Is This The Reality You Wanted?

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I'm tired of trying, sick of crying, I know I've been smiling, but inside I'm dying.

I guess there comes a point where you just have to stop trying because it hurts to much to hold on anymore.

I don't know what I want in life. I don't know what I want right now. All I know is that I'm hurting so much inside that it's eating me, and one day, there won't be any of me left.

Sometimes you need to run away just to see who will follow you.

Foreword

This is my first one-shot ever!  Hope it's not completely awful :P

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sass_heaven #1
Chapter 1: why did it had to become reality
ciroxc #2
The feels, they won't stop. T_T
Joyvin #3
So sad :(
ilovesungyeollie #4
omo... this is such a great but sad story
it made me cry..:'(
poor jjong...
totally hit my heart
dubumints #5
What? That is so sad. D: Jjongie giving up...? Bullying is the worst thing ever. I've always been an anti of it. I hate it so much! Why would they bully perfect Jjong? Man, I really, really hate it. And NO. That ain't the reality I wanted!
Anyway. This was good. Thanks for writing it. :) but it was really sad too...D:
oranje #6
ah, I went for this one because I prefer JongKey to 2Min.
first off, "However, is this the reality you wanted?" that is an /awesome/ line. massive props for that one, definitely.
I will say that I had to go back and re-read, because I didn't realise that Key had only been recalling the others taunting Jonghyun... my bad.
I liked it! it is quite sad, but it would have to be pretty badly written if it wasn't sad, right? there were actually a few parts that caused me to say, "oh" out loud (verbal distress.) that means you're pretty good at tugging on the heart-strings.
my only complaint would be that it's not very detailed, so the timeframe seems a little off... I have that problem in stories, sometimes. the more you write, the better you get at details, spanning stuff out, and all that. no big.
reality_weaver #7
oh look at my unnie writing some angst~
hopefully you were looking at my checklist when you made this! :P
phiiee #8
T___________T Saaaad, too saaaaad! T__T
mar1adyve5sa #9
this so sad T_T
chuwichuwichibi #10
TT^TT Jjong waaeeeeee?!?! I bet Key feels like crap :/
This was great!
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