies of others.

In literature, the term hamartia is commonly understood to refer to the protagonist's error or tragic flaw that causes the chain of events of the plot.

Foreword

I've had this on my brain for ages, and finally it's written itself down. Seriously, i sat down for two hours and scribbled this out in my hotel room. I apologise for any errors, because this was typed up entirely on my phone in the asianfanfics text editor, so there's bound to be typos. 

Might be a oneshot, might be more. Let me know if you've got any ideas or suggestions. 

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haruko48 #1
Chapter 3: Still waiting for a new chapter of this~
corinneniix #2
Chapter 3: you portray yuunaa so well, from their sweet interactions to the conflicts in each of them
mogion too, something there
this fic is wonderfully written, ill wait if you update!
LyonQuinn #3
Chapter 3: I'm still fairly new again to the AKB territory but what brought back my interest is the YuuNaa ship. The way you write their story, albeit fiction, is heart-wrenching. Imma head over to AO3 for the other fics and I'm curious about the Hogwarts AU you mentioned. Mind giving me a hint, please?
drddyynn #4
Chapter 3: you have no idea how happy this makes me, great news for the day after knowing and reading your update
as always the writing capability that you have is super beautiful and realistic
easily can be imagined, especially the emotions in the chapter
really look forward to your next update
is it possible the yuunaa concert gave you more ideas? heehe
allysara #5
Chapter 3: thank you for still being alive and writing YuuNaa stories.thanks to YuuNaaMogiOn youtube channel and YuuNaa Concert for making life bearable while waiting for your update.please don't go missing so long like this again T_T

only 1/3 of the story in... but it already make me realized why i love your writing so much.and why i keep re-reading your stories over and over again.the emotion you portray especially through Naa-chan...damn...i have to calm down myself several times so that i don't start to ugly cry in the middle of Monday morning.

but when i reach Naa-chan confession part and how Yuiri was hugging her while saying,"i don't hate you" over and over again....do you know how hard it is to explain to your boss and co-worker why you have red eyes and runny nose when you are looking healthy and happy this morning?i hate you!

idol life can be scary sometimes.behind all that smile and shinning light, there is a girl, someone sister, someone daughter, someone grand-daughter that struggling to stay true to herself and yet letting the world see what they want to see.and AKB is all about seeing them growing up from the awkward girl that can hardly move, to someone who can make people listen to them just by smiling.

on the side note,it's kinda scary but interesting to see how YuuNaa has grown lately.from the akbingo yuunaamogion episod, to the high school drama, the flirting during theater stage, their oshimeshi duet, the testimony from their friends and now to their own freaking YuuNaa Concert.who would have imagine that?all this exposure give us more YuuNaa content but i really hope it didn't change what they really feel towards each other.as you said, Naa-chan is a professional that charge through anything with level headed seriousness and it's really lovely to see Yuu-chan balancing that seriousness by bringing the cute side of Naa-chan whenever they are together.i feel like seeing Acchan-Takamina chemistry when i see them lately.how they complement and complete each other even without much interaction.especially how hard they work for AKB.honestly i'm sad when Naa-chan lost her captaincy in STU48.yes, she hardly there, but we can see how much she love that team.are they doing that to lessen her burden?maybe because of the growing responsibility YuuNaa have towards AKB?with the graduation of important older generations such as Mii-chan, Jurina , and after Izone ended, the tons of experience Sakura, Nako and Hii-chan bring back from Korea, can we see a different 48?if anything..i only wish for their happiness.
BaechuLOVEsSeulgom #6
Chapter 3: U r finally back!! Thank u SO much for the update. ?
Snacky #7
I reread this fanfic many times since the day you uploaded it. This is the best YuuNaa fanfic that I’ve read. I’ve read many YuuNaa fanfic before but no stories could be accurate and touching like this, very great quality. I hope I could read more YuuNaa fanfic from you someday.
accfpv #8
Thank you for making this gorgeous story :)
I love Yuunaa but you makes me interested in Mogion too!
Really looking forward to your new chapter ^^
byuntaengsicajjang #9
Chapter 2: Just started loving YuuNaa!! And I feel like they're so real to each other!
I love that they did it the 2nd time :D Maybe build up their character now that they convey their feelings to each other!! Thank you for this story!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! ^_^
ginger1990 #10
Chapter 2: I love it.. this story seems real..
Thankyou for making this story.. can't wait for next chapter.. fighting
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