Chapter 1: Omg this is cute!! And yes the JeTi cameo! I love this!! Thank you for writing this. JungLi is ♡♡♡

Chapter 1: Damn! The comments down here are like essays😅how I wish I could write something that long😅Thank you very much for this wonderful story💕I really love it😊

Good story

Chapter 1: I love how Krystal just kinda yeeted Amber out of the house xD
"Lmao, bye . I'm gonna get laid with my ex tonight."

Jessi just wants the best for her little sis, and I can respect that. Girl was on a mission and no one can stop her from making Jungli endgame.

Cute story btw, I felt soft when Krystal hugged Sulli and begged her not to leave T_T)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: This story is just wow, the complexity and depth of the characters and plot is both incredibly interesting and extremely well written. The relationship between characters is very realistic and very heartbreaking at the same time. I don’t think anyone made the right decision in this story, there all somewhat selfish and to focused on there own well being and happiness that it’s that blinding there actions and reasoning towards what right and wrong in my opinion and that just really kinda sad. So I’m start with Krystal because I don’t really like how Krystal handled anything, she just dump amber and kicked her out like it was nothing, I understand that she couldn’t move on from sulli and she knows staying with amber would be wrong but she should have handled it much better. So I don’t really have much sympathy for her but again I do understand her reasoning and get where she coming from but I just can’t expect her actions at all. Then there the whole soojung/sulli situation which was fascinating to read and it was incredibly well done, there scenes together were filled with such raw emotion and love that I just couldn’t got over how much I wanted them together. The scene where soojung/sulli broke up was so heartbreaking to read and whole time I was like don’t be stupid and don’t let her go but I know that what I wanted was not going to happen. Plus they had already come to terms with the fact that relationship was over and watching sulli just letting her go hurt her and me as a reader really bad. Soojung internal conflict about wanting to be stopped was so beautifully done and had me crying. Also the whole dinner scene was masterfully done, it pacted with depth, emotion and tons of character. The initiations and the way the characters were towards each other and then phone call happens, that was just so amazing. So somewhat after that when Krystal make amber leave then when Soojung and Sulli came down the stairs(after fantastic bed room scene), the awkward and just raw emotion of that what was happening was deafening. Then when Krystal and Sulli got back together it just felt wrong to me, I understand it’s probably better this way and that can find happiness together. If only the other parts didn’t happen I would be happy for them because there really cute together and there interactions at the end was really great but I just couldn’t and I don’t really understand why. Now onto Jessica/Tiffany parts, for one those two are really cute together and they didn’t really play a big role in the story but I felt like they didn’t really understand what going on the whole time because I know they love Krystal and wanted her with Sulli but I don’t know they just didn’t seem to care about anything else other then that. Unless that was on intentional and suppose to symbolize that fact the parents don’t understand the kids and can’t comprehend what there going though, it that’s the case then that whole thing was brilliant. Also dont get me wrong I love there characters a lot but they just seem a little out of touch with what is happening, I could be wrong and I probably am so I’ll leave it at that. Also before I forget to mention it, Soojung/Sulli backstory was fantastic, it did a great job at getting to understand both there characters perfectly and understand both of there personalities as well as there relationship and love for each other. That part was just excellent and mix that with other parts and you have yourself a masterpiece. One last thing before I go, I don’t hate Krystal completely, I understand if you think I do but I just feel like she could of done things better. Im not mad that Krystal and Sulli ended up together in the end, I’m really happy for them I love the ending but to me it was very much a bittersweet feeling to end on. Anyway, I’m done now ^_^, I’v said everything that I wanted to say I think. Thank you very much for this amazing story and I can’t wait for more.

(I write a comment soon ^_^, I’m sorry these dumb comments lol, I read at bad times I guess)

thank you very much ^_^

Chapter 1: Lol, it wasn't so bad, it was really cute, actually, props to the Jeti cameo

Sometimes we have the need to be with someone just so we are not alone, which is what happened to Krystal, she just couldn't forget about Sulli, so she was "dating" Amber. Ngl to you tho, I would have liked if Kryber's break-up hadn't been so abrupt, but overall i did like it

Chapter 1: So I finally managed to get to reading this last night! ANd in the morning, it's finally time for my comment.
I really like how you use the flashbacks to connect the past with the present, it creates a very pleasant flow.
Okay, but Jessica is SO over the top XD You can't just force a girl on your sister (Although in this case it does work I guess but you know..)
*cough*Of course it's Jeti*cough*
Sulli keeping a close eye on Amber hah! Cute ♥
(AND ONCE AGAIN JESSICA BEING OVER THE TOP AMBER HAS PROBABLY TOUCHED KRYSTAL WAY MORE THAN THAT ALREADY WOMAN!)
"And iif looks could burn, the hand on Krystal's thigh would have been long gone" Lolol, I can't deal XD
2Hot... I see what you did there ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Where's the lie thogh? Seriously, I think this might be the only F(x) duo that doesn't even have a single together and it's very upstting :K
asdfghjkl;, I wanna get laid after a concert too :( The adrenaline must be amazing.
Amber and Suzy?! asdfghjkl that's so weird.
Holy sh0-ie-wkfoejrfiojes holy fluffballs. Krystal really has no trouble at all sending Amber away huh? You know... I do kinda feel for Amber in this story :(
Dawww, at least this time Krystal is not letting her girl go ♥
JESSICA STOP BEING SO MEAN ABOUT/TO AMBER FFS
Although Jeti listening in through the door is too funy XD Especially since they asked not to be too loud, but apparently want them to be loud in the end anyway :')
'that thing' is too much though Jess, this means war :K Let's go outside and fight.

Chapter 1: This was such a emotional read. All throughout the fanfic, I couldn't decide which side to fall on. Sulli or Krystal? Hell I even sympathised with Amber. She was there for Krystal, when Sulli was away. And the blatant dismissal of her by Jessica was very sad. I can understand that Sulli is the better person than Amber. Coz Amber clearly proclaimed herself as Krystal's girlfriend even when told by Krystal not to do so. And Amber's loud behaviour probably was not approved by Jessica.
Sulli was the selfless person here. Really, she respected Krystal's wishes, never ever demanding anything from her. And thats what makes Sulli better than Amber here. Sulli did not claim Krystal without her consent. And you made this difference very clear, kudos to you for that!
Krystal was . . . Very human. She had flaws, which I could relate to. Everyone is not decisive. But the way Krystal finally decided to stay with Sulli, her fears be damned, made me do a fist pump! I was genuinely happy for them.
Hmm, you know what? While I was typing this, my mind came up with the correct side by itself!
The right side to fall on is where Krystal and Sulli will be able to stay together, and not let indecisiveness come between them again.
Your writing style is very clear and descriptive, and you make your characters emote through your words, so they never seem flat to me. It's as if they have a life of their own ya know?
The transition to flashbacks was a bit sudden I think. For example; "Her eyes closed." And bam! Flashback rolls in. Maybe if you added a extra line like "She closed her eyes and remembered Sulli walking away a few years ago . . ." The transition would have been smoother.
But this is my opinion. So don't take it too seriously k! :)
P.S- jeti was pretty cute too ; )

Chapter 1: Thanks my dear authornim...want more jungli heheee