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"See you guys on the set, next Thursday! And Dongwan, calm down on the outdoor activity will you? You can't afford to get another accident," Minwoo using his stern voice and pursing his lips to show Dongwan he means bussiness, then adding " And i like this tone of skin colour you have right now, don't get any tanner, you'll ruin the romantic image of the mv." Dongwan smiled at Minwoo's instructions, although he understood Minwoo completely well, still can't help but found it funny also, so he poked Minwoo's chin before replied,

"Will do babe. Anything for you."

"ert!" Minwoo laughs, bidding farewell to Dongwan.

"And Jinnie don't forget your appointment with the haidresser tommorow morning?" Minwoo handed over a name card to Junjin, "Ten sharp man, can you handle that?"

"Sure babe, i can perfectly man handle this" Junjin's dorky reply made Andy laughed hard, while back hugging him,

"What about me babe?" Andy decided to play along, teasing Minwoo's serious face, "Anything else you want done? Let me know?"

But Minwoo pulled him into his arms and strangled his neck in return, and as much as Andy tried to let go after couple of seconds he managed to force some kisses on Andy's cheek. "Yuck! Hyung, you ruin my hairdo!" Andy pretended to whine,

"Our Andy's already perferct as he is. You are the band visual in the mv remember that Andy yah, get yourself well rested, okay?"

"Got it boss. Bye hyung!"

Minwoo waved at their maknaes backs.

"Minwoo can we talk?" Hyesung's voice seemed heavy full of concern, "I really can't do it,"

"Yaah, yaah! Hyesung ah, what's with 'the man's gotta do what man's gotta do' speech you made just couple of hour ago? How many can of beer have you taken? You don't seem drunk, are you? You can not have forgoten already?" Minwoo sat on the table facing Hyesung,

"No, not that, honestly Minwoo, you know very well that i don't do that! You know? Acting!"

Minwoo shook his head refusing to tolerate, "Kissing a girl is no acting job, it's more like a.. gesture.. or something... come on Hyesung ah, you do that all the time. And.. and it's not even a kiss, more like a peck on the lips, it'll take less than a second."

"Still!" Hyesung's voice sounded faintly desperate.

"It has been decided, don't go cowarding on me now. You're always the most dependable one when it comes to the group's best interest." Minwoo put both hands on Hyesung's shoulders, "Do you trust me or not?"

Hyesung turned his face away, still weakly answered, "You know i always do..." 

"Good!" Minwoo brought him facing upfront again using his thick thumb with a bit of force, "Now, remember what Seongsaengnim said, after getting the difficult assignment, what do you do?" Minwoo searched for Hyesung's eyes,

"Practise hard.." again the faintly voice answer,

"Good again! Alright then, here's the blocking," Minwoo walked away from Hyesung, "You pull the girl's hand.. wait a minute," Minwoo clapped his hand to make some noise, "Is there anyone still there? Oh good, can you help me a little here Eric?"

Eric came into the room with a beef sandwich in his hand, and a mouthfull chewing them.

"Why are you still here by the way?" Minwoo wondered, positioning Eric in a corner to his liking, and grab his free hand,

 "You asked me to stay, you said there are papers need to be sign?" Eric flatly answered, still chewing his sandwich,

after that Minwoo clapped his own forehead, "The set builders contract yes... Oh my God! I've forgot all about it! I've gotta make some phone calls first, hopefully not too late!" He took the sandwich from Eric hand and shove Eric's body toward Hyesung, "You help Hyesung practise!" Then he dissapeared at the doorway, leaving awkward Hyesung and confused Eric for a second, before re appeared, "I'll check up on the result later, okay Hyesung?" Then he left, and slammed the door closed behind his back.

Eric pulled the

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Kawaiinun
#1
Chapter 1: OMG!!!!!!... i had just found out that writting is a lot of fun, now you guys made it zillions times much better by giving sweet and thoughtful comments... i'm sooooooo happy!! I simply lost words! Honestly part of me got excited but also a bit worried, since now i realized that you DO pay serious attention to my writting kekeke... i will surely take into mind of your pointers... hopefully i can always keep writting, and just maybe (wish me luck!) gets a little bit better with your kind supports, but still enjoyable for myself kekeke... and you sweet guys reading. Again : Thankyouuuuu!!
charly_tear
#2
Soo since you politely asked for a review I took my time to read it again and give you a proper one, we don't want halfhearted things right?^^ Let's start off with some constructive criticism-
I would advise you to change the format a little, to make the paragraphs shorter, it would be more pleasant to read.
And there are some situations where it isn't clear who does or says what (no easy thing to write when there is a bunch of six dorks together^^), making that a bit clearer would be a hint of mine. And so you don't always have to use their names only (in that case it can get exhausting rather fast and it's very hard to find the balance there, I myself struggle soo much with it ugh-xD) you can use descriptions of them too.

And I guess english isn't your mothertongue? Mine neither. So I, as a fellow writer, can advise you to read over a chapter before uploading it (after some time again helps too) to eliminate 'slips of the pen' and find a prettier phrasing for some sentences (or parts of them). That makes it nicer for the readers and you yourself can be more satisfied. Letting someone beta it - simply read through it and point some things out (or change them immediately) that could be done better or should be corrected - helps. I'd love to help in that case if you want - you can dm me if you'd like.:3

A scene I particularly liked was the end in chapter one when syung reenters the room and so on; As well as the one after the mv filming were the members sit together, very nice! And I have to say that I feel like Ricsyung are very natural around each other in the scene before the 'coaching' (hehe) and in the office scene, a thing I really adore when it comes to Ricsyung fics. Also during the last chapter it seemed like they've got closer on a physical level before, as it's already been said before I'd be nice to read some more about that~ ^^

And now to my personal conclusion: I think the story was very fluffy and hilarious, nice to read, I'm interested in more! Your idea was amazing, very lovely. And I love how you weaved together the storyline of each chapter and overall with the titel. :33
Keep writing!! <3
turyka #3
Chapter 4: So cute and fluffy... Love how you manage to write the storyline and ending with the title of the song.ʕ•ٹ•ʔ
Kawaiinun
#4
story w/ a pre quel? Kekeke... sounds exciting! Noted! I will sure think of it. Glad you enjoyed the story, thankyouuuuuu!!
nuzwir
#5
Chapter 4: I think i want pre quel with story.. maybe?? I really enjoy flluff or romcom story of you..just keep it up!!
bottledaffection
#6
Chapter 4: Hahahaaha another ricsyung writer XD thank you so much for writing this fic. It was fun and hilarious i enjoy reading. Hope to read more from you XD new follower here