Broken Heart

Dear Love (A Short Story)
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FINALLY AN UPDATE! HAHAHA! Sorry it took long! :) Enjoy! Comments after please? :)   ∞   So we had dinner at Hae Rin’s house. Mom was really happy. Hae Rin’s mom and mine are good friends since then. They were practically bestfriends. My mom and Hae Rin’s mom decided to chat for a while so Hae Rin and I had to hang out too. It’s been a while since I entered her room. It had the same cream beige wall and a white curtain hanging on the sliding door that will to lead you towards the veranda. Her room smelled really nice too. It smelled like vanilla scented candles.   “Lu Han … what’s up with you? It’s like you haven’t been in my room for years.” She said. She must’ve noticed how weird I looked a second ago.   “I’m just admiring the room.” I said to her.   “Well it’s the same so there’s really nothing to admire. Come here. I need your advice on something.” Hae Rin was sitting on her bed in front of her laptop. I walked towards her and sat beside her. She was browsing for new clothes again.   “Help me pick.” She said. I knew that. She always does this when I’m around. I don’t even know why she thinks I have a great eye for girl fashion. I’m not even gay.   “Uhh … this one looks cute.” I said pointing a dress. And that’s me acting around like a fool just to make her happy. In love, you really have to make sacrifices. I sighed.   “I don’t think it’s gonna look good on me.” She said. I knew she was going to say that. She always does this. She asks me for opinion but in the end she picks something I didn’t pick for her.   “You’re wearing the clothes so you pick the one you like. I think anything would look good on you.” I said to her.   “Even a chicken costume would look good on me?” She said grinning.   “Uhhh…yeah I think so.” I said laughing.   “I like it when you’re not grumpy. You should smile more often. It’s cute.” She said. She thinks I’m cute? Well this is not the first time but it makes me happy.   I noticed that I was looking at her for seconds and that made us really awkward. She blinked twice and then looked away when she heard the puppy bark.   “Oh umm Byul!” She shouted and the puppy. What I’m about to do will be really awkward and probably insane but my system couldn’t take it anymore.   “Hae Rin.” I said grabbing her wrist.   “W…what is it?” She asked. I looked deep into her eyes and gulped. Tell
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Updated at last! :D How are you guys doing?

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_CrownPrincess_
#1
Chapter 5: Happy ending~ <3
xchessthebest
#2
Chapter 5: This is such a late comment, but this was the cutest thing, oh my gosh.
All my guesses were right.
I'm glad Kai and Luhan are alright though. :D
cathyokrane #3
Chapter 5: woah ~ just read your fic. & it is so beautiful
DanShortyShort
#4
Chapter 5: Luhaaaan ;____; ahhh somehow I'm wishing I have a bestfriend like Luhan lolololol okay enough me ehehe. good job authornim!
kitty_se7en
#5
Aww LUHAN!!!!! :DDDDD I suddenly wanna have a guy best friend >.<
Yes, I just finished reading this!! XD Thank you for not deleting this story :))
BreatheMusic13 #6
Thank you sooooooooo much!!!!!!!!! Really so happy rn, smiling like an idiot hahaha!! It's perfect!!!!! I'd hug you if we were in the same location lol!! I cannot express my appreciation for you finishing this /cuddles screen/ thank you again!!!!!!!!!!
BreatheMusic13 #7
Omo! Really, thank you so much for writing an ending!!!!!! I seriously teared up when I read that and also the comment back to me. Thank you thank you thank you!!!!!! :'3
BreatheMusic13 #8
Ah man, I wish woulda been able to see that you're erassing this one....I really liked this one and I'm not easy to win over with fics, I'm really picky, but I really liked this one. Would it be possible to at least write some sort of ending to it with closure and keep it up? My heart sank when I read this update was saying it was over and being errased. Sorry if it's rude to ask, but like I said, I'm hard to win over and I really liked this one. Luhan is one of my biases but I find it hard to find good fics for him. Ah, well...oh well. Thank you for at least writing this much and sharing it. I'm glad I could read even a little of it; you're writing style is very good.
lululemon_lover24 #9
Please update this when you can :)
I really like this story
KyeopTaemin #10
please update soon. and OMG i love your trailer so so so MUCH!