Surrender

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She's wanted him from the beginning, but a twist of fate takes away any chance she may have with him...or has it?

 

 

What is the cost of surrendering what you want?

 

***Read the sequel Satsify ***

Foreword

So I've done it, I've written a story for a member of BTS. I've been thinking about it and putting it off and then about a day ago, I literally had a dream for a storyline, a first in my 10+ years of writing fanfic and I knew it was a sign, so here it is. I don't know if this means more stories, we'll see. It may have been a matter of getting it out my system, but my Leo story was supposed to be like that and then it had a sequel and well...

I'm happy with how it turned out, though I do kinda feel like there's a bit more here that could be told more along the lines of a visual type of thing, but I may be pushing it a bit. Hopefully you'll like it too!

Feedback and constructive critisim always welcome!

Enjoy!
 

MO~

 

Author's Thoughts
MidnightOnyx
Updated for the sequel link!!
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JiLin1998 #1
Chapter 1: Perfect. Really that is such a good one shot.
sweet_taeny #2
Chapter 1: I love it! I Love This Story!!! I love Drama!!! And Mostly I Love You Author!!! thankz for making this a beautiful n amazing story... I cried like crazy you know.. seriously I love it!!
Moxxie #3
Chapter 1: <3 <3 so good. I always love your stories.
BeautyDarkAngel #4
Chapter 1: ! I'm crying like I'm watching some sad korean drama DAMN IT!!!!!!
I'M NOT LYING AUTHORNIM!
I'M SERIOUSLY CRYING HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
T.T T_T T^T
chocolate #5
Chapter 1: I just felt sad for "her". Cause even if Jimin said he likes "her", he still "DID" it with Minseo before.
After8ight #6
Chapter 1: Looooooooooooove this! ??
shuzyah #7
Chapter 1: i couldnt finish this at one go.. halfway thru the angst made me put it down as the feelings were too much, but i love it, i do! were the feelings too much for you when you were writing this? this story and 'cut the cord' were abit too sad - take care of yourself author-nim. take some hot choco with mashmallows :) and i look forward to reading more of ur stories! <3
Snowcakie #8
Chapter 1: Sorry it took me forever to really sit down and read this one-shot story, but I must say that it is really amazing and emotionally investing. At first I was a bit confused with the whole "She" and "Minseo"because I thought they were the same person at first xD but then later on I realized they were separate people. Throughout the story I sympathized with "She" ( which I am going to assume is me?? ) because although she wanted to be with Jimin, she didn't want to hurt her friend's feeling within the process. Further speaking, "She" had to sacrifice her own feelings to ensure Minseo will be satisfied and not heartbroken...- let's face it, it would make us the bad person if we disregarded Minseo's feelings and deliberately steal her man. That's a y move, you know? However, "She" had to suffer within the process. Like, the infinite possibilities is "She" DID actively pursue her feelings for Jimin. The what ifs? And then sitting on the sidelines while your friend brags about how amazing her relationship is with your beloved... that's painful. Now, not necessarily agreeing that what "She" did to Jimin afterwards was fair, and in fact very selfish, but I can understand to a degree her reaction. Better shut off everyone to avoid being hurt than face the harsh reality.

I am glad you included Namjoon. At first I thought he was going to be the love interest substitute, but nope lol just a good friend that "She" needed because I don't think "She" would function completely on her own through isolation. On a side note, I was just playing a BTS song with Namjoon rapping when I stumbled across the introduction of Namjoon being "HER" friend and I was like, "Woah" O.o haha xD

Really enjoyed the ending part and how nicely it wrapped itself up together. Minseo realizes that although she had Jimin, she completely lost "She" within the process.

Really enjoyed the fiction ^^
imjaebeoms #9
Chapter 1: This was such an emotional rollercoaster for me :'(
Really liked it! Great work, autbor-nim :)
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