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I just wanted to say that if you're only guessing what the pairing is, you're missing the point of this fic. Completely. I understand that a ton of fics on this site are purely romance, but mine is not, so please stop treating it as such. Most people are okay, but I keep getting reoccuring comments about what the pairing must be and I've given several gentle reminders to focus on the crime and the case. On top of that, if you think Byul is going to end up with Sehun, you haven't read the disclaimer. 

I am going to add stuff in the next chapter that are incredibly relevant to current happenings with Burning Sun, Seungri, and more. I'm not sure if this should include a trigger warning or not, because it will probably have a large emotional impact. This is a bit of a spoiler, and if you're against that, you can stop reading here. More specifically, it has to do with the group chat. For those who aren't aware of the news, I suggest you read up on it, but it's terrible and I would like to explore it further in this story. Any thoughts on if it should be under [TW]? I typically don't write stuff that dark, and it would be only the chapter that is rated, and the guidelines on AFF are very loose, so I don't have much experience with the topic. 

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ackerwoman
#1
Chapter 6: Im being a weirdo again, im shipping Joon with Byul.
ackerwoman
#2
Chapter 4: That was actually pretty hot but considering it's somebody father, I'll pretend I don't feel anything.
ackerwoman
#3
Gonna keep this in my library bcs I love the concept of realism!
Hey_angel01
#4
Chapter 12: I like this fic so much, its so intresting ♡
NandaWibowo #5
Chapter 8: I honestly can't, like, comprehend this. Good job, you make my heart beating from excitement and head hurts from the riddle! LOL ILY
vampwrrr
#6
Chapter 8: Sorry, I'm back. Um, o just wanted to say two more things. One, one thing that I like about this story is that it strips away the genius criminal mythos. Like, remember how they kept making content about ted Bundy and extolling his ostensible brilliance/ speaking of him almost admiringly? You see that also with Jack the Ripper (I've fallen into that trap, myself). Anyway, Sehun thinks that he's this manipulative genius, and he is getting over on the overworked, probably understaffed and undercompensated police force, but those who have met him--Byul, Yixing, even Luhan, though he allows himself to be manipulated--see right through him.

Second thought, I'm really scared that both he and Kyungsoo went to Suga. Sehun didn't poison anything, did he?

Oh, another thought, in the scene with he and Yixing, I totally see Monster Yixing, there.

Um, one last thing, did Jongdae really break that easily, or is that a trap?
vampwrrr
#7
Chapter 8: The way that you write...I can see everything happening. I feel disgust and sympathy in the brothel and annoyance and aggression at Oh Sehun. You're doing your job well.
vampwrrr
#8
Chapter 7: I'm a simple girl. You hurt Baekhyunie, I cut you. *holds up sharp piece of paper* I need to have a few words with some of your characters, miss. *hides spray bottle of lemon juice * Promise I won't hurt them.

Much.
vampwrrr
#9
Chapter 6: *standing ovation* That Chen 180, though! *laughs * I love it! I must admit, mafia/ gang fix, for the most part, isn't my cup of tea and it's because of this! That gangster with a heart of gold trope is tripe! These characters prey on the vulnerable and that doesn't make for bf material, no matter how pretty the facade. I said it once and I'll say it again--eat them alive.
vampwrrr
#10
Chapter 5: Did you have to kill me with that Kyungsoo gif? Oof. Meanwhile...eh...I can kind of agree with Byul. His actions are annoying. He's invading her space and, seemingly, getting off on..convincing her to act against her own self interest. Eat him alive, Byulah.