Senseless

Rotten Girl, Fresh Boy
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CHAPTER I
Senseless

Breathe. She told herself. It was a mistake. She again tried to convince her conscience, but it wasn’t enough. Her teeth chattered, anyway.

“Ms. Shin, you got 98 out of 100 points, in second place.” She heard the teacher calling and she almost had a heart attack. What? She tried to blink hard, hoping it was all just a dream and it will go away. But it didn’t.

Standing up, she went to the front to get her paper. “Congratulations,” the teacher said, handing her the test. In her seat, she stared intently at her test score, almost ripping it apart with her gaze. 98 points? Two mistakes? It couldn’t be.

Upon inspection of her mistakes, however, she noticed that the items she got wrong we’re just careless errors. She wanted to smack herself. She double-checked her answers! How could she have missed that?

The anger slowly gloated inside of her. It was unbelievable to get angry over a test. But she did. Staring to her side, she looked at him with a hard gaze. Him. The boy who had claimed her top spot. The boy whose name was called before hers. The boy who got all the 100 items correct.

Noticing her intense stare, he turned his head toward her. Nothing was evident in his eyes. Just... Nothing special, at all. But he still stared at her. He stared at her that she felt uncomfortable enough she had to look away.

She remembered his name. Byun Baekhyun, it was.

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As soon as she got home, she chucked her failed test under her closet – where all her other failed tests were hidden. It wasn’t the first time she got lesser than 100% – its’ happened before. But the difference was, those times she still came on top. This time, she did not.

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[6/9/19] RGFB: Oh boy, things are getting serious soon
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ShanaWerble #1
Chapter 11: It was painful for her because she kinda knows now what he was dealing with in his life.
Noonanunanoonim #2
Chapter 10: Who's that hoe??
Food666 #3
Chapter 10: I don’t think that baekhyun is having with his sister, he could possibly be adopted or perhaps a step brother, but having with his blood sister? Seems unlikely
ShanaWerble #4
Chapter 10: I really want to know what runs through OC’s mind, she really thinks differently.
ichigojamu #5
Chapter 8: Its refreshing to see a manipulative oc instead of someone who’s naive and pure. It’s interesting too; I wonder when she’s going to confront Baekhyun (if she ever does) about the bracelet and what his reaction will be to how cunning she is. I do feel bad for the situation with her parents though and its not hard to guess that she’s had to toughen up because of them. And poor Baekhyun, he’s obviously had a difficult past and has to do he doesn’t want to just to get by. Just his overwhelming guilt for stealing the bracelet is enough to see that he’s a good person and although stealing is never right, it seemed like a better option that what he usually has to do. Its just sad how he’s pushed to do regretful things and how he had to become an adult before his time because of his circumstances. It isn’t hard to see why he despises rich people but I do hope that they’ll see each other for who they truly are.
ShanaWerble #6
Chapter 7: When he saidbthat it doesn’t feel any different, I quickly understood it as it wasn’t any different because he had to act as an adult even when he was still a child to tend to his needs. It’s sad.
SeKai94 #7
Aww ;) When I first read the Synopsis, i thought that Mari Would have been a spoiled but smart yet kinda bimbotic kind of character but I’m starting to see her manipulative side and I rly like how you’re adding more dimensions to her character
Food666 #8
Chapter 5: “He no longer had to do dirty work” oh my god I feel so bad for baekhyun he seems to barely have money for living which is why I wondered why he was able to join high school but apparently he was doing dirty work..as far as I know it’s not stealing because he was feeling so bad from stealing one bracelet so it’s impossible that he has been stealing..and I don’t think he’s doing prostration either... I don’t know I’m just curious about what he used to do and what happened to his family but either way I feel bad for him :(
Thank you for the update!
bjonas84 #9
Chapter 5: Oh. So he's poor and she's rich! And he is stealing for living. That's why he hates her because she's rich :( can't wait for the Rest of the events.
Update soon thank you ^^
SeKai94 #10
Chapter 5: DAMNNB SHE GON DESPISE HIM
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