The Longest Night

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They pass on through and never stop. The girls her warrant, her watch. Pass upon these empty plains the skeletons of civilisation now gone to ruin and mourn for its loss.

A post-apocalyptic story in which Seulgi, Yeri, and Wendy - three strangers - must navigate a ravaged world together. 

Chapters with violence and/or mild ual content will be marked [M] and given appropriate warning when they appear.

 


 

In the smouldering ruins of the world she goes from place to place in quiet despair. Her name is Seulgi but she knows it means nothing anymore. Where once there had been a great many cities now naught but sered battlegrounds. What she finds she eats, for there are no animals any longer on the land and in the brooks and the streams the trout and the salmon are gone too. In her satchel she carries a great many instruments of the old world, a torch and binoculars and a bronze tant some two-hundred years old. Through marshlands thick with spiderlike reeds and over vast open plains she goes. She never stops for too long. This is her burden in the world. To be sullied with its numb and empty cold.

She travels with two girls. Wendy and Yeri but their names much alike her own hold no meaning now. Before she had not known them but in the slowly struggling breath of the new world they are her only hope, her only light, so that in their bonded compassion for one another she holds a flame inextinguishable, to guide them through the void of creation. She their guard. They her solace in the darkest of times.

Day by day they travel. She at their head, always. Perhaps in this dismal reality they will find some sort of companionship besides their own to lift them. Perhaps not. Still they continue on, and sometimes in the cold evenings Seulgi remembers something her father told her once a long time ago, an old proverb, when the days were bright with sunlight and the skies free of ash:

Hope is the strongest of our emotions. It is the wellspring from which our determination flourishes. Without hope, we are sheep in the mountain. Keep hope close to your heart, Seulgi. Don't lose it. For if you do, you'll be lost, too.

 

 

Foreword

Author's Notes

Welcome readers!

So I've been super busy/distracted/etc. over the past few months and decided I needed some proper writing practice before I start my next novel (and finish my dissertation, whoops!) Here's a post-apocalyptic Red Velvet-centric story that revolves around Seulgi, Wendy, and Yeri traversing a ravaged wasteland in search of hope and safety. There will probably be darker turns ahead, although I'll mark them as such. 

My writing's a little rusty since I've been away for a while so apologies for that. If anyone would like to design anything for this once it gets going I'd be more than grateful :)

Comments are more than welcome and I welcome discussion with open arms :) Thank you to everybody that takes the time to read this!

Shoutout to Musicmoejoe for the poster/cover picture. Thank you so much :) All other graphics are more than welcome in the future!

NOTE: Please take a quick second to vote in the poll for this story and rate your enjoyment from 1-5! Thank you very much!


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EDIT: 27/02/18 - Changed the name from Silence to The Longest Night since the former was a little too generic.

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Thank you very much everyone who has read this story - it's been a journey writing it. It would mean the world if you could take a quick second and vote in the poll in the Foreword section to rate your enjoyment from 1 to 5. Thank you! :)

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iasb123
#1
Chapter 14: I'm kind of late, but wow this was really good. Everything was so bleak and miserable and you described it so well. The cold, the stench, the rot, the dirt, the pain. You used a lot of repetition, but it felt right because that's the world they lived it. Even though it's been years since I read it, I was reminded a lot of The Road by Cormac McCarthy. Man, did you get me feeling feels :'(
Discoball228
#2
Chapter 14: It’s one am and I can’t stop crying omg
hangryeats #3
Chapter 14: This was so heavy, how they found the strength in each other and that being the only reason for them to go on. I am curious what lead to the end of the world
Locksmith_13
#4
Chapter 14: Oh god. Im crying here in my room. 3:45 am. Help me
poplarbear #5
Chapter 14: I expected it will end like that but oh boy it's raining here. Thank you ffor writing this!
poplarbear #6
Chapter 5: Well written and interesting plot? Sign me in!
jjae96
#7
ugh, very well written!
thequietone
16 streak #8
Chapter 14: ohmy freaking gosh I need a moment. My heart is aching for all of them. It leaves such a big impression to me and also ever since I read about Seul's rotten feet I can't stop thinking/imagining it seriously you're description about it makes me weak :( i feel like I'm the one suffering from it. The deaths are just so sad knowing it couldn't be prevented and just watching them suffer and suffer hurts me. I love their bond! Meeting Irene and Joy makes them feel more I guess human? they feel a lil bit alive cuz back then they really didn't communicate much but after meeting them at least they get to enjoy some simple normal things they used to do back then brief human interactions also seulwenri!! their strong bond they love each other so much and I figured seul's will to live is just because of wenri they became her source of life and strength then she lose wendy and everything starts to crumpled her hope and strength slowly fading away to the point of hee just wanting to put an end to her life huhu a is crying. This is just amazing you're an incredible writer I wonder if writing is your profession. anyway thank you so much for this, I need to rest for a bit then read your other works too.
jjae96
#9
Chapter 14: figured irene passed too then yeri and seulgi but then yeah, all the ing death. i am upvoting. off to find some fluff. dang it, good job
jjae96
#10
Chapter 14: goddammit. i didn’t wish to read something like this but i continued on anyway. i wish it wasn’t half as good when you wrote and i would’ve stopped midway but again, it was well written that i couldn’t just abandon it so yeah, i am going to find something fluffy now. dang it.